Reviews of Reincarnation in DxD with wishes by emir_adar - Webnovel

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FIN99
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it's good and tge plot is great but i fell there's something missing and i tell ya what it's the emotions of the characters

5d
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TEUKUMYADORA

Fui ver os poderes do MC karai é apelação kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk e bom assim sem drama, boa autor ................................................

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Ahmed_Link

mind library is an awesome Idea 👍👍 it's a nice story,I hope you continue writing 😊😊

2mth
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Rimuru_gamer

The story is great I'm at chapter 49 and can you make killer frost part of the harem and the killer frost is a dc villain and the her eyes and hair and ice blue

3mth
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Readtilltheybleed

If you are expecting a harem themed smut filled fan service because DXD was in the title… sorry to disappoint. This is a story about a reincarnated guy growing overpowered and having fun changing things up and creating a little chaos. The protagonist is power hungry and distrustful of others. While little seems to be revealed about his background prior to reincarnation it is briefly mentioned that he was betrayed by his closest friends and family which seems to fuel his warped psyche and rapid ascension in strength. Personally, I don’t like the MC’s personality as it’s a little too apathetic for my taste… maybe a little too 2-dimensional as well. The author doesn’t seem very keen on creating close relationships with him and the romance, severely lacking as it is, pretty much revolves around platonic themes or takes place off script. Although he flirts and seduces many women it’s not actually skilled and the women he ‘collects’ are little more than devoted friends left forgotten in storage. At this point in the story he has been intimate with two women, both of the same exotic species and neither had any real romantic connection beforehand. Well… I liked it for the most part though it definitely has its share of flaws.

3mth
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Mr_Sparrow

As this is a review so i will be straight to the points which I like about it or dislike somewhat ~ like ~ • it is pure wishfullment . • overpowered mc where power ranking can't truly define his power just like Noah osmath from infinite mana in apocalypse . • At the start I started to believe it was going to be masochist mc training fanfic but it turned for the better . • Fast pace which I can like just like a particular novel . • This novel does not exactly follow the themes which the majority of authors follow (at least for me ). • Author is also very engaging because of it makes it very likable . ~dislike somewhat ~ • As you progress it becomes harder for you to remember the sum of the characters, for a few people they might not like this trait.

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4mth
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Sky_novel_lover

Everything is good but the dialogue put me off... The concept is good, but the author needs to work on emotions and dialogue a lot. Will give the novel a 4.4 for now. (Will redo the review when I revisit this novel. )

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4mth
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Mr_ExtraLover

I don't know who write a preview a novel so here my innocent though MC is the time to work or manipulate to gain power not saying that's a bad thing, grammar is very good, it is part of this novel is that Author reacts to my comments really enjoy the interaction

4mth
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Shalini_Mishra_6542

Well DXD arc was filled with water but since it's author'' first novel I gave it a chance and I am not disappointed. THIS IS PURE GOLD WISH FULFILLMENT. Keep it up.

5mth
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Silent_Listener

The moment I read Omniscient reader's viewpoint, mentioned in synopsis. I clicked on the add to library. I know, I am needing this book in my library. I will take my sweet time reading it. Keep on going author.

6mth
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Luddic_Path

The character lack of interaction is noticable some conversations is confusing because some word is meaningless or not necessary for the sentence. But overall the quality is pretty good and i will give it just an OK out of 10 not the best not the worst either keep it up and fix the mistake pointed out by the reader and here's a meme because Idk what else to say

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7mth
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Lordmoonlight

It’s an ok work just hard to get to get immersed with got to say first couple chapters are ruff had to skip most while just seeing him training in his room for the first couple chapters but I believe it would get better but even for a op mc he’s just too much at 4 and basically at super lvl or more im just following to see the character development because power wise it’s a waste to follow and when will you edit the first couple chapters?

7mth
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Yeah_E_7311

Great story. Don't know what else to say

8mth
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UNfriendlywhatifer

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9mth
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suichiro

Oh.. Turns out I haven't left a review yet... Well take this 5 stars from me!

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9mth
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WML
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9mth
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DaoistjFElc7

Author what you constantly indicate who is speaking seems a little superfluous without it it would be much better. The work itself is pretty good. I'm looking forward to continuing.

9mth
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The_HeavenlyDemon

The grammar is decent, which is the downside of most fanfics on this app. What I did notice in this story was the lack of character interactions, and when they did interact it came out forced, it even made me cringe sometimes. The concept is good, the story is pretty fast pace as of chapter 16(where I left off). Hopefully it is improved, I’ll probably come back again after trying out other fanfics on my list. Overall not a bad read if you have aren’t prone to second hand embarrassment like me from all the edgy and cringy moments.

