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First of all, AUTHOR must be an INDIAN TEENAGER AND I CAN PROVE IT. It seems he focused on making this story as cringe as possible. Just starting, we are presented with the name 'amon sinclair', which already spoke volumes of how childish this story would be. However, its quality is still nice, something very confusing, as never in my wildest dream would i have imagined a story written by a chunibyo would be good. But the character development and their overall quality are the worst Ive ever seen, and consistent with my initial thesis: an alleged manipulator who makes every thing he does as embarassing as possible for any one mature enough or not indian . Finally, i believe the author made a pact with the devil who in turn has bestowed him with all the magnificence of his indian ancestor's cringiness to write these bullshit characters
Really good history but unfortunatly author sometimes drop the history for a long time((
Overall it's good.. but I don't know whether this novel will continue or not. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Acabo de terminar de leerlo y diré que no está mal podría ser mejor pero es bastante aceptable y la ortografía bastante buena ,el cambio del mc aunque un poco apresurado especialmente lo que pasó en los últimos 3 capitulos uno pensaría que el mc se encargaria de ellos más discreto pero no está mal denle la oportunidad lean al menos 20 capitulos 👌🍿
Well Mc's actions and the interactions in the chapters seemed quite forced. But it's readable, and has its interesting stuff. I would just tell you to give it a try and see if you are interested in following the story.
This is amazing, read up to chapter 40 and it has all the things I love, including an intelligent, yet not fully cold hearted MC. Great characterisation of the cast as well :)
So far one of the best if not the best fanfic I have ever read. The main character actually grows and develops and the side characters are all written in a way that makes them more interesting the more you get to know them. Not to mention the plot and other elements. A checklist of good qualities: - MC who isn’t stupid or crazily op that one shots every thing - side characters with genuine personality - no op cheats - doesn’t have many plot holes - powers are well thought out and explained
Thanks for the update, love the status of the updating, love the story development, love the character development, love the world background, I loved everything overall
I love the system and the mc is pretty smart and calm if over analytical in things that don’t matter much. Everything gets explained in an over the top manner. Like I don’t need to know this much to the point that every character gets over analyzed in every interaction with the Mc. Too much explaining and monologuing in my opinion were it feel like you just whent through 5k words but all that happen was that they went to the arcade played games and Isuku played wingman for kaminari. The mc isn’t my cup of tea as I do like smart characters but when it gets to the point we’re everything is getting over analyzed for no reason at all multiple times with no actual reasoning behind it, it just makes it seem pointless and a waste of time, I could have skipped some chapters and gone to the next chapter and I would’ve missed almost nothing.
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I’m eating high because obviously I love this FF. However my one and only problem, is that I’ve become addicted to this story. And now have to wait for new chapters 😂 Keep it up, this is amazing and I love your way of writing, incorporating the characters personas into how you right, I can literally feel Aizawas exhaustion when reading his lines. Can’t wait for more chapters! Need my fix!!!
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Pretty good read. Binge read it until the latest. There's some boring parts because some of the canon still happened despite the butterfly effect but it's bearable. Mc was likeable, good but not too much. He put up a mask but so far, he doesn't look like one that will turn evil. Romance was done well imo. It builds up pretty well and not just s*x after one chapter.
No yuri in harem sect member here I just want to kindly ask Author kun if there’s yuri in harem in this fic??
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Maldito peak de literatura , no hay cosas estupidas no hay quejas de escritura ni de tramas todo es perfecto y como tal debió volverse cañón si el autor no fuera un reverendo pdjo com P
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Really unique take on MHA with instead of the MC wanting to be a hero he is a mastermind and is cool and calculating
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Holy shit this is some beautiful writing and I like the system it isn't complicated to understand and the way the MC uses OFA is also genius even though he knew how its supposed to be used from the anime
The story is interesting and I like it. The title of the story is perfect, Adaptation, it is not only about the hero's abilities, but also his personality. The hero develops as the story progresses and becomes more humane, although at first he is like a robot who calculating everything and plans without feelings. His past is also gradually revealed, which explains his character. Although at first I was tired of his manipulating character, as the story progressed, I realized that the hero was also adapting to his new life. The only thing is, I hope his development as a person will not be too drawn out, judging by the current pace of the story it will end somewhere in 300 chapters, and it would be too harsh if his moment of catharsis comes only at the end
I am enjoying the story so far, and I recommend it to anyone who wants to read something well-written. the only thing that I can complain about is that I don't know where this is going. I would like to know if he will be a villain, an antihero, or a hero, but I will keep reading to have my answer.
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hello thare, i just added this story to my collection, and i have few questions i wanted to Ask you about, btw will Kyoka become his girlfriend?
Till now, I have loved the progress of MC's powers and his character. He isn't OP but he isn't average either and he is growing gradually which means that you aren't going to see an extremely OP character in just 10 chapters. (Something I don't want to see either as it makes the story a little boring.) The only two things that I feel a little weird about are his constant monologue and sometimes his conversation with other characters. (It feels quite weird the way, they talk) Overall, it's one of the best MHA fanfics and I hope the author writes it till the end.
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.
