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pure gossip and philosophical conversations about what is right and what is wrong, adjacent threats that are not fulfilled, a mc who believes himself to be intelligent and becomes a victim, 70% of the characters that have appeared are unpleasant and stupid (I only got to chapter 30 and in those chapters nothing has happened! It seems that something is cooking but there is no progress! Conclusion: this is boring, it doesn't happen, the story and the chapters feel empty and only provoke you unnecessarily by generating displeasure
My shameless review: There is action, but the focus is more on the scheming and the plotting. Please leave a review if you enjoy it.......;)
good story and good translation and there were rarely any mistakes .good work overall. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This fanfic is very well written and the flow of the story is very good. Overall 5/5 ratings.
This fanfiction is a will written piece. I'm really enjoying it, and I'm excited to read more. It's easy to read, the story flows well, the plot is real, grounded, and definitely no bs. the mc's cheat is not an op bs system, so I highly recommend this to those who would stumble upon this story. I swear you will not waste your time reading this. ty.
Your translation is better than the other author that copy pasted the story "save uchiha, start from flipping the table". I enjoyed your translated parts more. I hope that u wont drop this book and continue this story further. The other author stopped at chapter 35
I’m really glad that our MC finally decided to choose Izumi as his woman and that Izumi stood with him since the beginning. Bravo Author she is the best choice! Thank you so much!!!!
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pure gossip and philosophical conversations about what is right and what is wrong, adjacent threats that are not fulfilled, a mc who believes himself to be intelligent and becomes a victim, 70% of the characters that have appeared are unpleasant and stupid (I only got to chapter 30 and in those chapters nothing has happened! It seems that something is cooking but there is no progress! Conclusion: this is boring, it doesn't happen, the story and the chapters feel empty and only provoke you unnecessarily by generating displeasure
My shameless review: There is action, but the focus is more on the scheming and the plotting. Please leave a review if you enjoy it.......;)
good story and good translation and there were rarely any mistakes .good work overall. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This fanfic is very well written and the flow of the story is very good. Overall 5/5 ratings.
This fanfiction is a will written piece. I'm really enjoying it, and I'm excited to read more. It's easy to read, the story flows well, the plot is real, grounded, and definitely no bs. the mc's cheat is not an op bs system, so I highly recommend this to those who would stumble upon this story. I swear you will not waste your time reading this. ty.
Your translation is better than the other author that copy pasted the story "save uchiha, start from flipping the table". I enjoyed your translated parts more. I hope that u wont drop this book and continue this story further. The other author stopped at chapter 35
I’m really glad that our MC finally decided to choose Izumi as his woman and that Izumi stood with him since the beginning. Bravo Author she is the best choice! Thank you so much!!!!