Reviews of After Divorce, I Inherited the Game's Fortune by Grapefruit is too lousy - Webnovel

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Deuce_ex_Machina

The novel is one of the better ones in the system tycoon genre. It doesn't resort to truly unrealistic story elements and keeps the tycoon buildup relatively balanced with story pacing. The harem expansion proves to be a flaw though. As the story develops there is a tendency to marginalize many characters and plotlines to the point of forgetting characters completely or abandoning plotlines and even system rewards from those plotlines. Instances where some characters are set to have importance but utterly forgotten later happen often and even some are entirely written out of the story for no apparent reason other than the author forgot they existed and for story convenience. It seems the author is too interested later on in expanding the MC's range of tycoon influence. So abandoning earlier plot development for convenience becomes the norm. Hopefully, the author revisits and closes these loops. And remembering already established characters that have been marginalized without bloating the already sizeable harem.

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Daoist5Fqadg

I found a raw / mtl translation but it stopped updating at chapter 518. Not sure if the author has dropped this series.

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kashiro86

please make it advance next time, the system is to trash

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jabzz
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the story is interesting but the problem is related to the money.100 million turn to 1 billion.1.2 billion turn to 12 billion.

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NlGGER
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goods and scott harrington for the better price of the

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Alma_Teresa

excelente!! buena historia, y personajes!!

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I_HATE_NIGGERS

A little bit better than others in the same genre

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Tan1sh

Good Story. Does anyone know its raws??

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Dejavu2001

Great story, keep posting [img=recommend]

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Web_Novel_5863

just started reading this and i must say it gets getting better and better..

4mth
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Alanray64

Quite a good read this and I do like the system he has been given. It appears to flawlessly step up at the best of times with interesting results. I’m guessing it is harem as he has a number of women floating around, most though are simple gold-diggers however his system ability to capitalise on them and refer to them as NPCs gives him chances to make more money, so if he didn’t get a few girls onside he be shorting himself. Anyways, it’s a nice read, a bit of face slapping, but delivered pretty well. Premium chapters are to much, so will either wait for chapters to be released over time or find the raw for this. Worth a read 👍

5mth
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Young_fruit_Smiley

Green tea bit¢|-| .... give me raws . !!🤣

5mth
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Deuce_ex_Machina

The novel is one of the better ones in the system tycoon genre. It doesn't resort to truly unrealistic story elements and keeps the tycoon buildup relatively balanced with story pacing. The harem expansion proves to be a flaw though. As the story develops there is a tendency to marginalize many characters and plotlines to the point of forgetting characters completely or abandoning plotlines and even system rewards from those plotlines. Instances where some characters are set to have importance but utterly forgotten later happen often and even some are entirely written out of the story for no apparent reason other than the author forgot they existed and for story convenience. It seems the author is too interested later on in expanding the MC's range of tycoon influence. So abandoning earlier plot development for convenience becomes the norm. Hopefully, the author revisits and closes these loops. And remembering already established characters that have been marginalized without bloating the already sizeable harem.

8d
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Daoist5Fqadg

I found a raw / mtl translation but it stopped updating at chapter 518. Not sure if the author has dropped this series.

14d
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kashiro86

please make it advance next time, the system is to trash

25d
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jabzz
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the story is interesting but the problem is related to the money.100 million turn to 1 billion.1.2 billion turn to 12 billion.

1mth
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NlGGER
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goods and scott harrington for the better price of the

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3mth
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Alma_Teresa

excelente!! buena historia, y personajes!!

3mth
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I_HATE_NIGGERS

A little bit better than others in the same genre

4mth
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Tan1sh

Good Story. Does anyone know its raws??

4mth
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Dejavu2001

Great story, keep posting [img=recommend]

4mth
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Web_Novel_5863

just started reading this and i must say it gets getting better and better..

4mth
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Alanray64

Quite a good read this and I do like the system he has been given. It appears to flawlessly step up at the best of times with interesting results. I’m guessing it is harem as he has a number of women floating around, most though are simple gold-diggers however his system ability to capitalise on them and refer to them as NPCs gives him chances to make more money, so if he didn’t get a few girls onside he be shorting himself. Anyways, it’s a nice read, a bit of face slapping, but delivered pretty well. Premium chapters are to much, so will either wait for chapters to be released over time or find the raw for this. Worth a read 👍

5mth
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Young_fruit_Smiley

Green tea bit¢|-| .... give me raws . !!🤣

5mth
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