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although the synopsis is good but it just feels like it's made using Ai I mean every sentence he gotta talk there's a too much descriptive words like it just ruins the immersive feeling I mean he keeps repeating he's cold,emotionless with every time I read Author if this is made by Ai then please put in in the synopsis so other readers won't regret it and it can ruin someone's time
I typed this review with slow deliberate moves, my cold calculating eyes flaring up as i knew the effectiveness that my review held, yet i showed no ounce of mercy as i rated it 5 stars, putting on a mask to hide my true opinions.
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Not cold, calculating, indifferent, cool, mechanical, or emotionless enough. His indifferent, emotionless, and calculating eyes are too much like a normal person's eyes. Don't get me started on how not calculating, cool, and dark he is on the inside. 0/10, needs to drown more pigeons tbh. In case you didn't get the joke in my cold, indifferent, calculating, and cool opinion this story is a little repetitive with it's descriptors and is a bit too edgy for me while I'm sober.
sasuke or hinata or the both ? ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Two chapters in, and i can say that this is one of most promising Naruto Fanfictions on this side i saw. Keep up with good work. You have solid start.
I already like it, the author, just don't rush Think about everything and do not be afraid to change the canon and let it be a slow pace in terms of romance and history
here's the problem: 1. the amount of updates versus the amount of content per update means that it's honestly not worth waiting for. 2. The characters are extremely inconsistent; either have them be edgelords, or have them be genuine; you can't have both. 3. The reasoning of characters is mostly either horribly flawed, or not there to begin with. 4. Last but not least, please put any work through Grammarly or something similar, for the love of god; it's FREE and takes like 5 minutes to plug in a chapter and edit it. Fix these issues and a great work will be in your hands.
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Good morning! I hope this message finds you well. I recently came across your story, and I have to say it's truly admirable. Authors like you genuinely deserve recognition for your creativity and talent. I'm a commission based artist who works with authors to bring their stories to life visually, whether as illustrations or comics. This approach not only enhances the storytelling experience but also helps increase reach, popularity, and even potential income if published. I'd love to discuss the possibility of working with you through commissions, and I offer competitive prices along with some great discounts. I've even developed a script inspired by your story. If you'd like to check out my work, you can visit my profile "VanessaWick" on DeviantArt. If this sounds interesting to you, feel free to reach out to me on Discord; my username is losserishere I'd love to hear from you!
although the synopsis is good but it just feels like it's made using Ai I mean every sentence he gotta talk there's a too much descriptive words like it just ruins the immersive feeling I mean he keeps repeating he's cold,emotionless with every time I read Author if this is made by Ai then please put in in the synopsis so other readers won't regret it and it can ruin someone's time
I typed this review with slow deliberate moves, my cold calculating eyes flaring up as i knew the effectiveness that my review held, yet i showed no ounce of mercy as i rated it 5 stars, putting on a mask to hide my true opinions.
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Spoiler enthüllen Not cold, calculating, indifferent, cool, mechanical, or emotionless enough. His indifferent, emotionless, and calculating eyes are too much like a normal person's eyes. Don't get me started on how not calculating, cool, and dark he is on the inside. 0/10, needs to drown more pigeons tbh. In case you didn't get the joke in my cold, indifferent, calculating, and cool opinion this story is a little repetitive with it's descriptors and is a bit too edgy for me while I'm sober.
sasuke or hinata or the both ? ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Two chapters in, and i can say that this is one of most promising Naruto Fanfictions on this side i saw. Keep up with good work. You have solid start.
I already like it, the author, just don't rush Think about everything and do not be afraid to change the canon and let it be a slow pace in terms of romance and history
here's the problem: 1. the amount of updates versus the amount of content per update means that it's honestly not worth waiting for. 2. The characters are extremely inconsistent; either have them be edgelords, or have them be genuine; you can't have both. 3. The reasoning of characters is mostly either horribly flawed, or not there to begin with. 4. Last but not least, please put any work through Grammarly or something similar, for the love of god; it's FREE and takes like 5 minutes to plug in a chapter and edit it. Fix these issues and a great work will be in your hands.