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waste of time, I enjoyed the first hundred chapters. it bullshit from there on.
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disgusting 🤢 was good until the author decided to add about 15-20 pages of padding in this trying to promote another of their stories . DON'T BUY CHAPTERS AS A SET DUE TO THIS YOU'LL WASTE YOUR COINS[img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad]
Pretty good novel, the only think that I might sometimes hoped was better was with the interaction and abilities of the system, wish they were more OP.
Endearing start, taboo cliches, surprisingly little nationalism. Irritating changes in character and repetitive phrases to accommodate word padding. FML treated as a dumb ditsy weakling. Slow paced with no real improvement, ML ignores system use "Father system" and spends more time speaking sweet nothings to his wife than raising and teaching his children. 20ish Shameless plugs into other books you have to pay for if you want to buy in bulk and get a discount. All of that, while moderately irritating, doesn't detract from what is at minium, a well written book. What does disgust me and ultimately made me regret reading it, was the random weird cultivation turn that ultimately serves no purpose. If I wanted a cultivation hack'n'slash, they're a dime a dozen. I definitely wouldn't be reading a story that purportedly revolves around a 'father system' As for coherent grammatically correct writing, it is on point, so if my complaints sound like 'noting much' to you, you will probably enjoy it.
I'm at chapter 18 so far and I like the pacing of the story and how the romance is progressing. it's developing quite nicely and I'm excited to keep reading
It’s good not that cliche and it’s nice and slow Typical Chinese but this one got taste
Awesome book!!! 😎👍 Love the characters and the story line is not over details's too. 💯💯💯
2+2+2+3+2)/=2.2 sigh....... I was genuinely enjoying this until the FL decided to succumb to blackmail without trusting or communicating with the mc who had more than proved himself to her and been accepted too!
2+2+2+3+2)/5=2.2 Bai Cai ... I was enjoying this along with your author notes. why did you have to do that during the sick grandfather arc?! zhuge got a spy in the bai house in less than a day. not being able to do the same later in more time is Plot. and that plot disgusted me!
The novel has everything to be excellent and successful, but the translator ruined it out of greed. This one earns so much from coins by splitting novels into small chapters. Hope this translator have no work later. At least, fewer translators with this level of greed can make people happier and no longer look down on any translator anymore.
This piece is a good one unlike other ones where mc is disrespected continuing with face slapping scene. This ones a true slice of life novel with many romantic moments . And author san change the profile photo it looks dull maybe thats the reason peaple dont understand the goodness of this novel..
even though its a little cring i love it but pls stop being overly concerned like feeling heart ach for someones pain its too much my brother cant even look at and i wanted to introduce him to reading novels
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I’m still only partway through the story, but it’s a cute little gem, so far without any of the angsty revenge-filled dog blood plot that gets kind of old. I’m looking forward to the character progression of the leads, and the growing-up of the babies! 💜
Good read!! enjoying it so far , unfortunately my FP is finnished and ill have to wait a bit , sigh if only I could continue to read , oh and I was wondering , is this a original novel or a translation?
I have only read the first lot of free chapters but from what I have read, I am actually am enjoying this novel. So we have the standard system novel however this one is tied to the MC making his suddenly acquired family of quads (from a drunken one night stand earlier with the campus belle), to be cared for, loved and raised right. From the get go there are road blocks appearing in the MCs path that he has to overcome. One being that Bai Susu is from some very wealthy family, with her life very much controlled in her growth. Her parents see her as a tool for benefits, whilst she only has family love from her grandfather. Basically the reader learns that the family will not allow such a relationship to develop as Ye Fan (MC) is not rich, nor from a notable background, and therefore won’t bring any benefits to the Bai Clan. The system rewards the MC with money and skills for doing acts of good for his family, from what I have read he has gained so far, one skill, body attributes increases, a pile of baby gear plus some parent gifts and, I think it was, 4 million 200 thousand dollars, yuan, not sure, though it seemed a pretty rounded type of returns. The negatives. Gender issues cropping up here and there, since this is being translated I would hope the person doing this job can improve his/her game. Also there is a number of grammar issues which are mild but for me I find it a bit jarring. Some leaps of assumptions that you can gloss over, I wasn’t phased by them but I did note them. Anyways, I don’t know what it is about this novel, however I was compelled to read all the free chapters as it is a nice feel good story that did make me smile reading of the antics happening. Overall, in my mind, I believe it is worth a read. I hope it appeals to others.
waste of time, I enjoyed the first hundred chapters. it bullshit from there on.
