Dragon Ball- Universe's Strongest Human

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thesacredmenace

OK, this is the first time I'm writing a review for a fanfic this early but I hope the Author sees this and takes it as constructive criticism. the foundation of the story had tremendous potential with the human MC and fire force power but the MC lost all his brain cells when he transmigrated. He acts like a joke gag character for one-piece instead of a normal person with normal reactions which makes him feel dumb. Also, the dialogue is written too close together making it difficult to know who is talking. Author, I think you should keep the premise for the story but rewrite/edit it so the characters seem realistic instead of dumb

LV 4

Rovontheus

For the first time I'm giving a 1 star review. The story had potential. but that went down the drain after MC acts like a parody character who knows the future but still gets angry. worse of all the writing, sentences and dialogues gets confusing which is annoying. The friendly banter and mocking were nice but the way it was executed and the follow ups was so bad. Plus why tf am i reading cannon DBZ with a slight self insert along with a dumber MC and worse english. All events remain the same and MC like usually weaker than a saiyan. A stupid system too, all items and power from it were irrelevant, if it was relevant the story wont follow cannon. The plot was dumb, the only thing i like was a bit of one piece and one punch man funny elements that were added. There was no anime logic in this book. Author you should improve those points i mentioned. if not i'd rather read Chinese trash MTL. at least i won't have much expectations

LV 3

Hellycomic

Very bad story , and bad mc . I better search for other Stories

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Jhowinchester666

Sinceramente o protagonista virou um figurante e triste dizer, porque a história, tinha muita pontecial, espero que melhore, _&&&&&_______&&&&____&&&__&&&&_&&&&&__&&&__&&&&&____&&&&__&&&__&&&_&&$&_&&&&&__&&__&&&&__&__&&&__&&__&&_&&&_&&&&&&_&&__&&_&&&_&&_&&&$&&&_&&&&&&&&&__&____&___&___&&___&&&___&&____&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&_____&&____&&&&&&&&&&&&&&_____&&__&&&_&$&_&_&&&_

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Dragons1112

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LV 4

dragonsnipe59

Really enjoyed your story with the humor you put in, a little bit disappointed that MC always chase Goku and Vegeta but can never be a little stronger or at least equal to them.

LV 2

ZephurosStormheart

I just finished reading "The End," and I wanted to share my thoughts without giving away any spoilers. This fanfiction really captures the essence of Dragon Ball. It doesn't take itself too seriously, which is a key part of what makes Dragon Ball so special. If someone were to complain that a Dragon Ball fanfic isn't serious enough, I would wonder if they truly understand the show. The main character starts out as a regular human and struggles in the beginning, which I found relatable even though he does have a system. The fanfiction feels like a true extension of the early Dragon Ball series, and that feeling continues to grow as the story progresses through the different arcs. The main character is endearing and will make you fall in love with the series all over again, especially with the way he interacts with the rest of the cast. It feels like Goku got the brother he deserves, and the forgotten characters get the attention that was sorely needed. I encourage you to read this fanfiction but try not to approach it with a critical mindset influenced by other works. Dragon Ball has always incorporated humor, and if you approach it too seriously, you might miss the point. Instead, approach it with the same joy and wonder that you experienced when you first watched the series. Now, raise your hands in the air because Goku needs that energy!

LV 14

Marven123

love it very sample and very fast paced. need moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 4

Yasser_El_Habrouk

it's very bad dumb mc and no build up sorry but please don't write anything like that again

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Dude_3192

I came to check out this. I saw this because of your pokemon fiction, and I'll check it out

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MapleHinataSyrup

I only have one question, segs??????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????