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Here is a quick review of the fic till chapter 19 pros- Good character development, ok story pacing, ok grammar. cons-poor update stability,a bit rushed and lack of explanation and different POVs. nothing much has happened till now so there isn't much else to say. suggestion- POV of the disciples and their training of unique fighting styles would be nice,be ware of increasing the power level of the too much if you don't want an OP MC story else you would needlessly have to raise the power level of the enemy and that never ends well for the story
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five star just for the idea. it's a goddd darn good idea. I once wrote sth similar.
Writing can improve a little.................................................................................................................
Great story so far I’m at chapter 12. I like the use of characters most forget about. Please continue this great story!
I love this fanfic so far, the writing quality is ok, the story is really interesting. i would love see more.
currently the novel is going great and has an interesting premises not that their are not any human dbz stories but this has a refreshing take on it . such as MC being master shen who is already expirence in martial arts and is an old man , hope it continues like this in the future
Obviously.......................................................................................................................................................
Here is a quick review of the fic till chapter 19 pros- Good character development, ok story pacing, ok grammar. cons-poor update stability,a bit rushed and lack of explanation and different POVs. nothing much has happened till now so there isn't much else to say. suggestion- POV of the disciples and their training of unique fighting styles would be nice,be ware of increasing the power level of the too much if you don't want an OP MC story else you would needlessly have to raise the power level of the enemy and that never ends well for the story
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five star just for the idea. it's a goddd darn good idea. I once wrote sth similar.
Writing can improve a little.................................................................................................................
Great story so far I’m at chapter 12. I like the use of characters most forget about. Please continue this great story!
I love this fanfic so far, the writing quality is ok, the story is really interesting. i would love see more.
currently the novel is going great and has an interesting premises not that their are not any human dbz stories but this has a refreshing take on it . such as MC being master shen who is already expirence in martial arts and is an old man , hope it continues like this in the future