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(From 61. ch.) The story is enjoyable, slow, restricted and curious. Although there seem to be many restrictions on their mental powers, the power catalog is currently satisfactory and I hope they will research and develop this discipline in the future. The main character is nice and still fully maintains his secret identity, which is one of my favorite features. It is also nice that he discovers his powers and his powers increase, but damn the story is so slow. I wish he had gained his powers in episode 61 in 2013 so that he could at least be free. But I am sure that reading the story after 2013 will be super enjoyable, so don't give up. And I hope at least F4 is added to the story because it would be great to see Doom vs Axle. It would also be a nice and creative disadvantage for geniuses like Stark-Doom-Richards to produce EMP devices that disperse psychic energies, just like he can't use his full power to distant targets and find creative solutions.
Not bad. But the Sage Force, without wisdom, knowledge is like a fake, a shadow of itself. And here it is literally in the title, it looks like a deception. The plot itself is pretty bad. The hero essentially just revels in his power. But as a character/personality, as a personal story is in its infancy. There is a lack of communication and normal healthy social dynamics here.
This is great so far. Nothing groundbreaking for an MCU story atm, but it's very solid. I like how the story has progressed, the author is not afraid to let their mc just be a good guy and put forward some effort to make the world a better place, (This is honestly a bit rare in my findings). So far there's a very good update schedule, I hope the author is able to keep it up because I'm excited to see where this story goes!
Really great fanfic, definitely worth the read. leagues better than the avg mcu fanfic you'll find on here.
very underrated fanfic I recommend this to anyone who is interested in marvel
A very well written fanfic. The author has done an amazing job world crafting and providing good character depth and creation. The characters feel real and there are plot points that are introduced that keep me hooked since I haven't seen someone change the story like this yet. I wish the MC would get a girlfriend soon as he has been isolated this entire story so far as of chapter 117, as I write this review. I am hoping for either Sky, Jessica Jones, or Wanda as a potential partner to keep up with the OP MC. I guess I will just have to wait and see and continue to leave comments and my power stones on this one!
(From 61. ch.) The story is enjoyable, slow, restricted and curious. Although there seem to be many restrictions on their mental powers, the power catalog is currently satisfactory and I hope they will research and develop this discipline in the future. The main character is nice and still fully maintains his secret identity, which is one of my favorite features. It is also nice that he discovers his powers and his powers increase, but damn the story is so slow. I wish he had gained his powers in episode 61 in 2013 so that he could at least be free. But I am sure that reading the story after 2013 will be super enjoyable, so don't give up. And I hope at least F4 is added to the story because it would be great to see Doom vs Axle. It would also be a nice and creative disadvantage for geniuses like Stark-Doom-Richards to produce EMP devices that disperse psychic energies, just like he can't use his full power to distant targets and find creative solutions.
Not bad. But the Sage Force, without wisdom, knowledge is like a fake, a shadow of itself. And here it is literally in the title, it looks like a deception. The plot itself is pretty bad. The hero essentially just revels in his power. But as a character/personality, as a personal story is in its infancy. There is a lack of communication and normal healthy social dynamics here.
This is great so far. Nothing groundbreaking for an MCU story atm, but it's very solid. I like how the story has progressed, the author is not afraid to let their mc just be a good guy and put forward some effort to make the world a better place, (This is honestly a bit rare in my findings). So far there's a very good update schedule, I hope the author is able to keep it up because I'm excited to see where this story goes!
Really great fanfic, definitely worth the read. leagues better than the avg mcu fanfic you'll find on here.
very underrated fanfic I recommend this to anyone who is interested in marvel
A very well written fanfic. The author has done an amazing job world crafting and providing good character depth and creation. The characters feel real and there are plot points that are introduced that keep me hooked since I haven't seen someone change the story like this yet. I wish the MC would get a girlfriend soon as he has been isolated this entire story so far as of chapter 117, as I write this review. I am hoping for either Sky, Jessica Jones, or Wanda as a potential partner to keep up with the OP MC. I guess I will just have to wait and see and continue to leave comments and my power stones on this one!