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5th chapter is the maximum I could read because that’s my limit for nonsense that I can tolerate. So congratulations, this novel is in my TOP 3 worst novels among the over 70 novels that I’ve read.
Переводчик ты очень сильный и крутой человек! Респект тебе! Фанфик также отличный и стоить его прочесть так как идея и даже реализация на достаточном уровне ! Дажададажажаддажажвжажажвжвжажжажажажажажажажажажажажажа
Sinceramente? começou muito bom, mas a tradução piorou depois de alguns capítulos, a proposta é boa e o sistema é interessante, se você não se importa com a tradução sem correções óbvias, leia tranquilamente, mas para mim não dá certo mais
Writing quality - ofcs it's 1/5 Updates - nobody is reading this 3/5 Story - probably good, but nobody will read this 3/5 Character design - barely average 3/5 World background - 3/5
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Story has been abandoned by the original creator for about 2 years now, leaves off right before want I expect the end to be too. Story is OK
this feels like a edited MTL and it is not the good kind. if the proper names and titles are used, it will be much better and i will give a better review. if you can read/look pass the improper names and titles, it is quite a good read
I like this fanfic but sometimes it's not properly translated (i read it for free so I'm not gonna complain about it) also thank you for the great fanfic ❤️
The actual story ain't that good but the stability of updates and the world background carry this rating cause it updates multiple chapters daily and its a Naruto fanfic so the background is carried. It would be a 5 start rating for me if the Chinese aspect of it was taken out, put into a Fort Knox Titan, shipped to the center of a red giant, and have the universe exploded on top of it. Only to be sucked in by a blackhole because it can survive anything and everything like those useless Chinese protagonists.
The stroy starts right after the destruction of Ukumaki clan and MC is transmigrated into few remaining survivors of the clan hiding during the aftermath. The system here allow MC to summon shinigami from bleach which sound kinda cool until you realzied they become MC absolute loyal slave without any freewill. I like mixing and matching of different world's power system, but when it starts involves summoning real people and slavery it leave a bad taste. Worse, this is a chinese story and when it include female summons then it might even include r@** packaged as something normal which is totally not something i'd want to read so i'd just avoid it all together. If you can get pass that then you might enjoy the novel.
I did read the MTL version. The power levels are messed up. Squad Captains are only equal to Kages of 5 villages. This problem became more glaring as story went on. Yhwach and Aizen were shown to be only at the level of Hashirama and Madara.
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Original : 重建涡之国，开局爆兵护庭十三队 MTL: Rebuilding the Kingdom of Whirlpool, starting with the Gotei Thirteenth Army already 162 chapter
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I really liked the work, I even went back to the mtl (which is undergoing maintenance) I hope the translation continues (especially the names which are a bit bad, I could fix them while waiting for the maintenance to finish)
I had a stroke reading the Sypnosis. I haven’t actually read the story yet.
Haven't read it yet but I already read it in the MTL and it was quite good, even though there were grammar mistakes there it was still negligible. Hope this author manages to continue the fanfic since it stopped updating 3 to 4 months ago
Despite the defective Chinese catchphrases, and the lack of correctness of the names of some characters, it could be an interesting read, but just that, interesting. To be GOOD, it's quite far
Seems like it did decent story but the translation in grammar is horrendous. If you're translating a story, please do it properly or don't do it at all. I hope the author can rewrite the story with a proper translation. But as it is now this story is...
5th chapter is the maximum I could read because that’s my limit for nonsense that I can tolerate. So congratulations, this novel is in my TOP 3 worst novels among the over 70 novels that I’ve read.
Переводчик ты очень сильный и крутой человек! Респект тебе! Фанфик также отличный и стоить его прочесть так как идея и даже реализация на достаточном уровне ! Дажададажажаддажажвжажажвжвжажжажажажажажажажажажажажажа
Sinceramente? começou muito bom, mas a tradução piorou depois de alguns capítulos, a proposta é boa e o sistema é interessante, se você não se importa com a tradução sem correções óbvias, leia tranquilamente, mas para mim não dá certo mais
Writing quality - ofcs it's 1/5 Updates - nobody is reading this 3/5 Story - probably good, but nobody will read this 3/5 Character design - barely average 3/5 World background - 3/5
MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating. MTL novel, so 100% deserves a 1 star rating.
Spoiler enthüllen Story has been abandoned by the original creator for about 2 years now, leaves off right before want I expect the end to be too. Story is OK
this feels like a edited MTL and it is not the good kind. if the proper names and titles are used, it will be much better and i will give a better review. if you can read/look pass the improper names and titles, it is quite a good read
I like this fanfic but sometimes it's not properly translated (i read it for free so I'm not gonna complain about it) also thank you for the great fanfic ❤️
The actual story ain't that good but the stability of updates and the world background carry this rating cause it updates multiple chapters daily and its a Naruto fanfic so the background is carried. It would be a 5 start rating for me if the Chinese aspect of it was taken out, put into a Fort Knox Titan, shipped to the center of a red giant, and have the universe exploded on top of it. Only to be sucked in by a blackhole because it can survive anything and everything like those useless Chinese protagonists.
The stroy starts right after the destruction of Ukumaki clan and MC is transmigrated into few remaining survivors of the clan hiding during the aftermath. The system here allow MC to summon shinigami from bleach which sound kinda cool until you realzied they become MC absolute loyal slave without any freewill. I like mixing and matching of different world's power system, but when it starts involves summoning real people and slavery it leave a bad taste. Worse, this is a chinese story and when it include female summons then it might even include r@** packaged as something normal which is totally not something i'd want to read so i'd just avoid it all together. If you can get pass that then you might enjoy the novel.
I did read the MTL version. The power levels are messed up. Squad Captains are only equal to Kages of 5 villages. This problem became more glaring as story went on. Yhwach and Aizen were shown to be only at the level of Hashirama and Madara.
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Original : 重建涡之国，开局爆兵护庭十三队 MTL: Rebuilding the Kingdom of Whirlpool, starting with the Gotei Thirteenth Army already 162 chapter
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Spoiler enthüllen I really liked the work, I even went back to the mtl (which is undergoing maintenance) I hope the translation continues (especially the names which are a bit bad, I could fix them while waiting for the maintenance to finish)
I had a stroke reading the Sypnosis. I haven’t actually read the story yet.
Haven't read it yet but I already read it in the MTL and it was quite good, even though there were grammar mistakes there it was still negligible. Hope this author manages to continue the fanfic since it stopped updating 3 to 4 months ago
Despite the defective Chinese catchphrases, and the lack of correctness of the names of some characters, it could be an interesting read, but just that, interesting. To be GOOD, it's quite far
Seems like it did decent story but the translation in grammar is horrendous. If you're translating a story, please do it properly or don't do it at all. I hope the author can rewrite the story with a proper translation. But as it is now this story is...