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This novel is promising, but I’d suggest rewriting it because the chapters are too short and boring. Also, the MC feels bland—his power is supposed to be equal to Zenos, yet he’s still being pushed around by the Grand Priest for some reason, and he does nothing about it. I understand he just woke up, also the writing feels like it was done by an AI.
This novel is promising, but I’d suggest rewriting it because the chapters are too short and boring. Also, the MC feels bland—his power is supposed to be equal to Zenos, yet he’s still being pushed around by the Grand Priest for some reason, and he does nothing about it. I understand he just woke up, also the writing feels like it was done by an AI.