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I'm sorry but i just got to say this, is this a family development story or a war development story because all i see is war war war, you've got a good story but it more focus on the war aspect which doesn't help the main character develop his family to empower himself
I'm seriously telling you that MC might end up being the cause of his family clan's extermination 😂😂 The story isn't so bad. You get your usual MTL shenanigans, but they don't hinder the flow of the story. MC transmigrates into the body of a dying man (who probably died). His golden finger isn't overpowering, but more of a minor informative panel with minimal perks. It's definitely a casual read and not a bad one.
so, this novel focuses less on mc but more on kingdom building or clan building. at least in first 500 - 600 chapters its focuses city doing stuff. mc is cautious, he will not kill weake enemy to keep them delusional and not cone in sights of true powerhouse. we get 100s of chapters without mc. you can literally skip chapters one you reach 200-300, it doesnt matter at all. also we get repeated sentences ex. courtyard exuding mysterious and ancient aura but bluestone city is exception. strength is eternal sonething something. story edges you. you are like now things will progress but they dont. sonetimes character progress, and then dont appear for many chapters which is fine, but most focus is on city building, conflict are like watered down tea. author really is bad at those. its cultivation , maybe focusing on mechanics, cheat and showing clansmen progress but even that is ignored for focusing on watered down conflict.
Spoiler enthüllen
not bad it had a pretty good start, some kingdom and army building, but later on the system inexplicably disappears and he somehow gets talented at cultivating even though it says he doesn’t have much, even seemingly mediocre. He then plateaus in everything else except cultivation, he doesn’t bother doing anything else aside from routine cultivation, pill making, and some other socializing. Everything else is about the family and their expansion, it gets monotonous.
greedy ahh translator usual chapter splitting like at least make it unnoticeable they use 0 effort
Worse than the normal trash. Translation quality is subpar. Structure of sentences/info dump is done by a 2 year old.
Trash novel where everyone is dumb so MC can feel smart. And there's no plot, only dumb people. They do stupid things and make sense on their own. That's how the story progresses.
Boggest issue is trying to read it, story appears decent, but the translation is unreadable.
Except for some errors in translation quality, everything else is good. We've got the Mc being transmigrated to a martial arts world, into the body of a dying ancestor of the Luo family, which is situated inside a County. He is equipped with a panel, which allows him to extract a safe amount of blood qi from all his descendents.(Safe as in, the descendents won't be majorly affected). This blood qi can be used for upgrading his realm, techniques etc etc. All the characters have their unique quality about them. Story is progressing really well so far. The thing I like about this story is that Mc is smart enough to not go around Conquering every place he can conquer, fearing that someone more powerful may notice it and hence destroy his Luo family. All the Conquering is done by the family members. Mc, the ancestor just has to make a move if any difficulty arises in path of conquer for the family. (This is an interesting because all the other characters are also getting the highlight.) [Love this part]. The world that Mc is in is divided into two parts. Mortal and immortal. (Not divided in a true sense. I am talking about the power division). There are five realms in total for mortals, after that comes the immortal realms. The place Mc is residing in is just a corner of a mortal kingdom. The Mortal kingdom is also just in the corner of a divine state. For now, we just know that there are ten divine states. The Luo family is slowing emerging out of their cocoon. By now, they have already conquered three prefectures under the Mortal kingdom. I am excited and eager to further read the journey of the Luo family from the Luo mountain prefecture.
Its not a bad read but once you get to ch 78 they split the ch into 3 in hopes you just bulk buy they and not notice
Waste of time. The first 24 chapters are full of other people scheming, but not doing anything but talking about the same things over and over, and waiting for the MC to die. Well, everyone except the MC is scheming. He’s doing nothing but waiting for his family to build up qi points then punching the “use points” vampire button to increase his cultivation/lifespan. Literally nothing else: his kids handle the clan enemies, where handle means worry about but do nothing. It’s an obvious money grab with no redeeming qualities up until it hit premium. I don’t suggest you even waste your time reading it.
It's fairly decent for what it is and is definitely worth the read, unless you don't like it when authors spend a significant amount of time focused on someone who isn't the MC. 7/10
dying and possessing the body of a martial expert whom died of old age, his golden finger is to consume the blood of his descendants, this weaken them, but the system does it at his command so they have no idea he is the reason for their constant weakened state, every few days he with the system consumes their blood to live a few more days, using their blood he can also speed up his cultivation, he needs to nurture his blood bags I mean descendants.
Suitable for casual read, definitely not the most intriguing and nail biting story, however it’s still at the very least readable. Also a genre I’m fond of in regards to family cultivation. Overall it’s simply average. Not absolute trash or absolute excellence, just average thus far 20 chapters in.
I read to chapter 726 and it is an ok read, but I’m confused. Do the main character know how to fight ? If I’m not mistaken the main character have had 4 fights and each fight he had a huge advantage due to his cultivation being higher and he use some talismans and formations to win. But in chapter 726 their are 5 people around the same cultivation threatening to attack his family and the MC is playing it cool, like it’s nothing to him. I don’t get it, do he even know how to throw a punch.
