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if it wasn't almost illegible it would be a good story, can i vaguely understand whats happening; yes, does it give me a headache; also yes. the primary issue is the names; 'ji chuan' is the name of the nurse and someone is named 'fire extinguisher' and literally 'nameless.' thank god the mc's name is only 5 letters in total so it isn't messed up... often
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when I read your synopsis . I understood it like your character would go back to the real world and take on the protagonist there. more specifically the ones sent back in time to play video games and it was your job to take their opportunities away.i even glanced at your chapter titles and saw virus, I thought damn that's a great idea for those mmorpg protagonists. if the computer has a virus then they cant play the game. it wasnt til I read the story that I realized the dungeons were different worlds.
Interesting, but something needs to be done about the names ...........................................................................................
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good fanfi .......................................................................................................................................................
1 punto por no traducir los nombres bien. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
if it wasn't almost illegible it would be a good story, can i vaguely understand whats happening; yes, does it give me a headache; also yes. the primary issue is the names; 'ji chuan' is the name of the nurse and someone is named 'fire extinguisher' and literally 'nameless.' thank god the mc's name is only 5 letters in total so it isn't messed up... often
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Это хорошо но перевод немного плох[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
when I read your synopsis . I understood it like your character would go back to the real world and take on the protagonist there. more specifically the ones sent back in time to play video games and it was your job to take their opportunities away.i even glanced at your chapter titles and saw virus, I thought damn that's a great idea for those mmorpg protagonists. if the computer has a virus then they cant play the game. it wasnt til I read the story that I realized the dungeons were different worlds.
Interesting, but something needs to be done about the names ...........................................................................................
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