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Bastante original la verdad, me gusta la idea y también el desarrollo de la trama y su complejidad, me preguntó que clase de escena tendría que armar Mc para votar a Tobirama y asustar sus compañeros, gracias por la historia
The translation is excellent, the story is interesting, with humor that fits into the narrative well, the characters surrounding the main character have well-written personalities and do not appear to be stereotypes, and the world has been well written. In the end, I would like to praise the translator once again, who not only translated the work but also adapted his translation to make everything clear, as many translators merely translate works without adapting them, and many do not understand Chinese metaphors or Chinese humor.
This is a really good story, the hero's power doesn't seem to be anything interesting, but damn it, how does he get this power. Jumping into the personalities of long-dead Shinobi, he makes the strong people of the Shinobi world nervous and it's very funny. His chemistry with Tobirama, who persuades him to be less radical with the Uchiha clan, amuses me.
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Amazing story so far! The characters all feel pretty real and aren’t braindead like in other fanfics. The humor is pretty good too! The main character is broken, but it hasn’t ruined the story in any way. Keep it up author!
Es uno de mis libros favoritos, me gusta por donde va la historia y que tampoco se centre mucho en el romance ya que para mí, Naruto no es un lugar al que a cualquiera le gustaría estar ya que bueno..hay mucha violencia 😅
Absolute cinema, I have nothing else to say so I will leave points...........,..............................,.......,,.............................................................................
the fic is like cold water that you drink at night after waking up. Just pure godly satisfying..
Этот фанфик действительно заслуживает внимания. Сюжет захватывает с первых строк и не отпускает до самого конца. Автор проделал большую работу, создав такую увлекательную историю. Я с удовольствием провел время за чтением. Рекомендую всем любителям жанра!
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the bad grammar is messing things up, the plot is good and different, MC is not too OP but there is no focus on training and mostly relying on his cheat
I don't usually put reviews but man this fanfic is gold. The protagonist is gonna be one of my favourite mc from now
The premise of the story was interesting . Jinchuriki of Tobirama . While reading , I thought mc power would be based on tobirama, where he'll try to improve upon it, and based on it , the story will progress. However, it's the same crappie system spoon feeding mc story . Mc is getting powers left the right center, and everyone is just shocked . It gets boring after a certain point.
Didn't expect to found gold, this fanfic was really funny and Author need to add Comedy tags
La pregunta del millón, la historia tiene romance? Mc aparentemente es de la época de Kakashi, lo que solo habré posibilidades de pocos intereses amorosos, sería genial que hubiera romance, pero lo veré igual solo por la comedia.
Excelente historia me preguntó será posible que Mc adquiera más almas? Y si es así será Izuna o otra persona? Ya me imagino a mc sin poder dormir por discusiones de Tobirama y Izuna?
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Great story. Excellent fanfic. I couldn't pick a fault at it. I like the development speed of MC's power and the way the story is progressing.
as of now I reached chapter 65 and can say without a shadow of a doubt that this is one of the best naruto ff, maybe the best please author keep posting!!
God damn, what's up with this week? So many good fanfics published.... The only thing I didn't like is the sentence structure - it just sounds weird, idk why. Even then, it's not really an issue. Keep up the good work ! ! !👺
This Novel is Quite Good Recommend to read it once Chinese novel be like: Chapter 1-100: "Wow, this is actually really good!" Chapter 101-200: "Okay, there are a few issues, but I can manage." Chapter 201-300: "Wait, what? Did I miss a chapter or did the author just forget what the story was about?" 😅
Maravilhoso, a escrita tem algumas inconsistências mas nada que prejudique a história, o tradutor está de parabéns, a história está muito boa
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Is this a good story or not? I honestly don't know. However after the last works of this translator, I honestly trust his judgment and translation skills so I will give this a five star from the start! Thanks for your hard work and good luck!
wonderful fic. comedy is top notch. charachters also consinstent with original mostly. grammer is also very good
Hasta ahora Muy bien, me preguntó que o que escena tendría que armar Mc para engañar o hablar con Kaguya?, será interesante ver la reacción de Zetsu Negro al sentir el Chakra de Kaguya
Bastante original la verdad, me gusta la idea y también el desarrollo de la trama y su complejidad, me preguntó que clase de escena tendría que armar Mc para votar a Tobirama y asustar sus compañeros, gracias por la historia
The translation is excellent, the story is interesting, with humor that fits into the narrative well, the characters surrounding the main character have well-written personalities and do not appear to be stereotypes, and the world has been well written. In the end, I would like to praise the translator once again, who not only translated the work but also adapted his translation to make everything clear, as many translators merely translate works without adapting them, and many do not understand Chinese metaphors or Chinese humor.
