Mysterious App

LV 4

UNNKNOWNN

It has such a great potential and the story is pretty interesting too, but you just had to ruin the story by bringing Fe**s into this. WHY!!! That horrible Mann! I can deal with waterworks, but this is just too much even for me. Please edit that part of the story and never introduce it in the future. That will 10x more enjoyable to read and suggest to other cultured people.

LV 4

LoNeLy_BoYz

it seems like this fanfic will become my favorite plus it has only 4 chapters released, so we can't expect much or we will disappointed. OVERALL IT IS GOOD 🤩💯 BUT i noticed the change of gender text like ( he --> she and she --> he ) a little 😅

LV 11

Bakakeju

Please give your reviews so that I can make this novel better and this is not fanfiction.

LV 4

MartinalME

I'm at the chap 10! And sofar so good. The rwinting cloud be better, but the exploration of the fetiches and the sexual deviances is very good. The author has no shame in doing what he likes and explores the mc's sexual fantasy's, with can be a no for most of the people.

LV 4

Minah_Barunang

I know it's just the beginning of the novel but need more character and like everything and it's good

Very good story I can't wait for it .$-$

LV 2

DaoistCGid7j

"When do the new chapters come?"???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????jdhdjbcjebdidwhjdhsjdhdjdhsjsjdjdjdjhdjdhdj

LV 2

DaoistCGid7j

I didn't read it completely, but I liked it. Although some strange things were added, it's good. Keep it up ،whehahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

LV 3

Dead_End197

i'm at chapter 9 i just hope nothing gay will be ahead

LV 14

Cruci_the_daoist

ngl this is a hot potato, touching my lsp so much. like it 5 star.