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I really love the novel but I don't have money to pay for the chapters does anyone know where I can read the novel for free 🥺🙏🥺🥺😢😢
The MC started as naive at first, 1st volume ending was rushed. But I am liking the story it is going. Hope author keeps it up.
everything is good ... except that stupid mc even with that kind of CHEAT ... he can't use it efficiently and think like a kid.. there is no way he will get stronger with that stupidity .. his strength is only enought to slaughter beasts
The first chapter is the best written one. Afterwards not only does the writing lose quality, but the characters and situations develop too fast. The MC is annoyingly dumb... As an extra the author is incosistent with things such as the level of skills and explanations, never explained what does the skill level actually represent or affect. Oh and the MC is reincarnated but somehow knows things such as family A is very renowned and amazing, level 40 is very OP etc...
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Slight Spoilers. Stop looking now if you don't want to know. Also I finished 72 Chapters and wanted to give my two cents. Chapters 1-72 of Volume 1 is basically the end of the story. Chapters 73 (Volume 2) and onward is basically a new MC. I'm not even joking. I don't have much to say about the MC. He's kind of a wimp or if I had to be nice I'd say he is a wallflower. He gets 3 skills to choose from and you'd think he would use it more wisely but he doesn't. Now I don't want to be rude but in synthesis skill type of novels the Author is the one who makes it work or doesn't. Unfortunately it takes the kid way too long and to top it off he's basically a weakling for a pretty long time. His skill set should be something he can use to make himself overpowered rather quickly. Sadly instead we get what feels like a 12 year old who just hit puberty and lacks some intelligence. I'm not trying to be rude but the MC for the Chapters 1-72 is basically slow. Chapters 73 and onwards on the otherhand. I'll just say it feels like he just got introduced to Linkin Park, Green Day and Paramore and thought wearing mascara and dark clothes made him cool. If you didn't get it he's basically just Edgy. I can't exactly say it's wrong for him to get like that but it certainly feels like we just got introduced to a new Main Character. Right now I can't recommend it to friends. Score: 5.9 Out of 10 Personal Score: N/A. You don't want to know my real Score.
I didn't have many expectations because of all the comments, although I agree with the part about him being naive at the beginning when he was an adult, for my personal taste I hate cheerful characters like his partner's sister and the innkeeper's daughter, I totally despise those characters, in the part of the transition to the demonic world I didn't understand how it happened I think it's like a part was cut off, since it doesn't explain why he's no longer Ethan, anyway I like his current personality and how he's developing his own strengths, I hope he also starts to open up to Bella, while she stops wanting to manipulate him and falls in love with him, without more to say thanks to the author for this story.
I like the story and development. I do see what everyone else is saying with the dumb protagonist comments. My first thought when looking at the skills he chose is that we are looking at a skill synthesis story, yet the protagonist, who claims to be thinking about potential skill combinations when selecting them, turns around and acts suprised when he can synthesis skills. What really bothers me is you build character on all these side characters and then you deus ex machina them to die. Just bam dead. Felt very forced, like you as the author got a little bored with all your characters and decided to scrap them while keeping the plot.
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Maybe the story has potential maybe not. The thing is MC is way too dumb and I just hate such type of MC.
hey author congrats on your story but I'd like to ask, why does it feel like your mc is dumb . I mean he's in a fantasy world where the strong prey on the weak and he's weak right now so shouldn't the right choice in this situation be to increase his strength by leveraging on his current acquaintances instead of jumping headfirst into situations without thinking for god sake he was a 30 year old b4 reincarnation so shouldn't common sense make him u know a little distrustful of people's intentions instead of him taking things at face value. I'm really frustrated because I like your writing but the story is just unrealistic. it's like a fairy tale where everyone is kind to each other. sorry about the yapping but i just hate indecisive naive mc's
Overall a nice read. Interesting skills and abilities and world background. I Hope to see him growing very powerful like Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse, that would be nice, if possible 😊
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A classic book with a nice concept of his own. It is worth reading. Is it a Harem? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A perfect start of a new concept novel. there are no grammar mistakes that can irritate a reader. May be this is a new concept, because i did not read anything like this
The story is very good with good world buliding and interesting characters. but author should increase the word counts of chapters (they are too short) [{Suggestion}] ≈ ✓) If mc & others get laws in future I think this will be the perfect combination for their personality, current power, character wise. Mc : [ Space, Time, Void, Energy, Lighting, Force (forces including gravity magnetism...), Cosmos (like quasar, cosmic energy, radiation...) ] Bella : [ Moon, Darkness, Mind, Fire ] Aria : [ Sun, Light, Shadow, Nature ] Other characters : [ ice, wind, water, earth, sound, blood, wood, metal, poison, corruption ] {You can decrease or change laws for Fml & others but MC's combination is perfect I think.} ✓) If mc gets all laws exist that will be too boaring because he will be too overpowered & readers can't see the full potential of all his laws. so that's why I suggest this combination. This way we can watch the full potential of all laws respectively & the others also stand side by side/against with mc in near future ✓) assimilate same manipulation type skill into same law to increase proficiency (like fire manipulation skill will automatically assimilate to fire law) ✓) limit the number of laws one can have (like mc can wield 7 because his vast soul but others can only wield limited no of laws) ✓) Please explain some power dynamic their were cases when author just skip them (like sub skills, assimilation of same skill, condition for synthesis, the power increase in unique skill related to mc level etc) If you keep this mind in future the novel will get more interesting for readers in my opinion.