Spoiler enthüllen disgusting 🤢 was good until the author decided to add about 15-20 pages of padding in this trying to promote another of their stories . DON'T BUY CHAPTERS AS A SET DUE TO THIS YOU'LL WASTE YOUR COINS[img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad]
Pretty good novel, the only think that I might sometimes hoped was better was with the interaction and abilities of the system, wish they were more OP.
Endearing start, taboo cliches, surprisingly little nationalism. Irritating changes in character and repetitive phrases to accommodate word padding. FML treated as a dumb ditsy weakling. Slow paced with no real improvement, ML ignores system use "Father system" and spends more time speaking sweet nothings to his wife than raising and teaching his children. 20ish Shameless plugs into other books you have to pay for if you want to buy in bulk and get a discount. All of that, while moderately irritating, doesn't detract from what is at minium, a well written book. What does disgust me and ultimately made me regret reading it, was the random weird cultivation turn that ultimately serves no purpose. If I wanted a cultivation hack'n'slash, they're a dime a dozen. I definitely wouldn't be reading a story that purportedly revolves around a 'father system' As for coherent grammatically correct writing, it is on point, so if my complaints sound like 'noting much' to you, you will probably enjoy it.
I'm at chapter 18 so far and I like the pacing of the story and how the romance is progressing. it's developing quite nicely and I'm excited to keep reading
It’s good not that cliche and it’s nice and slow Typical Chinese but this one got taste
Awesome book!!! 😎👍 Love the characters and the story line is not over details's too. 💯💯💯
2+2+2+3+2)/=2.2 sigh....... I was genuinely enjoying this until the FL decided to succumb to blackmail without trusting or communicating with the mc who had more than proved himself to her and been accepted too!
2+2+2+3+2)/5=2.2 Bai Cai ... I was enjoying this along with your author notes. why did you have to do that during the sick grandfather arc?! zhuge got a spy in the bai house in less than a day. not being able to do the same later in more time is Plot. and that plot disgusted me!
The novel has everything to be excellent and successful, but the translator ruined it out of greed. This one earns so much from coins by splitting novels into small chapters. Hope this translator have no work later. At least, fewer translators with this level of greed can make people happier and no longer look down on any translator anymore.
This piece is a good one unlike other ones where mc is disrespected continuing with face slapping scene. This ones a true slice of life novel with many romantic moments . And author san change the profile photo it looks dull maybe thats the reason peaple dont understand the goodness of this novel..
even though its a little cring i love it but pls stop being overly concerned like feeling heart ach for someones pain its too much my brother cant even look at and i wanted to introduce him to reading novels
Spoiler enthüllen I’m still only partway through the story, but it’s a cute little gem, so far without any of the angsty revenge-filled dog blood plot that gets kind of old. I’m looking forward to the character progression of the leads, and the growing-up of the babies! 💜
Good read!! enjoying it so far , unfortunately my FP is finnished and ill have to wait a bit , sigh if only I could continue to read , oh and I was wondering , is this a original novel or a translation?
I have only read the first lot of free chapters but from what I have read, I am actually am enjoying this novel. So we have the standard system novel however this one is tied to the MC making his suddenly acquired family of quads (from a drunken one night stand earlier with the campus belle), to be cared for, loved and raised right. From the get go there are road blocks appearing in the MCs path that he has to overcome. One being that Bai Susu is from some very wealthy family, with her life very much controlled in her growth. Her parents see her as a tool for benefits, whilst she only has family love from her grandfather. Basically the reader learns that the family will not allow such a relationship to develop as Ye Fan (MC) is not rich, nor from a notable background, and therefore won’t bring any benefits to the Bai Clan. The system rewards the MC with money and skills for doing acts of good for his family, from what I have read he has gained so far, one skill, body attributes increases, a pile of baby gear plus some parent gifts and, I think it was, 4 million 200 thousand dollars, yuan, not sure, though it seemed a pretty rounded type of returns. The negatives. Gender issues cropping up here and there, since this is being translated I would hope the person doing this job can improve his/her game. Also there is a number of grammar issues which are mild but for me I find it a bit jarring. Some leaps of assumptions that you can gloss over, I wasn’t phased by them but I did note them. Anyways, I don’t know what it is about this novel, however I was compelled to read all the free chapters as it is a nice feel good story that did make me smile reading of the antics happening. Overall, in my mind, I believe it is worth a read. I hope it appeals to others.
one hell of a boring drama too much of drama