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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionI liked reading the novel at the first chapters, but, the characters and their personality is... well not for me. in more than one chapter, a character surprisingly not cautious of help coming their way, specially if the help was from a stranger they've never even met before, who knows? I mean this is based solely on my experience but, people who grew up in poverty are usually more cautious than others.
Spoiler enthüllenI've read 12 chapters. I love things like this, but there is a lot of repetition of things that happened. I didn't like this way of writing. It just makes the novel boring. "you disappointed me"
Regretfully this novel fails to spark any interest with me. I’m all for a decent System novel,however this one just fails to deliver. I think reading a shopping list would spark more interest with me as this all reads so blandly. We have the MC who is married to a billionaires daughter and because he can’t knock her up she gets demoted to a servant and then eventually kicked out. So first question I’m wondering is he shooting blanks or what? No mention of medical intervention, just you can’t do the deed so get out of here. So he leaves his place of abode and decides to get drunk with his remaining $300, as if that solves, and whilst at the bar the system drops in. Anyways, it reads tiredly and very monotone and overall, I read to chapter 16 and just couldn’t endure anymore.. I just wish there was more of a plot of some sort but so far a couple instances of face slapping when he flaunts his means to buy stuff and his desire to go to outside pool so he can flaunt his charm (10), should have used the pool at the hotel, I believe most hotels have a pool. Anyways, read if you desire but I am sure there are better options out there.
It has potential, but I have to drop it before chapter 10 due to the insane amount of repeating itself the book does. And unfortunately, because it repeats itself so much the story pacing is beyond slow and difficult to read. I do like the system so far and the MC, but with such slow pacing I cant justify reading it at this point. Hopefully the author does some rewrites because the story itself has been enjoyable. Best of luck author!
FOR YOUR OWN SAFETY, DON'T READ THIS NOVEL!! It's like a cigarette, too darn addictive. You won't stop reading. Seriously guys, you will end up in a mental hospital.
A splendid novel. I am not giving it a five star for personal reasons. However everything so far is on point. Try checking it to chp 30 and see for yourself
I rarely leave any reviews, but this novel was so boring and plain. You can tell if the author knows what he’s writing about and this one does not know nor have any creativity.
I liked reading the novel at the first chapters, but, the characters and their personality is... well not for me. in more than one chapter, a character surprisingly not cautious of help coming their way, specially if the help was from a stranger they've never even met before, who knows? I mean this is based solely on my experience but, people who grew up in poverty are usually more cautious than others.
Spoiler enthüllenI've read 12 chapters. I love things like this, but there is a lot of repetition of things that happened. I didn't like this way of writing. It just makes the novel boring. "you disappointed me"
Regretfully this novel fails to spark any interest with me. I’m all for a decent System novel,however this one just fails to deliver. I think reading a shopping list would spark more interest with me as this all reads so blandly. We have the MC who is married to a billionaires daughter and because he can’t knock her up she gets demoted to a servant and then eventually kicked out. So first question I’m wondering is he shooting blanks or what? No mention of medical intervention, just you can’t do the deed so get out of here. So he leaves his place of abode and decides to get drunk with his remaining $300, as if that solves, and whilst at the bar the system drops in. Anyways, it reads tiredly and very monotone and overall, I read to chapter 16 and just couldn’t endure anymore.. I just wish there was more of a plot of some sort but so far a couple instances of face slapping when he flaunts his means to buy stuff and his desire to go to outside pool so he can flaunt his charm (10), should have used the pool at the hotel, I believe most hotels have a pool. Anyways, read if you desire but I am sure there are better options out there.
It has potential, but I have to drop it before chapter 10 due to the insane amount of repeating itself the book does. And unfortunately, because it repeats itself so much the story pacing is beyond slow and difficult to read. I do like the system so far and the MC, but with such slow pacing I cant justify reading it at this point. Hopefully the author does some rewrites because the story itself has been enjoyable. Best of luck author!
FOR YOUR OWN SAFETY, DON'T READ THIS NOVEL!! It's like a cigarette, too darn addictive. You won't stop reading. Seriously guys, you will end up in a mental hospital.
A splendid novel. I am not giving it a five star for personal reasons. However everything so far is on point. Try checking it to chp 30 and see for yourself
I rarely leave any reviews, but this novel was so boring and plain. You can tell if the author knows what he’s writing about and this one does not know nor have any creativity.