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Que gran capítulo autor 🍷🗿 , no puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte .................................................................................................
i like your story. bytheway did you take inapiration from the fanfction rise from the ashes a harry potter x winx famfction from Paperpuscher 101
(translated by Google) At first I thought the story was cool, after all I had never seen a crossover between Winx and Ben 10, but over time I realized that this story has some problems that are really annoying. 1. the story update is very slow (once a week) although the chapter is big it's not worth it. 2. In addition to the update being slow, it is a chapter full of useless things, for example: There are about 3 chapters where it's just the guy absorbing power and wanting to demonstrate how incredible he is, or there's a chapter with an incredibly useless fight if there's a fight 😂😂
Cómo siempre otro gran capítulo autor 🍷🗿 No puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte 😃 .........................................................................
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ngl i'm VERY intrigued by this corssover, so i'll post this review preemptively, might change it later
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Like the story it's just he has alot of Dialogues its iritating how long it goes
Que gran fanfic no puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo También muchas gracias al autor por traer un fanfic tan bueno ..........................................
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Not a bad fanfic. The only drawbacks I noticed are: The hero is too MC, OP. Lives in his own. imagination, fantasy (the surrounding reality is secondary in importance). What suffers from is the credibility of the development of the world, characters. The power of the character increases faster than the plot moves. The further, the more components are added to this mess. Moreover, his power overshadows his own personality (which looks secondary at best). I read parts 8, chapter 6 by title.
Its only 7 chaps long so far but everything is painfully Mid. Its essentially 7 chaps of a dude getting free powers one after another for no effort from a Gacha system that seems to give out Epic and rare abilities for every Pull. I cant be the only person around who thinks gaining new powers every chap is an inadequate replacement for an actual plotline and character depth. TLDR: the story is 70% gaining new powers and expositioning about them" 10% Yapping about how to use said new powers to gain more powers in the future. 10% Admiring the Hot evil witch teens. 5% character interaction(Mostly mutual Simping) 5% Action sequence. As of the 7 complete chaps
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This is purely for the Winx. If Bloom is added to the harem, then I will definitely give my 2 crystals every day only to this work. And we also need to increase the Trix's IQ and expand their understanding of their magic.
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The story has potential. I hope you dont abandon it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
can't wait for next chapter just update the story faster author love the story so far .[img=Smug][img=disgusted][img=Smug][img=More pls][img=Moneybags]
A interesting read so far, and I can't wait to see how the story and "plot" develops
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S'il te plaît à continue à écrire cette histoire elle est superbe je suis impatient de voir des autres chapitres bon je t'encourage grandement à continuer car c'est un bon travail que tu fais
I am so happy to see Winx ff . I hope most of people too . I have just one question you plan to add only trix girl or you add Winx girl to for harem
İt was perfect I can imagine that it will be very entertaining, and I hope you are not quit this ff pls .
My friend, where have you been (I've been looking for winx ff since maybe 2 years ago, I hope you don't give up this ff) .
hope your continue love the story concept . continue the good work author also it's good to see a story winx club one of childhood favorite cartoon.
As the author of this crossover story between Winx and Ben 10, I firmly believe it deserves at least five stars. The combination of these two iconic and beloved universes is something truly unique that I haven’t seen anyone do before, and personally, I’ve dedicated myself to crafting a plot that can satisfy fans of both worlds. In fact, I’ve noticed that there are very few serious and well-crafted stories exploring the Winx universe in a crossover context. This has driven me to create something that not only respects the origins of both series but blends them in an innovative and engaging way. My disappointment only grew when I saw that there are no stories about an SI Osmonian, which led me to create this story, hoping to see if I could do something good. For now, I believe it’s going quite well, much to my delight. Also, as you may have noticed, there are other tags since the Winx universe is just a stop on a bigger journey. If you have any questions, I’m happy to answer.
Que gran capítulo autor 🍷🗿 , no puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte .................................................................................................
i like your story. bytheway did you take inapiration from the fanfction rise from the ashes a harry potter x winx famfction from Paperpuscher 101
(translated by Google) At first I thought the story was cool, after all I had never seen a crossover between Winx and Ben 10, but over time I realized that this story has some problems that are really annoying. 1. the story update is very slow (once a week) although the chapter is big it's not worth it. 2. In addition to the update being slow, it is a chapter full of useless things, for example: There are about 3 chapters where it's just the guy absorbing power and wanting to demonstrate how incredible he is, or there's a chapter with an incredibly useless fight if there's a fight 😂😂
Cómo siempre otro gran capítulo autor 🍷🗿 No puedo esperar para leer la siguiente parte 😃 .........................................................................
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ngl i'm VERY intrigued by this corssover, so i'll post this review preemptively, might change it later
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Like the story it's just he has alot of Dialogues its iritating how long it goes
Que gran fanfic no puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo También muchas gracias al autor por traer un fanfic tan bueno ..........................................
Spoiler enthüllen Not a bad fanfic. The only drawbacks I noticed are: The hero is too MC, OP. Lives in his own. imagination, fantasy (the surrounding reality is secondary in importance). What suffers from is the credibility of the development of the world, characters. The power of the character increases faster than the plot moves. The further, the more components are added to this mess. Moreover, his power overshadows his own personality (which looks secondary at best). I read parts 8, chapter 6 by title.
Its only 7 chaps long so far but everything is painfully Mid. Its essentially 7 chaps of a dude getting free powers one after another for no effort from a Gacha system that seems to give out Epic and rare abilities for every Pull. I cant be the only person around who thinks gaining new powers every chap is an inadequate replacement for an actual plotline and character depth. TLDR: the story is 70% gaining new powers and expositioning about them" 10% Yapping about how to use said new powers to gain more powers in the future. 10% Admiring the Hot evil witch teens. 5% character interaction(Mostly mutual Simping) 5% Action sequence. As of the 7 complete chaps
Muito interessante.... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is purely for the Winx. If Bloom is added to the harem, then I will definitely give my 2 crystals every day only to this work. And we also need to increase the Trix's IQ and expand their understanding of their magic.
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Keep Up The Work xD Keep Up The Work xD Keep Up The Work xD Keep Up The Work xD Keep Up The Work xD Keep Up The Work xD Keep Up The Work xD
Perfect one story (hdhdbsbsbsbsbsvdhdvddvvdvdvdvdvddjfjrhddhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdydheyeyegehegdhdhhddhhgggggggggggggggddhhdhshhsshshshehegegegegegeggeddh)
Spoiler enthüllen The story has potential. I hope you dont abandon it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
can't wait for next chapter just update the story faster author love the story so far .[img=Smug][img=disgusted][img=Smug][img=More pls][img=Moneybags]
A interesting read so far, and I can't wait to see how the story and "plot" develops
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S'il te plaît à continue à écrire cette histoire elle est superbe je suis impatient de voir des autres chapitres bon je t'encourage grandement à continuer car c'est un bon travail que tu fais
I am so happy to see Winx ff . I hope most of people too . I have just one question you plan to add only trix girl or you add Winx girl to for harem
İt was perfect I can imagine that it will be very entertaining, and I hope you are not quit this ff pls .
My friend, where have you been (I've been looking for winx ff since maybe 2 years ago, I hope you don't give up this ff) .
hope your continue love the story concept . continue the good work author also it's good to see a story winx club one of childhood favorite cartoon.
As the author of this crossover story between Winx and Ben 10, I firmly believe it deserves at least five stars. The combination of these two iconic and beloved universes is something truly unique that I haven’t seen anyone do before, and personally, I’ve dedicated myself to crafting a plot that can satisfy fans of both worlds. In fact, I’ve noticed that there are very few serious and well-crafted stories exploring the Winx universe in a crossover context. This has driven me to create something that not only respects the origins of both series but blends them in an innovative and engaging way. My disappointment only grew when I saw that there are no stories about an SI Osmonian, which led me to create this story, hoping to see if I could do something good. For now, I believe it’s going quite well, much to my delight. Also, as you may have noticed, there are other tags since the Winx universe is just a stop on a bigger journey. If you have any questions, I’m happy to answer.