First of all, AUTHOR must be an INDIAN TEENAGER AND I CAN PROVE IT. It seems he focused on making this story as cringe as possible. Just starting, we are presented with the name 'amon sinclair', which already spoke volumes of how childish this story would be. However, its quality is still nice, something very confusing, as never in my wildest dream would i have imagined a story written by a chunibyo would be good. But the character development and their overall quality are the worst Ive ever seen, and consistent with my initial thesis: an alleged manipulator who makes every thing he does as embarassing as possible for any one mature enough or not indian . Finally, i believe the author made a pact with the devil who in turn has bestowed him with all the magnificence of his indian ancestor's cringiness to write these bullshit characters
Really good history but unfortunatly author sometimes drop the history for a long time((
Overall it's good.. but I don't know whether this novel will continue or not. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Acabo de terminar de leerlo y diré que no está mal podría ser mejor pero es bastante aceptable y la ortografía bastante buena ,el cambio del mc aunque un poco apresurado especialmente lo que pasó en los últimos 3 capitulos uno pensaría que el mc se encargaria de ellos más discreto pero no está mal denle la oportunidad lean al menos 20 capitulos 👌🍿
Well Mc's actions and the interactions in the chapters seemed quite forced. But it's readable, and has its interesting stuff. I would just tell you to give it a try and see if you are interested in following the story.
This is amazing, read up to chapter 40 and it has all the things I love, including an intelligent, yet not fully cold hearted MC. Great characterisation of the cast as well :)
So far one of the best if not the best fanfic I have ever read. The main character actually grows and develops and the side characters are all written in a way that makes them more interesting the more you get to know them. Not to mention the plot and other elements. A checklist of good qualities: - MC who isn’t stupid or crazily op that one shots every thing - side characters with genuine personality - no op cheats - doesn’t have many plot holes - powers are well thought out and explained
Thanks for the update, love the status of the updating, love the story development, love the character development, love the world background, I loved everything overall
I love the system and the mc is pretty smart and calm if over analytical in things that don’t matter much. Everything gets explained in an over the top manner. Like I don’t need to know this much to the point that every character gets over analyzed in every interaction with the Mc. Too much explaining and monologuing in my opinion were it feel like you just whent through 5k words but all that happen was that they went to the arcade played games and Isuku played wingman for kaminari. The mc isn’t my cup of tea as I do like smart characters but when it gets to the point we’re everything is getting over analyzed for no reason at all multiple times with no actual reasoning behind it, it just makes it seem pointless and a waste of time, I could have skipped some chapters and gone to the next chapter and I would’ve missed almost nothing.
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I’m eating high because obviously I love this FF. However my one and only problem, is that I’ve become addicted to this story. And now have to wait for new chapters 😂 Keep it up, this is amazing and I love your way of writing, incorporating the characters personas into how you right, I can literally feel Aizawas exhaustion when reading his lines. Can’t wait for more chapters! Need my fix!!!
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Pretty good read. Binge read it until the latest. There's some boring parts because some of the canon still happened despite the butterfly effect but it's bearable. Mc was likeable, good but not too much. He put up a mask but so far, he doesn't look like one that will turn evil. Romance was done well imo. It builds up pretty well and not just s*x after one chapter.
No yuri in harem sect member here I just want to kindly ask Author kun if there’s yuri in harem in this fic??
Spoiler enthüllen Maldito peak de literatura , no hay cosas estupidas no hay quejas de escritura ni de tramas todo es perfecto y como tal debió volverse cañón si el autor no fuera un reverendo pdjo com P
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Spoiler enthüllen Really unique take on MHA with instead of the MC wanting to be a hero he is a mastermind and is cool and calculating
Peak de literatura pura mejor que la mayoría kk de fanfics bha que hay, más vale que le des un buen final o cae denuncia por actos de terrorismo de estado [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
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Holy shit this is some beautiful writing and I like the system it isn't complicated to understand and the way the MC uses OFA is also genius even though he knew how its supposed to be used from the anime
The story is interesting and I like it. The title of the story is perfect, Adaptation, it is not only about the hero's abilities, but also his personality. The hero develops as the story progresses and becomes more humane, although at first he is like a robot who calculating everything and plans without feelings. His past is also gradually revealed, which explains his character. Although at first I was tired of his manipulating character, as the story progressed, I realized that the hero was also adapting to his new life. The only thing is, I hope his development as a person will not be too drawn out, judging by the current pace of the story it will end somewhere in 300 chapters, and it would be too harsh if his moment of catharsis comes only at the end
I am enjoying the story so far, and I recommend it to anyone who wants to read something well-written. the only thing that I can complain about is that I don't know where this is going. I would like to know if he will be a villain, an antihero, or a hero, but I will keep reading to have my answer.
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hello thare, i just added this story to my collection, and i have few questions i wanted to Ask you about, btw will Kyoka become his girlfriend?
Till now, I have loved the progress of MC's powers and his character. He isn't OP but he isn't average either and he is growing gradually which means that you aren't going to see an extremely OP character in just 10 chapters. (Something I don't want to see either as it makes the story a little boring.) The only two things that I feel a little weird about are his constant monologue and sometimes his conversation with other characters. (It feels quite weird the way, they talk) Overall, it's one of the best MHA fanfics and I hope the author writes it till the end.
Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.