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Pokemon Revitalized

Autor: LurkingLoony

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NAC- Warnings

Not A Chapter, or NAC for short. This is where I'm putting my thoughts, so be warned. Of, well, my warnings. 

Warning on This Novel-{This is a fanfiction. Don't sue me, because I probably won't check my email. If you like what you're reading but don't like certain details, aspects, or jokes, be vocal. I want to make a fun novel despite my strong viewpoints on world issues, so I can adapt the dialogue to be more natural if it bothers you. That doesn't mean I will remove it, but instead I will change it to fit more with the character who says it. 

The main character, sadly, is based off of me. Yes, that should concern you- but not because he is prime real estate to grow a Gary Sue. That would imply a lot of things, but most namely he has serious character flaws and issues. I'm handling them as gently as I can, but dealing with trauma and the negative aspects masculinity can bring is difficult when I'm basing it off of my past self who I view as stupid. Namely psychological issues and anger issues are the focus of these flaws, but if you have more fitting ideas for masculine struggles or see some patterns in how I've written Mykah, tell me. It might help me out more than it helps the story- though I've fixed most of what he'll get to deal with a long time ago.}

Warning on the Game this is based off of-{Pokemon Rejuvenation is a dumpster fire. It was wonderful at first- I even cried at the first serious death scene. But... Sorry to the creators, but the the main story is trash. You don't know pacing, build-up, or how to realistically write people. For everybody else: the game is gold, the dialogue is garbage. If you didn't read the Synopsis, I highly recommend playing it and doing the side quests, ignoring the stupid antics and just having fun with the challenging battles and pokemon grind.

The issue is that the game is story focused. That makes it hard to ignore, and which is why I have such a passion for rewriting the characters. They and their stories were wasted, and used to create drivel. The gameplay was like a perfect cake base, only to have a bunch of poorly made icing be smashed around on top because 'lol itz funne'. Jokes can make bad or okay things great, but bad jokes ruin good things every time. The creators of the dialogue do not realize this. So I'm doing it here.}

Finally, I would like to let you know formally how I write. If something confuses you, then... well, read what I wrote: 

"I use italics to signify stressing a word, so reread this like I'm calling you a little bit stupid."

"I use bold to show that- sorry, I'll weaken the intensity and try again. CAPITALS ARE YELLING, AND MAKE MY VOICE, cough, A BIT SHRILL! BOLD CAPS MEANS IT'S DEAFENING, BUT NOT ALWAYS THE INTONATION LIKE YELLING HAS. THINK JET ENGINES, EAR DAMAGING AFTER A SHORT TIME. OR LIKE MORGAN FREEMAN'S GORGEOUS VOICE SINGING YOU A LULLABY AT THE TOP OF HIS LUNGS."

BANG! (This is a sound effect. They will be in italics, all rules on the above dialogue apply to them. Exclamation points typically mean it's a sharp, irritating sound- like a gunshot, scream, or door slamming.)

"Hey, listen. If a large portion of text is in italics, it means it's whispering. Whisper shouting IS a thing! But, uh, know that. Last thing on whispering is that- sometimes it's best left to those with the intensity to make your blood curl. Like me, Bolde Eye Talecs."

I wrote in the third person, past tense preferably, with verbose language. It felt stupid at times... but slowing down wasn't too bad- and avoiding semicolons by using dashes to switch thoughts helped. When I slipped up I was thankful for the... people who... told me...? 

'What the heck!? Who are YOU!?'1

Finally-finally, here's me: I am a Christian. I am an Engineering major. I have years of research and studying on the current world and specifically I dove into male/female relationships to understand what's going wrong with the world. I hate Tate-bros. I also beg of you to get me started on a rant. I will gladly put my thoughts in a reply, or post another of these (NOT A CHAPTER- or NAC) to clarify something if there's enough comments asking about it. This is not a blog though... And I don't intend on starting one. Well, except in the 'Author's Thoughts' things. Those are like hard drugs to me it seems. 

  1. If you don't understand, I'm writing a fourth-wall breaking thought. Dialogue is in "double quotes", while thoughts are in 'standard quotes'.

AUTORENGEDANKEN
LurkingLoony LurkingLoony

I'm working on chapter names & organization, major plot weaving (retconning), and future chapters as of publishing this with 78 chapters and ~120k words done (7/1/24). I've been editing small bits of chapters and sometimes completely revamping one or two, but that's only minor for now. Later I will notify readers of major changes & additions, but... it's a hobby. I'm going to write what I like, and if I have an idea to insert into previously finished acts to flesh out characters... You'll know. Regardless, let me know what you think of my warnings and style!

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