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Author your books are good. Great plot and character development. Good writing with hardly any errors. It's why I love your works and why I'm glad you came back to webnovel. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
Another absolute banger from AlienWarlord.The authors ability to pace a story leaves every chapter feeling like another well placed facet in a grand gem.
One of the best fanfics I've ever read. Truly a masterpiece. More chapters please. **********************************************************************************
good story enjoying it are you taking a break or just updating less [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
To cancel out the bot reviews. Harem in that every girl who meets mc becomes a gushing mess for him, secondly author does forced nonese (reference chapter 80 with Natasha). Third complete hypocratie with a mc when it comes to morals if it is for a pretty girl. Read other reveiews for more in depth
A good concept with poor execution, especially in characters designs and consistency. The issue is most apparent on the main character with his twisted personality, ironic given his source and state of powers should indicate a narrow type of personality, a personality he has anything but
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The story promises, but it only disappoints, the protagonist is insufficient, he speaks as if he were right and is a hypocrite, you play with lives as you please and then sell yourself as the good guy, his relationship with the girls is forced only to combine them
I really like how the author made and wrote in the characters. Great fiction, worth your time t read. Lotz of fun to read too, and great changes or additions to established characters.
Finished reading up to the escape with Nebula from Ronan. Unfortunately, I am quite disappointed with the work after Spider-Man. Self-confidence, humor, funny situations and action are expected from Star-Lord. Here are monotonous lessons, suffering, a little movement and more suffering. Probably, this is the author's attempt to show a stepwise growth from weak to strong, but in my opinion - it did not work. Peter's behavior also raises questions, it seems that two souls have merged in him - a boy and an adult man, but in the text there is no such merger, this is some kind of unrealistic form of bipolar disorder. In his thoughts, the main character constantly repeats to us how adult, wise, mature he is, but as soon as the description of the outside world begins - he begins to do and say wild bullshit. Almost all of his actions raise questions. And now, during a shootout, when the team is trying to escape from Ronan's flagship, Peter stops and begins another tearful dialogue with Nebula about suffering and trust. Damn it! I'll try to continue reading when the butthurt calms down, maybe when the main character "grows up" it will become more interesting.
Tengo una pregunta vas agregar los juegos starkiller y Jedi survive a la historia y su habilidad y también está el planeta escondido llamado trono es un planeta escondido y habitable también vas agregar eso juego a la historia Star war a la historia????????????????????????????????????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I love star wars story in marvel . Very very good funfic. Thanks for the chapters. And more more!))) [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Great story overall. If your one to nit pick grammar or plot holes then this story may bug you, but if you sit back and allow it to take you for a journey through the stars this story can be a lot of fun. Overall, isn't that what we all read these for?
You know, the story is great, the only bad thing is the harem that was built based on stupidity and that the author takes all the personality away from those characters. But other than that, the story is great.
Had to drop due to the dark tag sorry I was not expecting a sad fanfic for star lord
this book is just great I personally enjoy this story even though I did not expect the crossover into transformers I loved it
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MC: SI Peter Quill / Star Lord Rating: 10/10 Love: Natasha, Mikaela MC is set in an AU MCU, Star wars universe which is relatively well done. The story is very unique and creative. The time jumps are very good and the pacing of the story moves along well. Oh and the Transformers are there too
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As of chapter 27 The character design in just cringe , but that's ok, but what i can't stand is BLOODY AI WRITING, seriously your previous book about voldy SI was so much better, I had high hopes , the plot line is good but cannot tolerate the AI WRITING, I regret not being able to give less that 1 start for Wiring Quality PS : If ai wiring stops or becomes more tolerable like not 5 adjectives every sentence , leave a reply , i'll continue reading this book
Soul merging character stories are shit. Either be one or the other not both. That's just an excuse for being lazy and not wanting to think of a character unique personality so just use the original character's and give them the buff of knowledge. Perfect excuse: soul merging
One of the best crossover (Star Wars, Marvel, Transformers, and more) novels I've read recently. it has some issues where there are just so many characters that they sometimes get forgotten about while the MC does his thing, but that's sorta how it goes unless you want to do different PoVs every single chapter. overall it's a really good novel. I wish there were even more chapters but the update stability is pretty solid.
It surprised me how good this book was. I thought it would be cliche from the summary, but it's actually got a good story. It has solid character growth, but I could do without the overpowered powers. I do like how it includes how he involves his team to accomplish what he got. I also loved how the author blended star wars with marvel content. solid book.[img=update]
It's not in the tags, but it's harem. Literally with every female MC meets, they fall for him.