This is a really good story, the hero's power doesn't seem to be anything interesting, but damn it, how does he get this power. Jumping into the personalities of long-dead Shinobi, he makes the strong people of the Shinobi world nervous and it's very funny. His chemistry with Tobirama, who persuades him to be less radical with the Uchiha clan, amuses me.
Spoiler enthüllen Amazing story so far! The characters all feel pretty real and aren’t braindead like in other fanfics. The humor is pretty good too! The main character is broken, but it hasn’t ruined the story in any way. Keep it up author!
Es uno de mis libros favoritos, me gusta por donde va la historia y que tampoco se centre mucho en el romance ya que para mí, Naruto no es un lugar al que a cualquiera le gustaría estar ya que bueno..hay mucha violencia 😅
Absolute cinema, I have nothing else to say so I will leave points...........,..............................,.......,,.............................................................................
the fic is like cold water that you drink at night after waking up. Just pure godly satisfying..
Этот фанфик действительно заслуживает внимания. Сюжет захватывает с первых строк и не отпускает до самого конца. Автор проделал большую работу, создав такую увлекательную историю. Я с удовольствием провел время за чтением. Рекомендую всем любителям жанра!
Spoiler enthüllen the bad grammar is messing things up, the plot is good and different, MC is not too OP but there is no focus on training and mostly relying on his cheat
I don't usually put reviews but man this fanfic is gold. The protagonist is gonna be one of my favourite mc from now
The premise of the story was interesting . Jinchuriki of Tobirama . While reading , I thought mc power would be based on tobirama, where he'll try to improve upon it, and based on it , the story will progress. However, it's the same crappie system spoon feeding mc story . Mc is getting powers left the right center, and everyone is just shocked . It gets boring after a certain point.
Didn't expect to found gold, this fanfic was really funny and Author need to add Comedy tags
La pregunta del millón, la historia tiene romance? Mc aparentemente es de la época de Kakashi, lo que solo habré posibilidades de pocos intereses amorosos, sería genial que hubiera romance, pero lo veré igual solo por la comedia.
Excelente historia me preguntó será posible que Mc adquiera más almas? Y si es así será Izuna o otra persona? Ya me imagino a mc sin poder dormir por discusiones de Tobirama y Izuna?
[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move] [img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]
Great story. Excellent fanfic. I couldn't pick a fault at it. I like the development speed of MC's power and the way the story is progressing.
as of now I reached chapter 65 and can say without a shadow of a doubt that this is one of the best naruto ff, maybe the best please author keep posting!!
God damn, what's up with this week? So many good fanfics published.... The only thing I didn't like is the sentence structure - it just sounds weird, idk why. Even then, it's not really an issue. Keep up the good work ! ! !👺
This Novel is Quite Good Recommend to read it once Chinese novel be like: Chapter 1-100: "Wow, this is actually really good!" Chapter 101-200: "Okay, there are a few issues, but I can manage." Chapter 201-300: "Wait, what? Did I miss a chapter or did the author just forget what the story was about?" 😅
Maravilhoso, a escrita tem algumas inconsistências mas nada que prejudique a história, o tradutor está de parabéns, a história está muito boa
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Is this a good story or not? I honestly don't know. However after the last works of this translator, I honestly trust his judgment and translation skills so I will give this a five star from the start! Thanks for your hard work and good luck!
wonderful fic. comedy is top notch. charachters also consinstent with original mostly. grammer is also very good
Hasta ahora Muy bien, me preguntó que o que escena tendría que armar Mc para engañar o hablar con Kaguya?, será interesante ver la reacción de Zetsu Negro al sentir el Chakra de Kaguya