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"My alter." 💀 At first I thought it was a split personality but then I realised it was an... MC inside an MC! That blew my mind. 💀 The writing style is good but I think you should slow down a bit when describing so it doesn't smack readers.
It’s a good read I’ll advice you shorten the paragraphs a bit But other than that, It’s really good🔥
Wait you can’t just Get my power stones Be added to my collection Make me feel special And only be less than 1000 chapters [img=angry][img=disgusted][img=update][img=angry][img=angry]
I wanted to give this story a review a long time ago But didn't, and now that that first volume is complete I think this is best time. I won't say the writing quality is top tier but it's easy and rather enjoyable to read and the author is just improving in the aspect every chapters so i prone to believe that his writing style will become better And now for the start this novel has two mc(first time reading a story with two mc) so it's rather a new experience for me And both of them lived just for the sake for it atleast at the start and with the despair that their first life has offered them,they embraced the cold embrace of death And this is where the story starts Their second life,it's messed up Personally I hated everyone other than their mother and her maids and from here the story passes with a slow yet peaceful pace with some comedy here and there and pure entertainment. Now about power system there is not much information about it but for starters everyone posses a unique ability which they can use to boost their combat poweress other than the pysia which is like mana in this world And each fights are unique and even if both persons possess a same attributed abilities the use of it is different from each other There are some combats which are really different than usual you will never guess their next move well maybe you can, but still I can't and the way some peoples use their ability it was like "Just how?” and it was not even the MC The MC's are not supremely talented but yeah they are talented but they are people better than them and their path will be very throny, full of pain The only thing I think lacked was the world building and the lore but that too changed at the end of 1st volume So yeah that's it and the review of mine is just a view of mine and people views varies so don't let this review change your mind ,I just wanted to support the author But if you ask for a opinion i would say it's definitely worth it and it will only get better from now on(Atleast that what I hope)
Shameless 5 star rating for my baby. I hope you guys have fun reading it, you can ask me any question under this review!⬇️
Hi author! i'm at the 75 chaptet and I wanted to know when Chari will come back? Since I know it's an MC it's impossible that he end at volume 1. Otherwise it's a great and refreshing story! i'm in into duo MC who are brothers right now, and you're novel is what i needed! By the way sorry for my english, i'm not used to write comments.... Anyways thank you again for this story, and I hope to continue following you on your journey!
"My alter." 💀 At first I thought it was a split personality but then I realised it was an... MC inside an MC! That blew my mind. 💀 The writing style is good but I think you should slow down a bit when describing so it doesn't smack readers.
It’s a good read I’ll advice you shorten the paragraphs a bit But other than that, It’s really good🔥
Wait you can’t just Get my power stones Be added to my collection Make me feel special And only be less than 1000 chapters [img=angry][img=disgusted][img=update][img=angry][img=angry]
I wanted to give this story a review a long time ago But didn't, and now that that first volume is complete I think this is best time. I won't say the writing quality is top tier but it's easy and rather enjoyable to read and the author is just improving in the aspect every chapters so i prone to believe that his writing style will become better And now for the start this novel has two mc(first time reading a story with two mc) so it's rather a new experience for me And both of them lived just for the sake for it atleast at the start and with the despair that their first life has offered them,they embraced the cold embrace of death And this is where the story starts Their second life,it's messed up Personally I hated everyone other than their mother and her maids and from here the story passes with a slow yet peaceful pace with some comedy here and there and pure entertainment. Now about power system there is not much information about it but for starters everyone posses a unique ability which they can use to boost their combat poweress other than the pysia which is like mana in this world And each fights are unique and even if both persons possess a same attributed abilities the use of it is different from each other There are some combats which are really different than usual you will never guess their next move well maybe you can, but still I can't and the way some peoples use their ability it was like "Just how?” and it was not even the MC The MC's are not supremely talented but yeah they are talented but they are people better than them and their path will be very throny, full of pain The only thing I think lacked was the world building and the lore but that too changed at the end of 1st volume So yeah that's it and the review of mine is just a view of mine and people views varies so don't let this review change your mind ,I just wanted to support the author But if you ask for a opinion i would say it's definitely worth it and it will only get better from now on(Atleast that what I hope)
Shameless 5 star rating for my baby. I hope you guys have fun reading it, you can ask me any question under this review!⬇️
Hi author! i'm at the 75 chaptet and I wanted to know when Chari will come back? Since I know it's an MC it's impossible that he end at volume 1. Otherwise it's a great and refreshing story! i'm in into duo MC who are brothers right now, and you're novel is what i needed! By the way sorry for my english, i'm not used to write comments.... Anyways thank you again for this story, and I hope to continue following you on your journey!