As far as I could see the narrative is too formal, it needs to be more fluid with words that are better understood by everyone, and the whole situation seems wrong to me, it is necessary to understand geopolitics and human relations in the contexts of the characters, which if you know the story well it is possible to have a good idea, I think that is not the case in this story, I honestly think that when it starts wrong as a consequence everything goes wrong, this is just my opinion but I think the author is to be congratulated for the attempt but he should try again in another story.
one of the most hypocritical and self righteous MC I've ever read, one moment he committed an atrocity, next he spouted some "no need to thank me" speech with a "I'm always right" smirk
Pretty neat yeah❣️❤️ Transformers!!!! X Star Wars X Marvel!!!! I love the plot line with the all spark taking place of the cube. I hope we have similar situations that the author writes small colbas to fulfill the missing infinity stones. Also no stones in this fic😅 Overall I really enjoy this book so I suggest y’all sick to it!
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a lot of cringe stuff. ...............................................................................................................................
shit.........shit.........shit............shit.............shit.........shit.............shit...........shit...........shit..........shit...........shit.............shit
Writing quality is good, so is the update stability and world background absolutely no complaints. The story development and character design make me want to slam a scooter into my shin. The MC is a morally flip flop of a character who decides when and where to show mercy and only goes out of his way to redeem people if they are named characters or female.
This is a great fic, I’ve fully caught up in less than a week, which I’m cursing my past self for now haha. Great writing, little to no errors and the plot progression has been great, but if I have to nitpick, I do have one small gripe. Sometimes characters (esp the girls) can act out of character to the MC, which I think takes away from the story more than it makes Quill seem “cool”, a prime example is how Romanoff acted towards him, it didn’t feel at all like how a trained spy would. Other than that small issue, the story has been great :)
This has been a disappointing novel compared to the authors other novels second only to the voldemort one. . . . .. .. ... . . .
Author your books are good. Great plot and character development. Good writing with hardly any errors. It's why I love your works and why I'm glad you came back to webnovel. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
Another absolute banger from AlienWarlord.The authors ability to pace a story leaves every chapter feeling like another well placed facet in a grand gem.
One of the best fanfics I've ever read. Truly a masterpiece. More chapters please. **********************************************************************************
good story enjoying it are you taking a break or just updating less [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
To cancel out the bot reviews. Harem in that every girl who meets mc becomes a gushing mess for him, secondly author does forced nonese (reference chapter 80 with Natasha). Third complete hypocratie with a mc when it comes to morals if it is for a pretty girl. Read other reveiews for more in depth
A good concept with poor execution, especially in characters designs and consistency. The issue is most apparent on the main character with his twisted personality, ironic given his source and state of powers should indicate a narrow type of personality, a personality he has anything but
Yujeleidndkewlwnejdjdjebejeiejejejjejejejejekekdjfjejiejdjfjfejjejejeiejejekekwkwkeekedjejejjeiedjdjejekekejejejejjejwuwiqlqlkwneejdnekowlwoqidjdbwnkwiwjehehdhheheowoqwiewjbdfbjwiwiwueudjjfbfbdjeieoqoqñwmdnbdbduxicjjebwkqoq
The story promises, but it only disappoints, the protagonist is insufficient, he speaks as if he were right and is a hypocrite, you play with lives as you please and then sell yourself as the good guy, his relationship with the girls is forced only to combine them
I really like how the author made and wrote in the characters. Great fiction, worth your time t read. Lotz of fun to read too, and great changes or additions to established characters.
Finished reading up to the escape with Nebula from Ronan. Unfortunately, I am quite disappointed with the work after Spider-Man. Self-confidence, humor, funny situations and action are expected from Star-Lord. Here are monotonous lessons, suffering, a little movement and more suffering. Probably, this is the author's attempt to show a stepwise growth from weak to strong, but in my opinion - it did not work. Peter's behavior also raises questions, it seems that two souls have merged in him - a boy and an adult man, but in the text there is no such merger, this is some kind of unrealistic form of bipolar disorder. In his thoughts, the main character constantly repeats to us how adult, wise, mature he is, but as soon as the description of the outside world begins - he begins to do and say wild bullshit. Almost all of his actions raise questions. And now, during a shootout, when the team is trying to escape from Ronan's flagship, Peter stops and begins another tearful dialogue with Nebula about suffering and trust. Damn it! I'll try to continue reading when the butthurt calms down, maybe when the main character "grows up" it will become more interesting.
