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my opinion, Author you messed up pretty bad. Keep the plot simple and no plot armor and forced plot. It would be 5/5. I promise.
it's really an amazing one .. the story is really good ...I request the author not to abandon it and make it complete......
This story is confusing to say the least, but that‘s probably waht the author wants it to be right now and then clear everything up in later chaps. The rest is good, writing wuality is one of the best I‘ve seen I‘d say but the chapters are a bit short. I would personally like longer, but less chapters, but that‘s just my opinion. All in all this is good shit.
Well written, good plot, i like this story it is unique and new style i haven’t seen before good job author ur cooking🫡💯
An interesting taking on the common reincarnation genre. The book excels at making entertaining twists while having a relatively quite original storyline. I enjoyed it. It also is nice in that it doesn’t have problems that other reincarnation novels have; the main character’s actions make sense considering his initial personality. They’re not a 100+ year old god that acts like a teenager the moment they’re reborn. Writing quality is also a big plus. Needless to say it’s pretty good, would be sad to see this story not finished or rushed.
What?! it's my very own book, what the hell do you expect?! But honestly... you should try it for your self, and tell me what you think!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will be completely honest with my opinion -: 1) system is useless(you will know if you read till chapter 20) . 2) story starts with a high node with basic information about world to understand MC circumstances along with dangers around him and just when you gets excited to see how MC will escape *boom* your MC is gone. 3) Suddenly we are reading about a boy then a girl about whom we don't know(I understand author that he wants to bring suspense but it just kills the attachment with MC) . 4) the story got messy the movement another mc(in game) gets his memories. #this is a story which requires at least above 1000 chapters to fill plot hole, so I will come back after at least 300 chapters.
Spoiler enthüllen my opinion, Author you messed up pretty bad. Keep the plot simple and no plot armor and forced plot. It would be 5/5. I promise.
it's really an amazing one .. the story is really good ...I request the author not to abandon it and make it complete......
This story is confusing to say the least, but that‘s probably waht the author wants it to be right now and then clear everything up in later chaps. The rest is good, writing wuality is one of the best I‘ve seen I‘d say but the chapters are a bit short. I would personally like longer, but less chapters, but that‘s just my opinion. All in all this is good shit.
Well written, good plot, i like this story it is unique and new style i haven’t seen before good job author ur cooking🫡💯
An interesting taking on the common reincarnation genre. The book excels at making entertaining twists while having a relatively quite original storyline. I enjoyed it. It also is nice in that it doesn’t have problems that other reincarnation novels have; the main character’s actions make sense considering his initial personality. They’re not a 100+ year old god that acts like a teenager the moment they’re reborn. Writing quality is also a big plus. Needless to say it’s pretty good, would be sad to see this story not finished or rushed.
What?! it's my very own book, what the hell do you expect?! But honestly... you should try it for your self, and tell me what you think!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will be completely honest with my opinion -: 1) system is useless(you will know if you read till chapter 20) . 2) story starts with a high node with basic information about world to understand MC circumstances along with dangers around him and just when you gets excited to see how MC will escape *boom* your MC is gone. 3) Suddenly we are reading about a boy then a girl about whom we don't know(I understand author that he wants to bring suspense but it just kills the attachment with MC) . 4) the story got messy the movement another mc(in game) gets his memories. #this is a story which requires at least above 1000 chapters to fill plot hole, so I will come back after at least 300 chapters.
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