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Seems okay so far. A proofreader would definitely increase the rating, the writing is a bit rough. Cant say much about character or story development yet because it has just begun. Looking forward for the future of this fanfic. Keep up the good work author.
Seems okay so far. A proofreader would definitely increase the rating, the writing is a bit rough. Cant say much about character or story development yet because it has just begun. Looking forward for the future of this fanfic. Keep up the good work author.