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Great book, I can't wait for more updates and chapters, Arthur so far has interesting choices for visiting characters and games for the store
The translation is okay, but the story was so confusing, pretty bad interaction, even the characters weren't explained clearly.
This story needs more than a translator. it needs an editor. and it needs a new MC. 96% of asian MCs in translated stories like this are all the same, garbage. if you translate garbage then you take responsibility for garbage. the idea of the story is amazing but thats literally it. I think something is wrong in the head of the OG writer but choosing to translate a lazy, poor version in english is its own kind of crazy. but so is anyone translating a story without the correct level of English to do so. I gave it a chance but man. run.
gonna update the review as I read more quick question the fic does it have a lot of real word interactions or is the mc in marvel or something
This is amazing! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! More chapters.!!!!!!!
I didn't want to do that, but I can't help but give 2 stars for this, for the simple fact that the ff is practically hostile to the reader, it's almost like reading an mtl, I would like to read a revised version of this, (note: the name of the mc It's Chinese, and the interactions and information are thrown in an unnatural way, just waiting for readers to accept it)
People from Anime, Gacha games and the like play games and get things from it and they also interact with others, that is the fic and it does it so well.
I really like this fanfic i do belive this fic is not perfect but i really enjoying reading this fic i currently in chap 167 more chapter i don't really know why this fanfic is not popular I do hope this fanfic can be completed
Great book, I can't wait for more updates and chapters, Arthur so far has interesting choices for visiting characters and games for the store
The translation is okay, but the story was so confusing, pretty bad interaction, even the characters weren't explained clearly.
This story needs more than a translator. it needs an editor. and it needs a new MC. 96% of asian MCs in translated stories like this are all the same, garbage. if you translate garbage then you take responsibility for garbage. the idea of the story is amazing but thats literally it. I think something is wrong in the head of the OG writer but choosing to translate a lazy, poor version in english is its own kind of crazy. but so is anyone translating a story without the correct level of English to do so. I gave it a chance but man. run.
gonna update the review as I read more quick question the fic does it have a lot of real word interactions or is the mc in marvel or something
This is amazing! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! I want more chapters! More chapters.!!!!!!!
I didn't want to do that, but I can't help but give 2 stars for this, for the simple fact that the ff is practically hostile to the reader, it's almost like reading an mtl, I would like to read a revised version of this, (note: the name of the mc It's Chinese, and the interactions and information are thrown in an unnatural way, just waiting for readers to accept it)
People from Anime, Gacha games and the like play games and get things from it and they also interact with others, that is the fic and it does it so well.
I really like this fanfic i do belive this fic is not perfect but i really enjoying reading this fic i currently in chap 167 more chapter i don't really know why this fanfic is not popular I do hope this fanfic can be completed