The Demonic Child

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Yeka_Tim

fast paced,the story is so damn eye-catching.

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veronel

The story is so captivating, I have never read something like this before,omg.

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falk_blakelyn

This is a wild, dramatic story with a seriously supernatural twist! It starts with this epic, almost movie-like scene of the dad defending his family against bullies. You really feel the tension and the raw anger. But then the story takes a turn into the mystical with the whole 'three-year calamity' and the spirit protector thing. It felt like a bit of a jarring shift at first, but the way the grandma explains it all makes it totally believable, especially with the weasels and foxes and everything. Honestly, it was kind of creepy and fascinating. I loved the dynamic between the grandpa and the grandma, how they worked together to try and help the Zhang family even though they'd done wrong. But the ending... wow, just when you think everything's going to be okay, BAM! It's so dark and unexpected. This story definitely left me with a lot to think about!

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Daneiel

Love the mysterious vibe of the novel,and the story itself if so damn captivating

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Salafia_Heitman

Once i tapped in,can't swipe out,lol,omg

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janelly_knopp

really love this story,the Chinese folklore vibe,omg

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Krause_

This is a wild turn of events! The author keeps the story exciting and unpredictable. I'm loving the introduction of these powerful individuals, each vying for the chance to heal Xiao Jie. The monk's reaction to Shen, and the arrival of the man with his daughter, are really intriguing. I'm especially interested in this man's offer of a betrothal. What does this say about the power dynamics at play? Is there something more to these characters and their sudden appearances? This is a great cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Giles_6

This is incredible! The story is full of suspense and mystery. The author is expertly building tension with each new detail, from the ominous celestial signs to the sudden arrival of cars. I'm captivated by the descriptions of the supernatural elements and the way they impact the characters and the story. The connection between Wang's unique fate and Xiao Jie's calamity is fascinating. What is this sudden activity in the village? Is it related to the “Breaking Wolf” fate? I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter to see what happens!

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Hunt007

This is chilling! The author really sets the scene with the eerie noises and the sense of dread that Granny Liu feels. I love how the story subtly builds suspense with each detail. It seems like Granny Liu's warnings about the third calamity were spot on. The fact that something so powerful could breach the protections she put in place is terrifying. I'm fascinated by the idea of the old man possessing Xiao Jie, especially after what happened at the hospital. There's a lot of mystery here: what exactly is the old man's motive? How did he manage to possess Xiao Jie? This is a great set-up for a thrilling climax!

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Knauss

This is intense! The author keeps building tension and mystery with each chapter. I'm so fascinated by the "calamity" and the way it seems to be affecting not just Xiao Jie but those around him. I'm especially intrigued by the reddish glow above Wang's head and Granny Liu's reaction to it. It seems like something dark and powerful is at play, and I'm dying to know what's going to happen next! Will Xiao Jie escape his "unlucky day"? And what exactly is the nature of these calamities? I can't wait to find out!

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Steelen

This is hilarious and chaotic! The writer does a fantastic job of bringing the scene to life with vivid descriptions and hilarious dialogue. I love the image of Chubby tied up like a helpless package and the rooster's relentless pursuit. This feels like a classic slapstick comedy! I can't help but feel a little sorry for Chubby, but I'm also dying to know what happens next. Did the rooster get away? Will Chubby survive this ordeal? And, more importantly, is this another manifestation of the "calamity" that Granny Liu warned about?

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McCollister

The writer really captures the innocence and energy of childhood with the grasshopper hunting adventure. However, the story takes a dark turn with the sudden appearance of the weasels and foxes. It seems like a pattern is emerging: those who harm Xiao Jie, or those associated with him, end up in danger. The death of Old Man Wang reinforces this ominous vibe. I'm really curious to see how this will impact Xiao Jie's life going forward. Is he responsible for these deaths, or is something else at play?

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Bray_

"The Fox Immortal" is a captivating start to a fantasy adventure. The vivid descriptions of the supernatural occurrences, like the eight-tailed fox shadow and the weasel's hallucinogenic gas, immediately draw the reader into the world. The author expertly builds suspense, leaving you wondering about the source of the "calamities" and the looming danger of Xiao Jie's ninth birthday. I'm definitely intrigued and eager to find out what happens next!

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janelly_knopp

This is a story that keeps you on the edge of your seat! The tension builds and builds, especially with the whole spirit thing. You never really know who to trust, and the author keeps you guessing. I loved the way the story shifts between this really gritty, realistic setting and this supernatural world. I think the scene where the grandpa tries to warn the Zhang brothers was a turning point. You could just feel the fear and the misunderstanding in the air. And then, when the fifth son dies and the weasel is found hanging beside him... it's just chilling. It's like the author is saying that there are consequences for your actions, and sometimes they're not what you expect. The ending really got me. The fact that the fifth son comes back to life... well, it just leaves you with a million questions and a seriously creepy vibe. I don't know what's going to happen next, but I need to know!

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rood_hoekstra

It presents a captivating blend of mystery, fantasy, and family drama. We are introduced to a young protagonist grappling with a supernatural curse and a mysterious connection to foxes and weasels. The narrative skillfully builds tension, leaving the reader eager to learn more about the origins of the curse and the consequences of the protagonist's actions. The vivid portrayal of the protagonist's unique abilities and the unfolding family conflict keep the reader engaged and anticipating the next chapter.

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curtiss_baier

This excerpt from the novel is a compelling and well-written piece that effectively showcases the author's ability to craft a captivating story filled with suspense, supernatural elements, and hints of a larger, epic narrative waiting to be revealed. It is a story that promises to take the reader on a journey filled with adventure, mystery, and a touch of the supernatural.

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dickson_jahzara

The author masterfully weaves a tapestry of intrigue, leaving the reader guessing about the true nature of the child and his destiny. The encounters with the fortune teller, the curious behavior of the weasels and foxes, and the warnings of the impending tribulations all contribute to a sense of foreboding and anticipation.

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Nia_7

Its so scary and things happen so fast,always keep me interested.wow

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Veronica_d

the folklore and mysterious vibe is so intriguing.

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Johnson087

this is unique,omg,love it,i haven't seen such a captivating story for a long time.