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Changalo_Hide

Eh will wait for a year for enough chapters to see if it gets any better hasn't earned any power stones from me yet.

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CopperHeart

Writing Quality is not good but still passable Story have multiple plot holes that being covered with 6ft thick plot armor. Story progression is honestly there due to plot armor. Character Design is great and promising with all the crap his given but under utilized. Update stability is shocking at least since its still updating. World building is always great due to the source material and again under utilized.

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1mth
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GoblinMAN

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Cooper_B

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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DaoistSCbywz

Just wish that the update will be consistent.

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Adarsh_Raj_4100

please update as much as possible i like it very much

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Oleg_Nikitin

Поначалу мне было интересно читать, но когда начались эти пространные рассуждения и витиеватые описания, желания резко убавилось. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

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Halvard_Ulf

Daha hızlı güncelleme bekliyorum . Dragon un güçlendirmeden sonra yüksek zekalı zihinsel olarak konuşmasını istiyorum. Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba

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YourDad_

The World Background and character Interactions are top notch but the Story Development ruined this Masterpiece. I know it was a bad decision to Ally with Targaryens but it still continued believing Author's abilities and he miserably failed me. Whatever i guess. Read it if you want the author have putted enough time in this but the MC is not up to my tastes

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Seito_Morningstar

Hey man ! Your fic is very interesting for many reasons but the main reason is that magic is used and the rituals are very interesting. Keep updating and keep cooking brotha !

4mth
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Kavindu_Ruwanara

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💞💞💞💞💞 so far so good though a bit slow. But I suppose it is necessary to make the story. And it was a nice and enjoyable reading for me. Keep it up. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
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Aris82
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as a game of thrones fanfiction this one premise about a dragonlord is new one for me. the MC character is good with a nice storyline and waiting for more.

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Bhrigu_Bhola

Don't you drop! I am already interested reading the title.

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wizard_kitten

Es muy interesante por eso me gustaría seguir leyendo, es todo lo que diré y porfavor sigue actualizando más capítulos🙏♥️♥️♥️🐭......................... ..........................................................................

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BEAST_OP

More of this fanfic. And 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁plzjshsgshshshbshsgsgshshdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdbshshshshshhshshdhdhdhdgdgdgdgdgdggdgdgdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdggdgdgdhegehheheheheheheheh

6mth
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Agora1
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Very nice start to the story. I hope you are involved more in the story and character interaction, as the last few chapters were just general info and power boot up. anyways I really hope you continue the story...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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AlexPendragon

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ANANTAVIJAYA1961

If you do not have content to write then don't write why make us waste our time . you wrote one chapter about him and wasted 6 chapters for your stupid and chapter numbers.

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DaoistqkxYgY

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DaoistG08QKa

Great start to the story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Romel_Rivera_3883

It's going very well I love the background story of the character, the development could improve a lot if he first gets involved in it and the moment of the dance arrives or removes the dragons from the targaryen, but that depends on the author and I respect his story a lot so it's just my opinion I would really appreciate it if it is updated more often[img=recommend]

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6mth
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Nfkmfh
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It looks promasing I will edit this review after chp 30 ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..………………

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6mth
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m3gah1tss

Three paragraphs and I can see the heavy lack of punctuation marks. Grammarly free can easily solve that problem. Ps: how you write reviews with less than 150 characters?

6mth
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Typgamer456

good start can't wait to see how it goes

6mth
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Daeranyx_Drakonar

This is first work so be magnanimous forgive my shamelessness. If you like my work do leave reviews here

6mth
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Changalo_Hide

Eh will wait for a year for enough chapters to see if it gets any better hasn't earned any power stones from me yet.

17d
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CopperHeart

Writing Quality is not good but still passable Story have multiple plot holes that being covered with 6ft thick plot armor. Story progression is honestly there due to plot armor. Character Design is great and promising with all the crap his given but under utilized. Update stability is shocking at least since its still updating. World building is always great due to the source material and again under utilized.

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1mth
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GoblinMAN

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Cooper_B

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

3mth
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DaoistSCbywz

Just wish that the update will be consistent.

3mth
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Adarsh_Raj_4100

please update as much as possible i like it very much

3mth
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Oleg_Nikitin

Поначалу мне было интересно читать, но когда начались эти пространные рассуждения и витиеватые описания, желания резко убавилось. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

4mth
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Halvard_Ulf

Daha hızlı güncelleme bekliyorum . Dragon un güçlendirmeden sonra yüksek zekalı zihinsel olarak konuşmasını istiyorum. Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba Merhaba

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YourDad_

The World Background and character Interactions are top notch but the Story Development ruined this Masterpiece. I know it was a bad decision to Ally with Targaryens but it still continued believing Author's abilities and he miserably failed me. Whatever i guess. Read it if you want the author have putted enough time in this but the MC is not up to my tastes

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4mth
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Seito_Morningstar

Hey man ! Your fic is very interesting for many reasons but the main reason is that magic is used and the rituals are very interesting. Keep updating and keep cooking brotha !

4mth
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Kavindu_Ruwanara

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💞💞💞💞💞 so far so good though a bit slow. But I suppose it is necessary to make the story. And it was a nice and enjoyable reading for me. Keep it up. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
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Aris82
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as a game of thrones fanfiction this one premise about a dragonlord is new one for me. the MC character is good with a nice storyline and waiting for more.

6mth
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Bhrigu_Bhola

Don't you drop! I am already interested reading the title.

6mth
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wizard_kitten

Es muy interesante por eso me gustaría seguir leyendo, es todo lo que diré y porfavor sigue actualizando más capítulos🙏♥️♥️♥️🐭......................... ..........................................................................

6mth
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BEAST_OP

More of this fanfic. And 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁plzjshsgshshshbshsgsgshshdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdbshshshshshhshshdhdhdhdgdgdgdgdgdggdgdgdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdggdgdgdhegehheheheheheheheh

6mth
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Agora1
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Very nice start to the story. I hope you are involved more in the story and character interaction, as the last few chapters were just general info and power boot up. anyways I really hope you continue the story...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

6mth
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AlexPendragon

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6mth
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ANANTAVIJAYA1961

If you do not have content to write then don't write why make us waste our time . you wrote one chapter about him and wasted 6 chapters for your stupid and chapter numbers.

6mth
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DaoistqkxYgY

Ещё главы 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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DaoistG08QKa

Great start to the story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Romel_Rivera_3883

It's going very well I love the background story of the character, the development could improve a lot if he first gets involved in it and the moment of the dance arrives or removes the dragons from the targaryen, but that depends on the author and I respect his story a lot so it's just my opinion I would really appreciate it if it is updated more often[img=recommend]

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Nfkmfh
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It looks promasing I will edit this review after chp 30 ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..………………

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m3gah1tss

Three paragraphs and I can see the heavy lack of punctuation marks. Grammarly free can easily solve that problem. Ps: how you write reviews with less than 150 characters?

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Typgamer456

good start can't wait to see how it goes

6mth
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Daeranyx_Drakonar

This is first work so be magnanimous forgive my shamelessness. If you like my work do leave reviews here

6mth
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