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I wasn't expecting a lot at first but man was I wron. it's really good I'm actually surprised, especially the premise of the story this is my first time seeing anything like this to be honest.
It is more logical than most fanfic and original story it does justice to proper parenthood should be considered in reality and safety measures taken for betterment for harry potter .and harry has much more logical reactions to New things
Ok when I first saw the cover for this ff I though "Harry squatter the boy who lifted!" and honistly gave it a shot. I have read up to chapter 30 and so far I am quite satisfied with the overall quality. That being said very little has ben changed from the overall story, yet at the same time quite a lot. Because of 1 changed event the story is quite interesting and I am looking forward to the development. WQ 5 StarsI SD 5 Stars CD 3 Stars simple because the story has not progressed enough to give this a fare judgment based on the original hp books. US 5 Stars i understand how hard it is to write a book of any form keep up the good work. WB 2 Stars as stated above the story has not progressed far enough for an accurate judgement. In fact there has been very little descriptions of the world itself lowering it to 2 star. Overall 4.2 star! Keep up the good work.
Until now the story is good, I would recommend 👌 ........................................................................................................................................
Not gonna lie, I was bracing myself for some mediocre fanfic, but I stumbled upon a hidden gem instead! The writing is so beautiful, and it's such a breath of fresh air compared to the usual stuff out there. I’m actually hyped for the next chapter now.
I’m honestly thrilled I found this fanfic—what an absolute gem! The writing is sharp, the characters have depth, and the plot twists keep me hooked like it’s my new favorite fanfic. Plus, the author actually updates regularly, which is a miracle in fanfic land! This one is a must. Seriously, give it a go—you can thank me later!
Ngl I'm starting to love this one lol, it says everything I want in a fanfic, difference way of approach story , good grammar , update stability, there's no boring cliche stuff , and finally the writing is absolutely amazing.
It has one of the best premise I have ever seen in a Harry Potter fanfic, I love the way you betrayed James, and the dynamic between the characters. also the grammar is pretty good and updates are consistent
I wasn't expecting a lot at first but man was I wron. it's really good I'm actually surprised, especially the premise of the story this is my first time seeing anything like this to be honest.
It is more logical than most fanfic and original story it does justice to proper parenthood should be considered in reality and safety measures taken for betterment for harry potter .and harry has much more logical reactions to New things
Ok when I first saw the cover for this ff I though "Harry squatter the boy who lifted!" and honistly gave it a shot. I have read up to chapter 30 and so far I am quite satisfied with the overall quality. That being said very little has ben changed from the overall story, yet at the same time quite a lot. Because of 1 changed event the story is quite interesting and I am looking forward to the development. WQ 5 StarsI SD 5 Stars CD 3 Stars simple because the story has not progressed enough to give this a fare judgment based on the original hp books. US 5 Stars i understand how hard it is to write a book of any form keep up the good work. WB 2 Stars as stated above the story has not progressed far enough for an accurate judgement. In fact there has been very little descriptions of the world itself lowering it to 2 star. Overall 4.2 star! Keep up the good work.
Until now the story is good, I would recommend 👌 ........................................................................................................................................
Not gonna lie, I was bracing myself for some mediocre fanfic, but I stumbled upon a hidden gem instead! The writing is so beautiful, and it's such a breath of fresh air compared to the usual stuff out there. I’m actually hyped for the next chapter now.
I’m honestly thrilled I found this fanfic—what an absolute gem! The writing is sharp, the characters have depth, and the plot twists keep me hooked like it’s my new favorite fanfic. Plus, the author actually updates regularly, which is a miracle in fanfic land! This one is a must. Seriously, give it a go—you can thank me later!
Ngl I'm starting to love this one lol, it says everything I want in a fanfic, difference way of approach story , good grammar , update stability, there's no boring cliche stuff , and finally the writing is absolutely amazing.
It has one of the best premise I have ever seen in a Harry Potter fanfic, I love the way you betrayed James, and the dynamic between the characters. also the grammar is pretty good and updates are consistent
I'll try my hardest to make this story worth reading for you guys.❤️ ✒️