Kapitel 185: Der Schwarze Palast

The provided text seems to be a translation of a fantasy novel or story section describing a powerful dragon and its response to the death of its offspring. If you possess the original English text, please provide it, so I can give you optimized German translation based on it.

Since the English text you referred to in your instructions is not provided, I can't directly improve the given German translation based on it. However, I can try to optimize the previously presented German translation for readability and fluency while sticking to the context provided: