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Okay. Maybe it's time I pitched in. First. Staring with Writing Quality. It's readable. Though it's not the best writing you'd want. It's easy to read without overly big grammar. Story Development: I won't say it's really slow paced. It might be in-between that. Author's following the Progressive, which is the SAO everybody would want to know about. And instead of Kirito alone, he adds the MC too and shares the plot between them. Character Design: I'd give 4 star for this. A lot isn't known about MC yet. But he's more of a neutral type MC? I dunno how to explain it. He's more of a tamed MC. Other than when it comes to grinding, he becomes a monopolizer. Updating Stability: He updated frequently back then, until he stopped, but here's to hoping for a frequent update. Anyway. I'll just say it's enjoyable to read. MC is strong, but not overpowered to the point of clearing the game from floor 1 or something. Even the outside system cheats he has, is like the more he uses something, the better he gets. As for romance. Except for Kirito and Asuna. MC doesn't have a romantic partner yet. Though Author's hinting at a relationship with Argo. Did I forget to mention. MC is getting a cult of his own. As per chapter 20. That's what it's building up to be.
This is actually one of the few sao fics that are actually fun to read I hope you continue this and complete it some day.
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Actually a really nice idea and great execution. love the characters and their interactions. would like more. hope u keep updating. Great work
it's actually looking really good, i didn't expect that from an sao ff, but the author executed it very well. The character interactions are nicely done and the author isn't afraid of straying from the canon. The mc does have a slight cheat, which kinda makes it so he will always be the strongest as long as he doesn't keep away from the grind for too long. Looking forward to more :)
I haven't seen such a good SAO fanfic in a long time. Give us more _________________________//_____________________________________________
Okay. Maybe it's time I pitched in. First. Staring with Writing Quality. It's readable. Though it's not the best writing you'd want. It's easy to read without overly big grammar. Story Development: I won't say it's really slow paced. It might be in-between that. Author's following the Progressive, which is the SAO everybody would want to know about. And instead of Kirito alone, he adds the MC too and shares the plot between them. Character Design: I'd give 4 star for this. A lot isn't known about MC yet. But he's more of a neutral type MC? I dunno how to explain it. He's more of a tamed MC. Other than when it comes to grinding, he becomes a monopolizer. Updating Stability: He updated frequently back then, until he stopped, but here's to hoping for a frequent update. Anyway. I'll just say it's enjoyable to read. MC is strong, but not overpowered to the point of clearing the game from floor 1 or something. Even the outside system cheats he has, is like the more he uses something, the better he gets. As for romance. Except for Kirito and Asuna. MC doesn't have a romantic partner yet. Though Author's hinting at a relationship with Argo. Did I forget to mention. MC is getting a cult of his own. As per chapter 20. That's what it's building up to be.
This is actually one of the few sao fics that are actually fun to read I hope you continue this and complete it some day.
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Actually a really nice idea and great execution. love the characters and their interactions. would like more. hope u keep updating. Great work
it's actually looking really good, i didn't expect that from an sao ff, but the author executed it very well. The character interactions are nicely done and the author isn't afraid of straying from the canon. The mc does have a slight cheat, which kinda makes it so he will always be the strongest as long as he doesn't keep away from the grind for too long. Looking forward to more :)
I haven't seen such a good SAO fanfic in a long time. Give us more _________________________//_____________________________________________
it's... it's just so peak... RRRRAAAAAHHHHH