Tengo una pregunta vas agregar los juegos starkiller y Jedi survive a la historia y su habilidad y también está el planeta escondido llamado trono es un planeta escondido y habitable también vas agregar eso juego a la historia Star war a la historia????????????????????????????????????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
I love star wars story in marvel . Very very good funfic. Thanks for the chapters. And more more!))) [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Great story overall. If your one to nit pick grammar or plot holes then this story may bug you, but if you sit back and allow it to take you for a journey through the stars this story can be a lot of fun. Overall, isn't that what we all read these for?
You know, the story is great, the only bad thing is the harem that was built based on stupidity and that the author takes all the personality away from those characters. But other than that, the story is great.
Had to drop due to the dark tag sorry I was not expecting a sad fanfic for star lord
this book is just great I personally enjoy this story even though I did not expect the crossover into transformers I loved it
Spoiler enthüllen MC: SI Peter Quill / Star Lord Rating: 10/10 Love: Natasha, Mikaela MC is set in an AU MCU, Star wars universe which is relatively well done. The story is very unique and creative. The time jumps are very good and the pacing of the story moves along well. Oh and the Transformers are there too
Spoiler enthüllen As of chapter 27 The character design in just cringe , but that's ok, but what i can't stand is BLOODY AI WRITING, seriously your previous book about voldy SI was so much better, I had high hopes , the plot line is good but cannot tolerate the AI WRITING, I regret not being able to give less that 1 start for Wiring Quality PS : If ai wiring stops or becomes more tolerable like not 5 adjectives every sentence , leave a reply , i'll continue reading this book
Soul merging character stories are shit. Either be one or the other not both. That's just an excuse for being lazy and not wanting to think of a character unique personality so just use the original character's and give them the buff of knowledge. Perfect excuse: soul merging
One of the best crossover (Star Wars, Marvel, Transformers, and more) novels I've read recently. it has some issues where there are just so many characters that they sometimes get forgotten about while the MC does his thing, but that's sorta how it goes unless you want to do different PoVs every single chapter. overall it's a really good novel. I wish there were even more chapters but the update stability is pretty solid.
It surprised me how good this book was. I thought it would be cliche from the summary, but it's actually got a good story. It has solid character growth, but I could do without the overpowered powers. I do like how it includes how he involves his team to accomplish what he got. I also loved how the author blended star wars with marvel content. solid book.[img=update]
It's not in the tags, but it's harem. Literally with every female MC meets, they fall for him.
As far as I could see the narrative is too formal, it needs to be more fluid with words that are better understood by everyone, and the whole situation seems wrong to me, it is necessary to understand geopolitics and human relations in the contexts of the characters, which if you know the story well it is possible to have a good idea, I think that is not the case in this story, I honestly think that when it starts wrong as a consequence everything goes wrong, this is just my opinion but I think the author is to be congratulated for the attempt but he should try again in another story.
one of the most hypocritical and self righteous MC I've ever read, one moment he committed an atrocity, next he spouted some "no need to thank me" speech with a "I'm always right" smirk
Pretty neat yeah❣️❤️ Transformers!!!! X Star Wars X Marvel!!!! I love the plot line with the all spark taking place of the cube. I hope we have similar situations that the author writes small colbas to fulfill the missing infinity stones. Also no stones in this fic😅 Overall I really enjoy this book so I suggest y’all sick to it!
Spoiler enthüllen a lot of cringe stuff. ...............................................................................................................................
shit.........shit.........shit............shit.............shit.........shit.............shit...........shit...........shit..........shit...........shit.............shit
Writing quality is good, so is the update stability and world background absolutely no complaints. The story development and character design make me want to slam a scooter into my shin. The MC is a morally flip flop of a character who decides when and where to show mercy and only goes out of his way to redeem people if they are named characters or female.
This is a great fic, I’ve fully caught up in less than a week, which I’m cursing my past self for now haha. Great writing, little to no errors and the plot progression has been great, but if I have to nitpick, I do have one small gripe. Sometimes characters (esp the girls) can act out of character to the MC, which I think takes away from the story more than it makes Quill seem “cool”, a prime example is how Romanoff acted towards him, it didn’t feel at all like how a trained spy would. Other than that small issue, the story has been great :)
This has been a disappointing novel compared to the authors other novels second only to the voldemort one. . . . .. .. ... . . .
