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At first I was concerned when I read this was a story about a person reincarnating for the second time.(the first time was in Naruto world where he lived for 80 years already) So I know there wasn't going to be a lot of character development since he is already old enough. But what would you know, with an excellent grammar and a good plot, the story was done excellently. The MC mentality in actions stayed true to what was portrayed for the all story. The MC was cold hearted and never spared his enemies whatever they are children or adults. And I honestly loved it. Now all that is left is to hope that the author would not drop this.
So mc is blank then gets reincarnated as oniki (lives for 80 years mastered dust realise and some more, and says he doesn’t have a difference between who he was befor being reincarnation and after, so in our eyes he’s an 80 year old ninja). We gets born, stayed in the high school for 12 years. His first mission is the plasma star vessel one, witch he says his mission is to take her to tengen but doesn’t and go to her high school, I thought this was a 80 year old ninja he even says he doesn’t care about her as long as the mission goes correct. So the whole toji vs gojo happens then mc “kills toji” then goes to check gojo and then they fight cuz gojo and geto said if the vessel wanted to be free she can, they fight mc wants to teach a lesson to gojo, but gets boded instead and lands by toji house, toji let’s him live he goes back to the principal office and relays the mission but doesn’t say the toji is alive but dead, he says he feels this feeling he should say this but I guess it’s just plot. Also the big 3 clans made a binding bow that they each have a wish that they can make of mc or his mother dies. So I’m not really liking this part.
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pretty nice character choice, progression and development. it seems the author have good vision in mind, for now. however the most glaring mistake the author made is that he did not proof read each chapter so expect wrong spelling.
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I truly desire to give this a better review, However with the lack of understanding on basic mechanics and how things work in the JJK verse to a high degree, I sadly am forced to give a low review. It is very fixable however, It just comes to scaling better and gaining a better understanding. Dust release simply would work in JJK if it was scaled properly and was integrated better. Good work however author.
No era lo que esperaba y no me gustó el comienzo y la explicación, hubiera estado mejor si simplemente reencarnaba con las técnicas de onoki, tampoco me gusta su personalidad y todo se sintió muy acelerado y vacio
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I'm not good at writing, so here is how I liked the story so far in smileys 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
a well written story, interesting character, it would be interesting if we knew more about his past in the ninja world and what he change in there
So far, I enjoy it. The only thing I don't like is that the Mc has 2 cursed techniques. After the inventory arc, I thought the author would just timeskip to Canon, but he mentioned reviving the kamizuru clan, so I'm looking forward to that. I hope the author makes gojo and gets enemies with the Mc.
(PT-BR) No geral a história está boa e está caminhando pra um rumo ainda melhor, só precisa melhorar um pouco no tempo de atualização pra não me deixar esperando, vou dar uma pedra de poder pra motivar, fique honrado pois é um pouco complicado eu ganhar uma pedra de poder.
I can say this is a good story, the stability in updating the chapters is also quite stable, I have read several chapters and it is good. but I also don't like how the author made mistakes in writing the character's names from the name of the main character, and the names of other characters whose writing does not match the character's real name. And also I can say that sometimes the character's name is written as a stereotypical Japanese name (I'm not sure if this is the right way to describe it) Overall this is a good story, and it would be even better if the author improved the way you wrote the characters' names.
Hmmmm... Gonna read This when chap 40 more i Guess..[img=update][img=recommend]don't drop this....................._______________________________________________________
Good fanfiction just more chapter №###№##############№###########################################################€€€€€€###########################################################
In my opinion it is meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Up to the 7 chapters (which is the current chapter released), the author is consistent with his updates. The story is unique and the writing quality is also good with fluent conversations between characters. Good luck Author, and Don't DROP.
This has great potential tho it is too short to tell. But still I have high expectation for this so here’s my 3 power stones
weak mc with mind like robot a 13 yo kid that still think and act like he still 80 yo man mc had no meta knowledge with hesitate to use dust releast not a good techniqe in jjsk world with 80 yo exp cant deal with toji someone who use tool and taijutsu . a kage level ninja waste in this ff with kage level exp of 80 yo but cant do anything meh ...
