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la historia es buena hasta el cap (no me acuerdo Xddd) en mi opinión lo que paso fue que el prota se volvió un corredor 🏃♂️ 🏃♂️ que quiero decir con eso esque no se queda quieto no quiero decir que me gusten las historias lentas (de echo siento que esta novela avanza muy lentamente ) lo que quiero decir con corredor es que no han explorado lo suficiente con los personajes que salen al inicio y las relaciones con los personajes, actualmente estoy dejando acumular cap pero lla llevo más de 10 días y no pasa de la bella de airon man nt. y la personalidad de Tony es muy rara por decir lo menos
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The story is quite good and enjoyable. The only thing that I felt weird or rather could have been better was that you could have used the female counterparts, instead of gender bend, like you did with Peggy. Instead of making Tony female, you could have simply swapped Tony with his daughter, or other female counterparts from the comics
The concept and development is so great, also i like this authors book is just that... i cant keep with this 2nd person thing, sorry i really tried author but it kills all the inmerssion, sure i can do the patreon thing or whatever to ask you to change the narrative but 1) i dont like to give money to authors when i feel that i HAD yo do this in order to motivates them, i feel that if for some reason i stoped paying because its needed then they will stop or drop, 2) you have already dropped a few good novels so what garanty to i have you wont drop this after the change? Its simply not worth the risk, anyway, tell me if someone else paid you to change the whole novel or if you do another similar novel with a normal pov. Excluding that good novel, keep the good work 😁
Hey... whats going on? We thought you died. You went missing almost a year ago and you came back now... will you update slave hârêm novel??????
It's one of those stories that is in the second person, pov. If you're like me, who hates these types of story that you should skip this one. Honestly, I don't know why people write these types of stories. It's so stupid, and it takes away. Do it enjoyment of reading🤦🏻♂️
Title says mutant collector but from what I've read no og mutant characters have appeared yet
as much as i would love to read this, the quest thingy is not really for me, i tried really, but it feels weird associating myself in it and can't feel being immerse reading it, unlike other SI with an actual mc. i just hope if this was somehow completed you'll make another one based on this with an actual mc.
Add genderbend to the tags i see no point in this as there hella female characters but atleast let the readers know
Its quite good story but most of the problems come from the improper 1st person pov it should go like i had given..... instead of yohad given...... other than that its quite ok .
Harem: Susan Storm, Felicia Hardy, Mary Jane Watson, Wanda Maximoff, Captain Marvel, Natasha Romanoff, Gamora, Hela, Valkyrie, Yelena Belova, Jennifer Walters, Maria Hill, Wasp, Mantis, Gwen Stacy, Jessica Jones, Lady Sif, Sersi , Thena, Makkari, Illyana Nikolaievna Rasputin, Rogue, Ororo Munroe, Psylocke, Emma Frost, Jean Grey, Mystique, Polaris, Selene Gallio, Cuckoo Sisters(Esme, Irma, Sophie, Phoebe, Celeste), Blink, Angel Dust, Kate Pryde....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM.......
If anyone finds narrative time strange it's because this story is a quest from fiction live (that's where the 'quest' in the title comes from). I recommend reading it on that page since there are many NSFW pics in the story that cannot be seen in the webnovel format and rules, also the story is MUCH further advanced.
Great story hopefully will continue till the end and we will be able to read until conclusion.Also the MC and other characters will be able to conect naturally without looking forced, currently it's going great.
I love this, everything i have ever wanted from a novel, please don't stop updating
Honestly when I first started reading this novel the 1st person pov really threw me off. But now I’m further in and I think it makes the novel feel more immersive! Keep up the good work!
This is very good, excited for more. the only thing I think could be different is the whole first person and just use normal third-person pronouns.
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This is good it’s similar to the one Cambmian did with mutants too but this one’s different so it’s nice to see stuff like this
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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la historia es buena hasta el cap (no me acuerdo Xddd) en mi opinión lo que paso fue que el prota se volvió un corredor 🏃♂️ 🏃♂️ que quiero decir con eso esque no se queda quieto no quiero decir que me gusten las historias lentas (de echo siento que esta novela avanza muy lentamente ) lo que quiero decir con corredor es que no han explorado lo suficiente con los personajes que salen al inicio y las relaciones con los personajes, actualmente estoy dejando acumular cap pero lla llevo más de 10 días y no pasa de la bella de airon man nt. y la personalidad de Tony es muy rara por decir lo menos
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The story is quite good and enjoyable. The only thing that I felt weird or rather could have been better was that you could have used the female counterparts, instead of gender bend, like you did with Peggy. Instead of making Tony female, you could have simply swapped Tony with his daughter, or other female counterparts from the comics
The concept and development is so great, also i like this authors book is just that... i cant keep with this 2nd person thing, sorry i really tried author but it kills all the inmerssion, sure i can do the patreon thing or whatever to ask you to change the narrative but 1) i dont like to give money to authors when i feel that i HAD yo do this in order to motivates them, i feel that if for some reason i stoped paying because its needed then they will stop or drop, 2) you have already dropped a few good novels so what garanty to i have you wont drop this after the change? Its simply not worth the risk, anyway, tell me if someone else paid you to change the whole novel or if you do another similar novel with a normal pov. Excluding that good novel, keep the good work 😁
Hey... whats going on? We thought you died. You went missing almost a year ago and you came back now... will you update slave hârêm novel??????
It's one of those stories that is in the second person, pov. If you're like me, who hates these types of story that you should skip this one. Honestly, I don't know why people write these types of stories. It's so stupid, and it takes away. Do it enjoyment of reading🤦🏻♂️
Title says mutant collector but from what I've read no og mutant characters have appeared yet
as much as i would love to read this, the quest thingy is not really for me, i tried really, but it feels weird associating myself in it and can't feel being immerse reading it, unlike other SI with an actual mc. i just hope if this was somehow completed you'll make another one based on this with an actual mc.
Add genderbend to the tags i see no point in this as there hella female characters but atleast let the readers know
Its quite good story but most of the problems come from the improper 1st person pov it should go like i had given..... instead of yohad given...... other than that its quite ok .
Harem: Susan Storm, Felicia Hardy, Mary Jane Watson, Wanda Maximoff, Captain Marvel, Natasha Romanoff, Gamora, Hela, Valkyrie, Yelena Belova, Jennifer Walters, Maria Hill, Wasp, Mantis, Gwen Stacy, Jessica Jones, Lady Sif, Sersi , Thena, Makkari, Illyana Nikolaievna Rasputin, Rogue, Ororo Munroe, Psylocke, Emma Frost, Jean Grey, Mystique, Polaris, Selene Gallio, Cuckoo Sisters(Esme, Irma, Sophie, Phoebe, Celeste), Blink, Angel Dust, Kate Pryde....... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM.......
If anyone finds narrative time strange it's because this story is a quest from fiction live (that's where the 'quest' in the title comes from). I recommend reading it on that page since there are many NSFW pics in the story that cannot be seen in the webnovel format and rules, also the story is MUCH further advanced.
Great story hopefully will continue till the end and we will be able to read until conclusion.Also the MC and other characters will be able to conect naturally without looking forced, currently it's going great.
I love this, everything i have ever wanted from a novel, please don't stop updating
Honestly when I first started reading this novel the 1st person pov really threw me off. But now I’m further in and I think it makes the novel feel more immersive! Keep up the good work!
This is very good, excited for more. the only thing I think could be different is the whole first person and just use normal third-person pronouns.
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This is good it’s similar to the one Cambmian did with mutants too but this one’s different so it’s nice to see stuff like this
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
can you edit the pov to first person please? reading from second make me confuse