9mth
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Cyber_Kholiq

Tidak... Jangan ada adegan lemon diantara kita... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

10mth
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Bottom_Climber

Aku baru membaca beberapa bab, dan yah, kurangnya adalah interaksi dan percakapan antar karakter agak hambar, tapi aku akan terus membaca, kuharap ada perubahan.

10mth
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10mth
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Mathias_Irusta

Gran trabajo hasta el momento 👌 espero continúes y completes ésta obra 👍 sigue así!😁👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

10mth
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Metin_Yucel

A strong main character, a good harem, something a little unexpected can happen in the story, which makes the story better, and I think the emotions and dialogues between the characters are weak. It would be much better if they paid attention to these, but it is a good thing for beginners. And it gets better as the episodes progress, I wish you success.

10mth
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AbsoluteDegeneracy

Hum. It's not bad, It's a little choppy with a chunni mc, but I find it a pretty decent read I suppose. I would recommend trying to emulate the style of his youth training arc in terms of pacing and fleshing out his progress.

10mth
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hyptex

Easily Understandable seems like the author releases 1-2 chapters per day overall I love it ............................................................................................

10mth
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joey_thomas

Writing quality 2 stars its better then a translation but not by much. Update stability is 5 star it updates a lot. Story development is 3 stars its about a overpowered character with a harem its alright. Character design is 2 stars its alright most overpowered characters don't have a good character design. World background is 5 stars

10mth
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DukeMaster

i am looking forward to more entertaining content

10mth
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10mth
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Madara6116

It is a good read you just have to stop your brain at some points to get the idea behind some things the characters are not how people should be portrayed it’s more of an AI or a robot and they are all over to place one moment they are enemies and the next he is asking them out on dates with like 2-3 paragraphs. The power levels are all over the place like Thor is in the top 5 of the world and in this Odin tell that the mc can kill him when he is not even 9 or how mc can get powers from any anime and they are super powerful to the point they have to much already like he has (limitless,sunshine,shadow power from the shadow monarch,power of destruction,gravity and such) and he is all over the place in the ranks so in the end you don’t even know where his power stands and some people are not like they are betrayed in story’s or legends like Aries wants to kill mc because ‘he is a threat’ but the Aries I know about whould want to fight mc idk it is a good read but can be better

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11mth
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FIN99
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it's good and tge plot is great but i fell there's something missing and i tell ya what it's the emotions of the characters

5d
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TEUKUMYADORA

Fui ver os poderes do MC karai é apelação kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk e bom assim sem drama, boa autor ................................................

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5d
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Ahmed_Link

mind library is an awesome Idea 👍👍 it's a nice story,I hope you continue writing 😊😊

2mth
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Rimuru_gamer

The story is great I'm at chapter 49 and can you make killer frost part of the harem and the killer frost is a dc villain and the her eyes and hair and ice blue

3mth
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Readtilltheybleed

If you are expecting a harem themed smut filled fan service because DXD was in the title… sorry to disappoint. This is a story about a reincarnated guy growing overpowered and having fun changing things up and creating a little chaos. The protagonist is power hungry and distrustful of others. While little seems to be revealed about his background prior to reincarnation it is briefly mentioned that he was betrayed by his closest friends and family which seems to fuel his warped psyche and rapid ascension in strength. Personally, I don’t like the MC’s personality as it’s a little too apathetic for my taste… maybe a little too 2-dimensional as well. The author doesn’t seem very keen on creating close relationships with him and the romance, severely lacking as it is, pretty much revolves around platonic themes or takes place off script. Although he flirts and seduces many women it’s not actually skilled and the women he ‘collects’ are little more than devoted friends left forgotten in storage. At this point in the story he has been intimate with two women, both of the same exotic species and neither had any real romantic connection beforehand. Well… I liked it for the most part though it definitely has its share of flaws.

3mth
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Mr_Sparrow

As this is a review so i will be straight to the points which I like about it or dislike somewhat ~ like ~ • it is pure wishfullment . • overpowered mc where power ranking can't truly define his power just like Noah osmath from infinite mana in apocalypse . • At the start I started to believe it was going to be masochist mc training fanfic but it turned for the better . • Fast pace which I can like just like a particular novel . • This novel does not exactly follow the themes which the majority of authors follow (at least for me ). • Author is also very engaging because of it makes it very likable . ~dislike somewhat ~ • As you progress it becomes harder for you to remember the sum of the characters, for a few people they might not like this trait.

