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Mind Blowing, what a good way to deliver the story with amazing segs. Just fantastic. You outdid yourself author. I got hooked right after reading the first chapters...It made me read all the free chapters in one blink and only stopped caused I didn't have coins. 😂 Hahaha ... I wanna praise this work and recommend to the other readers if they like this genre then I am sure you won't be disappointed at all. 👍👍
A decent erotic story. A bit silly at times, demanding a fairly flexible suspension of disbelief. The MC isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer, but overall he's reasonably likeable. The erotic scenes are a bit short for my taste, but frequent enough. The girls have fairly distinct personalities... not much depth, but what can you expect from a harem story so focused on erotic content? I kinda wish they were more varied in terms of looks, but it seems the author likes voluptuous, curvy women. The plot is okay, it does have some intriguing elements that keep me interested, so I'm not reading solely for the ero stuff. The writing is pretty decent overall, only a few minor issues (such as a wrong word here and there, it appears English isn't the author's mother tongue). Well, in conclusion, unless you're repulsed by the idea of the MC using supernatural abilities such as an aphrodisiac scent or pleasure-inducing touch to seduce women, it's worth giving a try.
I thoroughly enjoy this novel. I like the premise, the characters are unique, and there's a decent amount of spicy chapters.
the is about a manager who goes back in time with a system and becomes a genius manager who Seduces woman who are singers actresses and streamers and the system gives him the ability to improve the abilities of his women from either singing acting and physical abilities overall its not a bad book but don't expect it to have a deep story its a good book to pass the time
Hello, author here. Just thought I'd clarify some things. First, there is no Yuri or NTR in this book. Second, the story will have "plot" coupled with actual plot. Third, The main concept of the book is about a nobody who will become one of the most renowned Manager/Agent in the entire world. However, the way in which he will get recruits is a bit different than one might expect as you saw in the synopsis. To conclude, yes, there will be plenty of "plot". However, they will actually serve a purpose and make the story progress. Now what are you still doing here, go read.
I started this novel yesterday and i am almost done with the last few chapters . there are a few he/she mistakes and at times there is a missing word but nothing that bothers too much. The update stability is great. I like the pacing as it is not too fast and not too slow. The only thing that i would love is a few chapters of pov from the girls and hearing their thoughts about everything. Like every 5 to 10 or 15 chapters. but otherwise give it a chance because it's a great novel start and i believe if the author keeps it up like this than this novel has great potential .
Mind Blowing, what a good way to deliver the story with amazing segs. Just fantastic. You outdid yourself author. I got hooked right after reading the first chapters...It made me read all the free chapters in one blink and only stopped caused I didn't have coins. 😂 Hahaha ... I wanna praise this work and recommend to the other readers if they like this genre then I am sure you won't be disappointed at all. 👍👍
A decent erotic story. A bit silly at times, demanding a fairly flexible suspension of disbelief. The MC isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer, but overall he's reasonably likeable. The erotic scenes are a bit short for my taste, but frequent enough. The girls have fairly distinct personalities... not much depth, but what can you expect from a harem story so focused on erotic content? I kinda wish they were more varied in terms of looks, but it seems the author likes voluptuous, curvy women. The plot is okay, it does have some intriguing elements that keep me interested, so I'm not reading solely for the ero stuff. The writing is pretty decent overall, only a few minor issues (such as a wrong word here and there, it appears English isn't the author's mother tongue). Well, in conclusion, unless you're repulsed by the idea of the MC using supernatural abilities such as an aphrodisiac scent or pleasure-inducing touch to seduce women, it's worth giving a try.
I thoroughly enjoy this novel. I like the premise, the characters are unique, and there's a decent amount of spicy chapters.
the is about a manager who goes back in time with a system and becomes a genius manager who Seduces woman who are singers actresses and streamers and the system gives him the ability to improve the abilities of his women from either singing acting and physical abilities overall its not a bad book but don't expect it to have a deep story its a good book to pass the time
Hello, author here. Just thought I'd clarify some things. First, there is no Yuri or NTR in this book. Second, the story will have "plot" coupled with actual plot. Third, The main concept of the book is about a nobody who will become one of the most renowned Manager/Agent in the entire world. However, the way in which he will get recruits is a bit different than one might expect as you saw in the synopsis. To conclude, yes, there will be plenty of "plot". However, they will actually serve a purpose and make the story progress. Now what are you still doing here, go read.
I started this novel yesterday and i am almost done with the last few chapters . there are a few he/she mistakes and at times there is a missing word but nothing that bothers too much. The update stability is great. I like the pacing as it is not too fast and not too slow. The only thing that i would love is a few chapters of pov from the girls and hearing their thoughts about everything. Like every 5 to 10 or 15 chapters. but otherwise give it a chance because it's a great novel start and i believe if the author keeps it up like this than this novel has great potential .