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I am a fan of dbz I find it interesting how you decided to fuse katorot and goku and I can’t wait for your next chapter…………………………………………………………
It's good but there are some spelling mistakes .................................................... . ...........................................
Alright while there are only 3 chapters I really like the story so far and I think this story will be one of the better dragon ball fics once it gets more chapters. I'm really interested in Kakarot story since he basically experienced his parents dying and then was kinda sealed away while someone else lived his life. I wonder if he will get his tail back since ssj4 and ssjg are the only Saiyan transformations I like and because Kakarot actually takes pride in being a Saiyan. Maybe once he goes back to the afterlife he will search for his parents. So many possibilities I'm looking forward to this story
Spoiler enthüllen I am a fan of dbz I find it interesting how you decided to fuse katorot and goku and I can’t wait for your next chapter…………………………………………………………
It's good but there are some spelling mistakes .................................................... . ...........................................
Alright while there are only 3 chapters I really like the story so far and I think this story will be one of the better dragon ball fics once it gets more chapters. I'm really interested in Kakarot story since he basically experienced his parents dying and then was kinda sealed away while someone else lived his life. I wonder if he will get his tail back since ssj4 and ssjg are the only Saiyan transformations I like and because Kakarot actually takes pride in being a Saiyan. Maybe once he goes back to the afterlife he will search for his parents. So many possibilities I'm looking forward to this story
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