I really love the novel but I don't have money to pay for the chapters does anyone know where I can read the novel for free 🥺🙏🥺🥺😢😢
The MC started as naive at first, 1st volume ending was rushed. But I am liking the story it is going. Hope author keeps it up.
everything is good ... except that stupid mc even with that kind of CHEAT ... he can't use it efficiently and think like a kid.. there is no way he will get stronger with that stupidity .. his strength is only enought to slaughter beasts
The first chapter is the best written one. Afterwards not only does the writing lose quality, but the characters and situations develop too fast. The MC is annoyingly dumb... As an extra the author is incosistent with things such as the level of skills and explanations, never explained what does the skill level actually represent or affect. Oh and the MC is reincarnated but somehow knows things such as family A is very renowned and amazing, level 40 is very OP etc...
Spoiler enthüllen Slight Spoilers. Stop looking now if you don't want to know. Also I finished 72 Chapters and wanted to give my two cents. Chapters 1-72 of Volume 1 is basically the end of the story. Chapters 73 (Volume 2) and onward is basically a new MC. I'm not even joking. I don't have much to say about the MC. He's kind of a wimp or if I had to be nice I'd say he is a wallflower. He gets 3 skills to choose from and you'd think he would use it more wisely but he doesn't. Now I don't want to be rude but in synthesis skill type of novels the Author is the one who makes it work or doesn't. Unfortunately it takes the kid way too long and to top it off he's basically a weakling for a pretty long time. His skill set should be something he can use to make himself overpowered rather quickly. Sadly instead we get what feels like a 12 year old who just hit puberty and lacks some intelligence. I'm not trying to be rude but the MC for the Chapters 1-72 is basically slow. Chapters 73 and onwards on the otherhand. I'll just say it feels like he just got introduced to Linkin Park, Green Day and Paramore and thought wearing mascara and dark clothes made him cool. If you didn't get it he's basically just Edgy. I can't exactly say it's wrong for him to get like that but it certainly feels like we just got introduced to a new Main Character. Right now I can't recommend it to friends. Score: 5.9 Out of 10 Personal Score: N/A. You don't want to know my real Score.
I didn't have many expectations because of all the comments, although I agree with the part about him being naive at the beginning when he was an adult, for my personal taste I hate cheerful characters like his partner's sister and the innkeeper's daughter, I totally despise those characters, in the part of the transition to the demonic world I didn't understand how it happened I think it's like a part was cut off, since it doesn't explain why he's no longer Ethan, anyway I like his current personality and how he's developing his own strengths, I hope he also starts to open up to Bella, while she stops wanting to manipulate him and falls in love with him, without more to say thanks to the author for this story.
I like the story and development. I do see what everyone else is saying with the dumb protagonist comments. My first thought when looking at the skills he chose is that we are looking at a skill synthesis story, yet the protagonist, who claims to be thinking about potential skill combinations when selecting them, turns around and acts suprised when he can synthesis skills. What really bothers me is you build character on all these side characters and then you deus ex machina them to die. Just bam dead. Felt very forced, like you as the author got a little bored with all your characters and decided to scrap them while keeping the plot.
Spoiler enthüllen Maybe the story has potential maybe not. The thing is MC is way too dumb and I just hate such type of MC.
hey author congrats on your story but I'd like to ask, why does it feel like your mc is dumb . I mean he's in a fantasy world where the strong prey on the weak and he's weak right now so shouldn't the right choice in this situation be to increase his strength by leveraging on his current acquaintances instead of jumping headfirst into situations without thinking for god sake he was a 30 year old b4 reincarnation so shouldn't common sense make him u know a little distrustful of people's intentions instead of him taking things at face value. I'm really frustrated because I like your writing but the story is just unrealistic. it's like a fairy tale where everyone is kind to each other. sorry about the yapping but i just hate indecisive naive mc's
Overall a nice read. Interesting skills and abilities and world background. I Hope to see him growing very powerful like Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse, that would be nice, if possible 😊
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
A classic book with a nice concept of his own. It is worth reading. Is it a Harem? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A perfect start of a new concept novel. there are no grammar mistakes that can irritate a reader. May be this is a new concept, because i did not read anything like this
The story is very good with good world buliding and interesting characters. but author should increase the word counts of chapters (they are too short) [{Suggestion}] ≈ ✓) If mc & others get laws in future I think this will be the perfect combination for their personality, current power, character wise. Mc : [ Space, Time, Void, Energy, Lighting, Force (forces including gravity magnetism...), Cosmos (like quasar, cosmic energy, radiation...) ] Bella : [ Moon, Darkness, Mind, Fire ] Aria : [ Sun, Light, Shadow, Nature ] Other characters : [ ice, wind, water, earth, sound, blood, wood, metal, poison, corruption ] {You can decrease or change laws for Fml & others but MC's combination is perfect I think.} ✓) If mc gets all laws exist that will be too boaring because he will be too overpowered & readers can't see the full potential of all his laws. so that's why I suggest this combination. This way we can watch the full potential of all laws respectively & the others also stand side by side/against with mc in near future ✓) assimilate same manipulation type skill into same law to increase proficiency (like fire manipulation skill will automatically assimilate to fire law) ✓) limit the number of laws one can have (like mc can wield 7 because his vast soul but others can only wield limited no of laws) ✓) Please explain some power dynamic their were cases when author just skip them (like sub skills, assimilation of same skill, condition for synthesis, the power increase in unique skill related to mc level etc) If you keep this mind in future the novel will get more interesting for readers in my opinion.