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5 Stars for OP HAREM, OP System, greed over almost anything, and lust over the charts. story are not develop enought since it still focus on collecting waifus,.
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absolute awesome till now, can´t wait for more chapters pls continue and dont drop it. The only thing I find difficult to understand is what his powers are and how strong he is roughly, like physical, magical etc. I mean he can kill Zeus from Percy Jackson universe in a few seconds, but with abilities not direct strength... just a thought to add some references to understand it more
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[img=Your move] The system have name,... [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
no offense author, but how can you be satisfied with such an easy plot/self fullfillment scenario. summon a girl, f**k her. meet another, f**k her, destroy/control her, f**k her. i mean, b for the effort but still, as an author, you don't feel it pointless? i know i do, thus, the reason for my curiosity.
The name of the original is "Viajes a través del multiverso: haciendo lo que quiera" by Kartgo, I'll just tell you that it has a lot of depravity.
I like the Pic of this FF, I am curious if he is going for DB world? Android 18 is seriously 🔥🔥🔥❤️
Well this fic is adapted from a Spanish fic but if you compare them now there maybe few changes here in the story but it's more versatile. Means there are more interaction or character development between the characters not likethe Spanish one. Well I do am enjoying this fic alot nd I hope author could spend some more time here on this fic. And author is man of culture hehe [img=recommend]
[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Your move]
Spoiler enthüllen 5 Stars for OP HAREM, OP System, greed over almost anything, and lust over the charts. story are not develop enought since it still focus on collecting waifus,.
Spoiler enthüllen absolute awesome till now, can´t wait for more chapters pls continue and dont drop it. The only thing I find difficult to understand is what his powers are and how strong he is roughly, like physical, magical etc. I mean he can kill Zeus from Percy Jackson universe in a few seconds, but with abilities not direct strength... just a thought to add some references to understand it more
Spoiler enthüllen [img=Your move] The system have name,... [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
no offense author, but how can you be satisfied with such an easy plot/self fullfillment scenario. summon a girl, f**k her. meet another, f**k her, destroy/control her, f**k her. i mean, b for the effort but still, as an author, you don't feel it pointless? i know i do, thus, the reason for my curiosity.
The name of the original is "Viajes a través del multiverso: haciendo lo que quiera" by Kartgo, I'll just tell you that it has a lot of depravity.
I like the Pic of this FF, I am curious if he is going for DB world? Android 18 is seriously 🔥🔥🔥❤️
Well this fic is adapted from a Spanish fic but if you compare them now there maybe few changes here in the story but it's more versatile. Means there are more interaction or character development between the characters not likethe Spanish one. Well I do am enjoying this fic alot nd I hope author could spend some more time here on this fic. And author is man of culture hehe [img=recommend]
[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Your move]
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