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datte bhai,this is awesome. if only the chap's were longer it'd be perfect. p.s the status comes up nearly every chapter,it would be better if it was less
This is my favorite fanfic on indian movies untill now writing is improving too after some chapters. I have read it till chapter 49 and the way this story is heading i think he will be Supreme yaskin from kalki. Still nice fanfic.
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I was enjoying it but then I saw the Harem tag. 🤮🤢. You're a good writer, stop catering to all the losers and perverts. I hope your other works aren't Harem. Good Luck.
this is one of the best fanfiction novel and THE BEST INDIAN MOVIE fanfiction novel in this platform....
I love the concept and liking the story so far! Completed the Lucifer arc! My only concern is the writing quality, slightly poor grammar and sentence structures but those I can ignore and is easy for the author to improve by having an editor, does not affect me much cause I can understand the context and update in my head, but Author-san can you not repeat the same sentence with different words in some of your chapters, that is the main reason I gave you 3 stars for writing quality, hope you write more awesome chapters ☺️ and keep up the good work!!![img=update][img=recommend]
Bro this fic is not like a novel or story at all it feels like reading movie script. There are no dialogues, emotions, play and direction in here. At first I was so happy that finally an Indian fic is here but these here just killed my mood
shukriya author,though its only 5 chapters,it looks awesome. looking forward to more chapters
Hey Guys Author here, As I have read multiple fanpics, I did not able to find any Indian fanpics which has lots of chapters to read. There were few, but the collection of chapters were minimum. I have tried to encourage the authors of those fanpics to write it more, but I did not get any response. So I decided to write my own fanpics. So please support me so that I can get encouraged and write more chapters.
datte bhai,this is awesome. if only the chap's were longer it'd be perfect. p.s the status comes up nearly every chapter,it would be better if it was less
This is my favorite fanfic on indian movies untill now writing is improving too after some chapters. I have read it till chapter 49 and the way this story is heading i think he will be Supreme yaskin from kalki. Still nice fanfic.
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I was enjoying it but then I saw the Harem tag. 🤮🤢. You're a good writer, stop catering to all the losers and perverts. I hope your other works aren't Harem. Good Luck.
this is one of the best fanfiction novel and THE BEST INDIAN MOVIE fanfiction novel in this platform....
I love the concept and liking the story so far! Completed the Lucifer arc! My only concern is the writing quality, slightly poor grammar and sentence structures but those I can ignore and is easy for the author to improve by having an editor, does not affect me much cause I can understand the context and update in my head, but Author-san can you not repeat the same sentence with different words in some of your chapters, that is the main reason I gave you 3 stars for writing quality, hope you write more awesome chapters ☺️ and keep up the good work!!![img=update][img=recommend]
Bro this fic is not like a novel or story at all it feels like reading movie script. There are no dialogues, emotions, play and direction in here. At first I was so happy that finally an Indian fic is here but these here just killed my mood
shukriya author,though its only 5 chapters,it looks awesome. looking forward to more chapters
Hey Guys Author here, As I have read multiple fanpics, I did not able to find any Indian fanpics which has lots of chapters to read. There were few, but the collection of chapters were minimum. I have tried to encourage the authors of those fanpics to write it more, but I did not get any response. So I decided to write my own fanpics. So please support me so that I can get encouraged and write more chapters.