I'm sorry but i just got to say this, is this a family development story or a war development story because all i see is war war war, you've got a good story but it more focus on the war aspect which doesn't help the main character develop his family to empower himself
I'm seriously telling you that MC might end up being the cause of his family clan's extermination 😂😂 The story isn't so bad. You get your usual MTL shenanigans, but they don't hinder the flow of the story. MC transmigrates into the body of a dying man (who probably died). His golden finger isn't overpowering, but more of a minor informative panel with minimal perks. It's definitely a casual read and not a bad one.
so, this novel focuses less on mc but more on kingdom building or clan building. at least in first 500 - 600 chapters its focuses city doing stuff. mc is cautious, he will not kill weake enemy to keep them delusional and not cone in sights of true powerhouse. we get 100s of chapters without mc. you can literally skip chapters one you reach 200-300, it doesnt matter at all. also we get repeated sentences ex. courtyard exuding mysterious and ancient aura but bluestone city is exception. strength is eternal sonething something. story edges you. you are like now things will progress but they dont. sonetimes character progress, and then dont appear for many chapters which is fine, but most focus is on city building, conflict are like watered down tea. author really is bad at those. its cultivation , maybe focusing on mechanics, cheat and showing clansmen progress but even that is ignored for focusing on watered down conflict.
Spoiler enthüllen not bad it had a pretty good start, some kingdom and army building, but later on the system inexplicably disappears and he somehow gets talented at cultivating even though it says he doesn’t have much, even seemingly mediocre. He then plateaus in everything else except cultivation, he doesn’t bother doing anything else aside from routine cultivation, pill making, and some other socializing. Everything else is about the family and their expansion, it gets monotonous.
greedy ahh translator usual chapter splitting like at least make it unnoticeable they use 0 effort
Worse than the normal trash. Translation quality is subpar. Structure of sentences/info dump is done by a 2 year old.
Trash novel where everyone is dumb so MC can feel smart. And there's no plot, only dumb people. They do stupid things and make sense on their own. That's how the story progresses.
Boggest issue is trying to read it, story appears decent, but the translation is unreadable.
Except for some errors in translation quality, everything else is good. We've got the Mc being transmigrated to a martial arts world, into the body of a dying ancestor of the Luo family, which is situated inside a County. He is equipped with a panel, which allows him to extract a safe amount of blood qi from all his descendents.(Safe as in, the descendents won't be majorly affected). This blood qi can be used for upgrading his realm, techniques etc etc. All the characters have their unique quality about them. Story is progressing really well so far. The thing I like about this story is that Mc is smart enough to not go around Conquering every place he can conquer, fearing that someone more powerful may notice it and hence destroy his Luo family. All the Conquering is done by the family members. Mc, the ancestor just has to make a move if any difficulty arises in path of conquer for the family. (This is an interesting because all the other characters are also getting the highlight.) [Love this part]. The world that Mc is in is divided into two parts. Mortal and immortal. (Not divided in a true sense. I am talking about the power division). There are five realms in total for mortals, after that comes the immortal realms. The place Mc is residing in is just a corner of a mortal kingdom. The Mortal kingdom is also just in the corner of a divine state. For now, we just know that there are ten divine states. The Luo family is slowing emerging out of their cocoon. By now, they have already conquered three prefectures under the Mortal kingdom. I am excited and eager to further read the journey of the Luo family from the Luo mountain prefecture.
Its not a bad read but once you get to ch 78 they split the ch into 3 in hopes you just bulk buy they and not notice
Waste of time. The first 24 chapters are full of other people scheming, but not doing anything but talking about the same things over and over, and waiting for the MC to die. Well, everyone except the MC is scheming. He’s doing nothing but waiting for his family to build up qi points then punching the “use points” vampire button to increase his cultivation/lifespan. Literally nothing else: his kids handle the clan enemies, where handle means worry about but do nothing. It’s an obvious money grab with no redeeming qualities up until it hit premium. I don’t suggest you even waste your time reading it.
It's fairly decent for what it is and is definitely worth the read, unless you don't like it when authors spend a significant amount of time focused on someone who isn't the MC. 7/10
dying and possessing the body of a martial expert whom died of old age, his golden finger is to consume the blood of his descendants, this weaken them, but the system does it at his command so they have no idea he is the reason for their constant weakened state, every few days he with the system consumes their blood to live a few more days, using their blood he can also speed up his cultivation, he needs to nurture his blood bags I mean descendants.
Suitable for casual read, definitely not the most intriguing and nail biting story, however it’s still at the very least readable. Also a genre I’m fond of in regards to family cultivation. Overall it’s simply average. Not absolute trash or absolute excellence, just average thus far 20 chapters in.
I read to chapter 726 and it is an ok read, but I’m confused. Do the main character know how to fight ? If I’m not mistaken the main character have had 4 fights and each fight he had a huge advantage due to his cultivation being higher and he use some talismans and formations to win. But in chapter 726 their are 5 people around the same cultivation threatening to attack his family and the MC is playing it cool, like it’s nothing to him. I don’t get it, do he even know how to throw a punch.