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I thought this story was good from my point of view and aspects to improve such as the development of the main and secondary characters, not to mention that the development of the world needs to improve a little. Leaving this aside, I think it is an excellent story that deserves a continuation PSD: Organize Tags Better
To be honest, the story develops interestingly and is translated well or written natively in English. What throughs me off is that its like a urban cultivator mixed with a young master story based in the USA. Its a really weird read. I haven't seen an actual description of the characters that were not summoned, and no world background has been really established. The stability of updates I rated right in the middle as I don't feel like there is enough of the story written that actually progresses the story for a accurate measurement. I am conflicted on if I would recommend this story or not. On one hand its pretty bog standard for the story archetype but it being based in the USA without any form of adaption to Western culture really feels weird. Specifically the Young Master thing. You may find it here in the super rich but the number of families here in the USA that are that rich would limit the young master type story to a handful or two of families.
I thought this story was good from my point of view and aspects to improve such as the development of the main and secondary characters, not to mention that the development of the world needs to improve a little. Leaving this aside, I think it is an excellent story that deserves a continuation PSD: Organize Tags Better
To be honest, the story develops interestingly and is translated well or written natively in English. What throughs me off is that its like a urban cultivator mixed with a young master story based in the USA. Its a really weird read. I haven't seen an actual description of the characters that were not summoned, and no world background has been really established. The stability of updates I rated right in the middle as I don't feel like there is enough of the story written that actually progresses the story for a accurate measurement. I am conflicted on if I would recommend this story or not. On one hand its pretty bog standard for the story archetype but it being based in the USA without any form of adaption to Western culture really feels weird. Specifically the Young Master thing. You may find it here in the super rich but the number of families here in the USA that are that rich would limit the young master type story to a handful or two of families.
when's the next chapter this is a great story