Spoiler enthüllen At first I was concerned when I read this was a story about a person reincarnating for the second time.(the first time was in Naruto world where he lived for 80 years already) So I know there wasn't going to be a lot of character development since he is already old enough. But what would you know, with an excellent grammar and a good plot, the story was done excellently. The MC mentality in actions stayed true to what was portrayed for the all story. The MC was cold hearted and never spared his enemies whatever they are children or adults. And I honestly loved it. Now all that is left is to hope that the author would not drop this.
So mc is blank then gets reincarnated as oniki (lives for 80 years mastered dust realise and some more, and says he doesn’t have a difference between who he was befor being reincarnation and after, so in our eyes he’s an 80 year old ninja). We gets born, stayed in the high school for 12 years. His first mission is the plasma star vessel one, witch he says his mission is to take her to tengen but doesn’t and go to her high school, I thought this was a 80 year old ninja he even says he doesn’t care about her as long as the mission goes correct. So the whole toji vs gojo happens then mc “kills toji” then goes to check gojo and then they fight cuz gojo and geto said if the vessel wanted to be free she can, they fight mc wants to teach a lesson to gojo, but gets boded instead and lands by toji house, toji let’s him live he goes back to the principal office and relays the mission but doesn’t say the toji is alive but dead, he says he feels this feeling he should say this but I guess it’s just plot. Also the big 3 clans made a binding bow that they each have a wish that they can make of mc or his mother dies. So I’m not really liking this part.
Spoiler enthüllen pretty nice character choice, progression and development. it seems the author have good vision in mind, for now. however the most glaring mistake the author made is that he did not proof read each chapter so expect wrong spelling.
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I truly desire to give this a better review, However with the lack of understanding on basic mechanics and how things work in the JJK verse to a high degree, I sadly am forced to give a low review. It is very fixable however, It just comes to scaling better and gaining a better understanding. Dust release simply would work in JJK if it was scaled properly and was integrated better. Good work however author.
No era lo que esperaba y no me gustó el comienzo y la explicación, hubiera estado mejor si simplemente reencarnaba con las técnicas de onoki, tampoco me gusta su personalidad y todo se sintió muy acelerado y vacio
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I'm not good at writing, so here is how I liked the story so far in smileys 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
a well written story, interesting character, it would be interesting if we knew more about his past in the ninja world and what he change in there
So far, I enjoy it. The only thing I don't like is that the Mc has 2 cursed techniques. After the inventory arc, I thought the author would just timeskip to Canon, but he mentioned reviving the kamizuru clan, so I'm looking forward to that. I hope the author makes gojo and gets enemies with the Mc.
(PT-BR) No geral a história está boa e está caminhando pra um rumo ainda melhor, só precisa melhorar um pouco no tempo de atualização pra não me deixar esperando, vou dar uma pedra de poder pra motivar, fique honrado pois é um pouco complicado eu ganhar uma pedra de poder.
I can say this is a good story, the stability in updating the chapters is also quite stable, I have read several chapters and it is good. but I also don't like how the author made mistakes in writing the character's names from the name of the main character, and the names of other characters whose writing does not match the character's real name. And also I can say that sometimes the character's name is written as a stereotypical Japanese name (I'm not sure if this is the right way to describe it) Overall this is a good story, and it would be even better if the author improved the way you wrote the characters' names.
Hmmmm... Gonna read This when chap 40 more i Guess..[img=update][img=recommend]don't drop this....................._______________________________________________________
Good fanfiction just more chapter №###№##############№###########################################################€€€€€€###########################################################
In my opinion it is meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Up to the 7 chapters (which is the current chapter released), the author is consistent with his updates. The story is unique and the writing quality is also good with fluent conversations between characters. Good luck Author, and Don't DROP.
This has great potential tho it is too short to tell. But still I have high expectation for this so here’s my 3 power stones
weak mc with mind like robot a 13 yo kid that still think and act like he still 80 yo man mc had no meta knowledge with hesitate to use dust releast not a good techniqe in jjsk world with 80 yo exp cant deal with toji someone who use tool and taijutsu . a kage level ninja waste in this ff with kage level exp of 80 yo but cant do anything meh ...
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