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4mth
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Sky_novel_lover

Everything is good but the dialogue put me off... The concept is good, but the author needs to work on emotions and dialogue a lot. Will give the novel a 4.4 for now. (Will redo the review when I revisit this novel. )

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4mth
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Mr_ExtraLover

I don't know who write a preview a novel so here my innocent though MC is the time to work or manipulate to gain power not saying that's a bad thing, grammar is very good, it is part of this novel is that Author reacts to my comments really enjoy the interaction

4mth
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Shalini_Mishra_6542

Well DXD arc was filled with water but since it's author'' first novel I gave it a chance and I am not disappointed. THIS IS PURE GOLD WISH FULFILLMENT. Keep it up.

5mth
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Silent_Listener

The moment I read Omniscient reader's viewpoint, mentioned in synopsis. I clicked on the add to library. I know, I am needing this book in my library. I will take my sweet time reading it. Keep on going author.

6mth
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Luddic_Path

The character lack of interaction is noticable some conversations is confusing because some word is meaningless or not necessary for the sentence. But overall the quality is pretty good and i will give it just an OK out of 10 not the best not the worst either keep it up and fix the mistake pointed out by the reader and here's a meme because Idk what else to say

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7mth
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Lordmoonlight

It’s an ok work just hard to get to get immersed with got to say first couple chapters are ruff had to skip most while just seeing him training in his room for the first couple chapters but I believe it would get better but even for a op mc he’s just too much at 4 and basically at super lvl or more im just following to see the character development because power wise it’s a waste to follow and when will you edit the first couple chapters?

7mth
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Yeah_E_7311

Great story. Don't know what else to say

8mth
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JaValentin

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UNfriendlywhatifer

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9mth
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suichiro

Oh.. Turns out I haven't left a review yet... Well take this 5 stars from me!

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9mth
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WML
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Adorei.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

9mth
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DaoistjFElc7

Author what you constantly indicate who is speaking seems a little superfluous without it it would be much better. The work itself is pretty good. I'm looking forward to continuing.

9mth
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The_HeavenlyDemon

The grammar is decent, which is the downside of most fanfics on this app. What I did notice in this story was the lack of character interactions, and when they did interact it came out forced, it even made me cringe sometimes. The concept is good, the story is pretty fast pace as of chapter 16(where I left off). Hopefully it is improved, I’ll probably come back again after trying out other fanfics on my list. Overall not a bad read if you have aren’t prone to second hand embarrassment like me from all the edgy and cringy moments.

9mth
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Cyber_Kholiq

Tidak... Jangan ada adegan lemon diantara kita... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

10mth
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Bottom_Climber

Aku baru membaca beberapa bab, dan yah, kurangnya adalah interaksi dan percakapan antar karakter agak hambar, tapi aku akan terus membaca, kuharap ada perubahan.

10mth
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Cyber_Kholiq

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10mth
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Mathias_Irusta

Gran trabajo hasta el momento 👌 espero continúes y completes ésta obra 👍 sigue así!😁👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

10mth
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Metin_Yucel

A strong main character, a good harem, something a little unexpected can happen in the story, which makes the story better, and I think the emotions and dialogues between the characters are weak. It would be much better if they paid attention to these, but it is a good thing for beginners. And it gets better as the episodes progress, I wish you success.

10mth
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AbsoluteDegeneracy

Hum. It's not bad, It's a little choppy with a chunni mc, but I find it a pretty decent read I suppose. I would recommend trying to emulate the style of his youth training arc in terms of pacing and fleshing out his progress.

10mth
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hyptex

Easily Understandable seems like the author releases 1-2 chapters per day overall I love it ............................................................................................

10mth
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joey_thomas

Writing quality 2 stars its better then a translation but not by much. Update stability is 5 star it updates a lot. Story development is 3 stars its about a overpowered character with a harem its alright. Character design is 2 stars its alright most overpowered characters don't have a good character design. World background is 5 stars

10mth
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DukeMaster

i am looking forward to more entertaining content

10mth
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Madara6116

It is a good read you just have to stop your brain at some points to get the idea behind some things the characters are not how people should be portrayed it’s more of an AI or a robot and they are all over to place one moment they are enemies and the next he is asking them out on dates with like 2-3 paragraphs. The power levels are all over the place like Thor is in the top 5 of the world and in this Odin tell that the mc can kill him when he is not even 9 or how mc can get powers from any anime and they are super powerful to the point they have to much already like he has (limitless,sunshine,shadow power from the shadow monarch,power of destruction,gravity and such) and he is all over the place in the ranks so in the end you don’t even know where his power stands and some people are not like they are betrayed in story’s or legends like Aries wants to kill mc because ‘he is a threat’ but the Aries I know about whould want to fight mc idk it is a good read but can be better

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11mth
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