My diary system in Marvel

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Ep_E_X

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XenonNoble

Fellow readers, this is NOT some MTL garbage that we see everywhere. This is a fanfic where the theme is inspired by the MTL. With how much the writer had to edit and change, this could be considered a proper fanfic. I can’t wait to see what our author will cook.

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InsanityIsLife

Wanted to read the original myself before leaving a review. Now that I have, I can officially say that this version is WAY better. Not only does the author show respect to the original story and plot, but he also changes it just enough to make the story flow better, as well as the characters and interactions feel more natural and believable. I also like that while interactions, characters, and plot points have been added or changed, I still feel I can switch back and forth from this, and the original and feel comfortable enough that I know what's happening with the main plot doing so. While the characters and interactions add more to the story, they dont affect the main story beats that the original author wrote. On a side note, I do have to mention this is more of an adaptation than a translation, but I have to say this is how adaptations should be done.

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TheWandaShip

Author review! Though im not really author of the fanfic, just author of this particular book xD So, This is a MTL that's being heavily edited by me. The ratio is roughly 20:80, meaning 20% is true to MTL source, and 80% has been re-written to make the story more coherent and readable for the rest of us. I have changed ALOT from the original MTL, and it is my hope that the changes were for the better. Some issues that I noticed: 1) Romance. Is this Harem? I dont know. I am only at chapter 44 on the MTL. I can say for sure that the MAIN FML will be Wanda. This is non-negotiable because I am a Wandaship :D. Now, the romance between my book and the MTL will also be different. I will try to build the romance up instead of going like the MTL "You are my wife", "Yes I am your wife". In this fanfic, the romance that the MC shows on the Diary is complete BOGUS. It never happened. in fact, whatever is written in the diary is complete BOGUS, but the diary holders don't know that. So some interactions might make you go "If only they knew", well they don't, and that's what I like about the fanfic 😂😂 Wanda is aged 16, while the MC is aged 19. Some people were worried that i was having an old war veteran chasing after a young girl, nah nah. I think 16 and 19 is a decent age to set the FOUNDATIONS of a romance. Not full on romance yet, just the foundations. Wanda WILL make the comparisons of "If the other Wanda can love him, then so can I" but just take this at face value. This was meant to just show that Wanda is open to exploring romantic r/s with MC, but not as a GUARANTEED romance with MC. 2) Overboard. I have been told that i tend to go overboard with the way i Write. Please keep this in mind 3) Similarity. REMEMBER, THIS IS NOT AN ORIGINAL FANFIC. So of course there will be similarity to the actual source material xD I am only changing a few things to enhance the story. If you want to see the difference, check out "People are keeoing diaries in Marvel, The Avengers are confused" I will put up an Auxiliary chap soon for character pics, info, and any other things i need to point out! Thanks for reading!

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saxmepapi

Usually when an uploader on Webnovel says their upload is a "Translation", it just ends up being MTL'd and copy-pasted as it is without any effort from their side. Here, the translator might as well be the co-author with the changes he's making to the story (in a good way, of course!). Looking forward to where this story ends up and I can't wait to see the dynamic between wanda and the mc when they finally meet!

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Daoist302685

I have read this story from many different authors and I can say so far this one is the best translated and fixed version so far so please keep it up.

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Darth_Evolution898

would be better if the author wasn't a scamming liar will not consistently update on patreon will get mad if confronted with the fact they don't provide what's been paid for great potential terrible person writing the book

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UndercoverAgent

I only demand more CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jon_0094

I don't usually write a review but this is a quality translation l but honestly its more of an adaption/improvement of the story can't wait to see where this goes!

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Vengeful_Slave

I really didn't have any expectations for this one but it honestly surprised me. It's absolutely worth a read. Give it a try the characters are good and the interactions not dull. So yeah give it a try.

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saundchris

There is someone writing this book that’s further along it’s called marvel: journal writing by blackGoku222. They hit chapter 45 as of today.

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Pedro_0000

This ff was a translation of the mtl, but the author decided to fix it to make it readable and ended up doing a fantastic job, this ff can't even be called a translation anymore, it's obviously a new story based on Marvel

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Humbuub

The translation is definitely on point, but I dislike the story. Basically some of the characters have copies of MC's diaries, and MC's abilities strengthen the higher the trust was. That hooked my interest, but sadly it's just badly executed. The diary holders were the most manipulative and paranoid among the bunch, yet trust rate is higher than 50% already.

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Ghalib_Ali_5133

Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Heavy_Space

This is such an awesome story, and more power to author for not only translating but also improving it to such a vast degree. I know how it is to translate a novel, as I am translating one myself but to improve it to such a degree... awesome author... here take my powerstones which I was going to use on my story

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Jordan1908

I can't lie I'm also reading the MTL of this and I can honestly say that the spin the author has put on this is better than the original which has become unreadable over time.

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Kakarot1809

At first I thought this is a standard MTL novel, but author did a great job in translation. one of the best translation novel out here. so 5 ⭐

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Mapthin

This is very good! I need more chapters!! ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Darth_Evolution898

Good structure and direction so far excellent potential hopeful for more updates recommend a read

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Geralt_The_Jagger

The translation is as good as it can be, and the writing too, the translator does a good job, the only reason why I didn't give it 5 stars is the story itself, obviously it's Chinese so you shouldn't expect much depth, but more than "Diary System" it should be "Completely Embarrassing Drama System", basically the system makes what you write in your diary happen in simulations that transmit those events and feelings to your current self, meaning all the internal drama, the conflicting feelings are your own doing and not real, it's like when you were a teenager and you fantasized about being a tragic hero who lost his family. Honestly, you shouldn't expect much, read this to pass the time and don't be too critical, it's like a popcorn movie that they show on TV on a Sunday.