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the story is great and you don't overestimate madara and make him all powerful right off the back In on piece like so many have but the one bad thing is the fact that chapters are short and don't cover a lot
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it's really good. I also give you an idea about new fanfiction can you create this fanfiction also plzzzzzzzzz(see my comments in your latest chapter in this fic. i hope you like my idea
the story is great and you don't overestimate madara and make him all powerful right off the back In on piece like so many have but the one bad thing is the fact that chapters are short and don't cover a lot
let me be the first to say that i love this keep going at it and plzz do not drop cause this idea is golden, even your grammer is great. ;
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