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Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time
Author i love this novel of your. Can you make him higher entity like Cthulhu etc.and make this a long novel. ..............................................................
Like any other akikan novel, it has a lot of info dumps after the starting few chapters.
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I honestly didn't expect much from this story, and after reading 50 chapters, I have the right to write.... What if, I waited what I thought and even less.... I find it bored to read these stories with the same characters that only make it worse with time, I find it more fun to read the other work of this author that is released together with this one... But I leave this one. Do I recommend it? Well, if you like MCs who pretend to what they are not, and the same repetitive story with dialogues Mediocre, then here's your story, but if.... I don't recommend it
I love it 😍 The more updates the more iIread it. Hello author 😁 Can you please more in Mahouka koukou no Rettousie/The irregular at magic high school. Add Maya to her harem. More chapter.. More chapter in danmachi.
Me encantó esta historia, desde el desarrollo, los personajes, el MC, los mundos que elegiste, todo. Es cierto que hay algunos problemas con la personalidad del MC, pero no lo veo como algo malo sino como el desarrollo de personaje, empezó siendo un villano en su historia de fondo, pero me gusta que se esfuerce (o finja hacerlo) para ser el "chico bueno". No hizo las típicas cosas que cualquier MC villano, sino que ayudó cuando pudo e intentó en todos los mundos que los MC originales no quedaran tan mal. En lugar de hacer que todos los vieran como un villano despiadado como siempre pasa(lo cual odio), fabrica una imagen de un líder carismático y se gana la simpatía de todos, no se bien que palabra usa para calificarlo, no es un Héroe, un Antihéroe ni un Villano, diría que es una mezcla de los 3, se comporta como un héroe, piensa como un antihéroe y se retrata a si mismo como un villano. Me gustó como desarrollaste la historia en cada uno de los mundos en los que estuvo y los mundos que elegiste. Va a ser interesante si lo mandas al mundo de DXD por ejemplo, con una habilidad como la suya se volvería un ser único. También sería interesante verlo en otros mundos como Kenichi, Nanatsu no Taizai, Tensura o Fate. Si tuviera que criticar algo sería las personalidades que les das a los protagonistas originales como Takashi e Ikki, son mas desagradables que en el canon.
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it's Akikan Sama what do you expect but the best. "Catch them all Smash them all"
This work is so good. I don't know what to say but the way this work was different from the other works from this author gives a different vibes. This story is exciting, I somehow wanted to see the mc in "Darling in the Franxx".
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The main problem of this story lies in its protagonist, the charisma is replaced by secondary characters who applaud and venerate him even if it is the first time they see him, the system only gives him three powers, absorb and copy every living being, mentally control every living being absorbed and travel between worlds, these powers will be forgotten since the plot suits him, the relationships are nonexistent the protagonist only sees even women as objects, his character is a hypocrite of the type who justifies himself and sees himself as a victim. His goal is to be a superior being for what? Well, he has nothing else to do, he is the most powerful being in the world and has 0 connection with other people.
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Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also
the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.
A good one for the harem genre. A touching story about a bad man journey to become a good man, calming the sorrows of mothers, daugthers, widows and the poor women around the world. Really, such dedication, such a noble cause. Every man would envy such heroic spirit and would want to take upon themselves this hazardous mission!
Mc seems to be going down the path of a cuck not sure if he will in consideration of the authors other novels but the fact that the Mc told freya to marry bell after they had s*x and she proposed to mc made me disgusted other then that novel was alright
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I don't really like Demon Slayer Ark, because MC underestimates Kagaya and Demon Slayer Corp
Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time
Author i love this novel of your. Can you make him higher entity like Cthulhu etc.and make this a long novel. ..............................................................
Like any other akikan novel, it has a lot of info dumps after the starting few chapters.
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I honestly didn't expect much from this story, and after reading 50 chapters, I have the right to write.... What if, I waited what I thought and even less.... I find it bored to read these stories with the same characters that only make it worse with time, I find it more fun to read the other work of this author that is released together with this one... But I leave this one. Do I recommend it? Well, if you like MCs who pretend to what they are not, and the same repetitive story with dialogues Mediocre, then here's your story, but if.... I don't recommend it
I love it 😍 The more updates the more iIread it. Hello author 😁 Can you please more in Mahouka koukou no Rettousie/The irregular at magic high school. Add Maya to her harem. More chapter.. More chapter in danmachi.
Me encantó esta historia, desde el desarrollo, los personajes, el MC, los mundos que elegiste, todo. Es cierto que hay algunos problemas con la personalidad del MC, pero no lo veo como algo malo sino como el desarrollo de personaje, empezó siendo un villano en su historia de fondo, pero me gusta que se esfuerce (o finja hacerlo) para ser el "chico bueno". No hizo las típicas cosas que cualquier MC villano, sino que ayudó cuando pudo e intentó en todos los mundos que los MC originales no quedaran tan mal. En lugar de hacer que todos los vieran como un villano despiadado como siempre pasa(lo cual odio), fabrica una imagen de un líder carismático y se gana la simpatía de todos, no se bien que palabra usa para calificarlo, no es un Héroe, un Antihéroe ni un Villano, diría que es una mezcla de los 3, se comporta como un héroe, piensa como un antihéroe y se retrata a si mismo como un villano. Me gustó como desarrollaste la historia en cada uno de los mundos en los que estuvo y los mundos que elegiste. Va a ser interesante si lo mandas al mundo de DXD por ejemplo, con una habilidad como la suya se volvería un ser único. También sería interesante verlo en otros mundos como Kenichi, Nanatsu no Taizai, Tensura o Fate. Si tuviera que criticar algo sería las personalidades que les das a los protagonistas originales como Takashi e Ikki, son mas desagradables que en el canon.
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it's Akikan Sama what do you expect but the best. "Catch them all Smash them all"
This work is so good. I don't know what to say but the way this work was different from the other works from this author gives a different vibes. This story is exciting, I somehow wanted to see the mc in "Darling in the Franxx".
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Spoiler enthüllen The main problem of this story lies in its protagonist, the charisma is replaced by secondary characters who applaud and venerate him even if it is the first time they see him, the system only gives him three powers, absorb and copy every living being, mentally control every living being absorbed and travel between worlds, these powers will be forgotten since the plot suits him, the relationships are nonexistent the protagonist only sees even women as objects, his character is a hypocrite of the type who justifies himself and sees himself as a victim. His goal is to be a superior being for what? Well, he has nothing else to do, he is the most powerful being in the world and has 0 connection with other people.
Spoiler enthüllen Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also
the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.
A good one for the harem genre. A touching story about a bad man journey to become a good man, calming the sorrows of mothers, daugthers, widows and the poor women around the world. Really, such dedication, such a noble cause. Every man would envy such heroic spirit and would want to take upon themselves this hazardous mission!
Mc seems to be going down the path of a cuck not sure if he will in consideration of the authors other novels but the fact that the Mc told freya to marry bell after they had s*x and she proposed to mc made me disgusted other then that novel was alright
Spoiler enthüllen best akikan's storys . i hope you will write a story about classroom of the elite 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
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I don't really like Demon Slayer Ark, because MC underestimates Kagaya and Demon Slayer Corp
Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.