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Great story with interesting characters that make the story feel like the author thakes his time with their personality. Although it is a harem novel it is the best I have read so far
Although I find the use of the word "love" or "dear" excessive, I will not deny that the story is original and interesting. On the other hand, I think a decrease in focus on the protagonist and focus more on the development of the universe.
From what I’ve seen so far (albeit not a lot), it’s a great story. The characters feel alive and seem well though out so far, and the power system seems to be a bit like 40k with a few others possibly mixed in there. The world has been very fleshed out with reasonable explanations for things that happen, and overall it’s been pretty good. The only bad thing I’ve noticed is the writing/punctuation. I haven’t gotten very far yet, so I’m not sure if it has been fixed later on, but there is not really a proper use of punctuation. There are a lot of run on sentences where there aren’t any commas, and in some cases when there are commas, they should be periods. The story would probably be 10x better than what it has been so far if the punctuation was fixed, especially because the texts/convos make sense and would actually flow very well if the punctuation was better. If it hasn’t been fixed yet I’d recommend using something like Grammarly or some other tool online along those lines to just fix any grammar issues, especially if you don’t have time to edit them yourself or don’t want to pay someone else to do it. Other than that it’s a great story, I like the little details that make the story better and the whole thing feels alive and real, along with the world being fleshed out and the story itself being pretty interesting. (Btw if the grammar does end up being fixed later I’ll change the review since it’s the only critique I have) Keep it up author!
I really like it , .. .. .. .. ,. .. .. .. .. . it's a sad thing that was only able to read 30 chapter 🫠 .. .. .. .. .. . have a Good day or night 🤗
great story bud really enjoying it. tho you should really make a patreon cuz I really want to read a head but I hate giving all the extra money to webnovel instead of direct to you
It's really a great book, but there are some things I didn't like, although I'm not in the current chapters yet, but I don't see the protagonist using everything he can to get stronger, the queen has hundreds of races and races in her database. the protagonist decides to make basic improvements to it, the other bad thing is the grammar
Great book. Everyone should give it a shot. interesting abilities, and the main character earns his growth instead of just clicking a button. Also, the world is well designed and interesting.
im realyyy enjoying the book ! great harem btw prob one of the best i ever read the only sad thing about this book is that it doesnt have enough chapters (yet) pls keep it up author your doing great!!
Best 18+ novel I’ve ever read on this app. Story and characters are great, looking forward to more updates and chapters!
Absolutely loving the story find myself waiting for every new chapter after binging the already released ones keep up the amazing work always going to get my golden tickets
Is the story abandonded? I'd love to know if Author have dropped it or not, and why it has been dropped. Its such a pity when a high quality story gets dropped like that.
I love it, I started to read and I was instantly hooked, the story is unique and fun even the power system is unique I never read a novel with psionic powers where it was this, for a lack of better words, 'whole'. all the other psionic power based novels are like telekinesis and done, but here are many different kinds of psionic powers and it is always interesting to read more about them. the world building is really good there is a thorough background story. it is my favorite book till now and really worth it to read.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This was one of the few novels I picked to find something new to read and turned out better than expected. The free chapters give a good grasp on the story to decide if it’s up your alley I believe. The mc is a free spirit which works well with how its set in the universe so plenty to explore. He also enjoys researching in his lab on occasion or watching battles. Background or side characters come across well with some fun personalities. Story goes at a steady pace that lets information come across more organically and setting up future events or characters we will see in a natural way. The hive and the mc’s growth that has happened but even more so that has yet to happen will definitely be fun to read. It does have spelling mistakes here and there but at least for me it didn’t mess with the flow while reading. Anyway I found it an enjoyable read and will continue to as hopefully it goes on for a long time. It’s definitely worth a shot to see if you’ll like it.
Very well written book good characters, good main character main character in a DOM. He’s not super naïve. Just an all-around good story good progression good building a good power ARC just a really gifted story.
Good strong main character Austin supporting side characters just overall good it had some snow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody good strong main character. Awesome supporting side characters just overall good. It has some slow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody.
at ch13 and i love it so far almost dropped it cus of the harem tag . thank god i didnt. its not the harem that you might think of. just give it a shot you wont regret it (probably).
After reading shadow slave for quite a while and stumbled upon this gold I was quite disappointed. First, the writing is so bad I couldn't understand who's talking. Second, there's no proper spacing as well as proper uppercasing. Overall, everything is great! The only problem is the writing.
This is really good. Over 120ch and I've enjoyed pretty much every single one. The characters are well written, and the setting is also very well done. As far as harems go, it honestly ranks up pretty high on the list. It's a premise I haven't seen before, and it's been done very well too. Thanks for writing this and sticking with it! I have a couple questions for author though. Will there be ntr/sharing/yaoi? I doubt there will, but it's always good to ask. Also will there be yuri in the harem/group activities? A lot of the non hive love interests are giving me vibes that it might happen later. It isn't a deal breaker but I'd like to know if it will happen and what "level" it would be at. If you have questions, I can help clarify 😄
The writing style was god awful to read. Grammatical errors every other word. The only good thing it had going for it was the somewhat unique storyline. There was simply too many errors for it to be a good read.
on chapter 110 the author is starting to open up the world and it feels like the story is about to take off. all previous chapters were good introduction, character development and teeing up what promises to be a spectacular space drama. This story is not overly focused on the underlying system as most stories in this space are but the power scaling is trickle fed in a way to move the plot forward bit by bit. Not a typical harem system but strangely romantic when you least expect it. Looking forward to the rest!
-read to chapter 30. Spelling and grammatical errors all over. (Not hard to understand the meaning though since it’s often just words that sound the same but are spelled differently are used like plain and plane, but there are still other errors.) Missing punctuation in some places. (Not a big deal but there’s gonna be some run-on sentences and kinda odd sentence structure) Still a very fun read. Highly recommended, just wish someone could proofread it
vambora autor, cade os capitolos mestre vamoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo PORTUGUES pt br.,.,.,.,.,,...,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,.,.,,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,.,,,.,.,,,,,,,,.,,,.,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,
It’s good. Ive Been looking for hive mind stories for a while now alltho i have to admit it isnt exaclty what i was looking for but i like it
I’ve been absolutely hooked on this novel! Your world-building and character development are phenomenal, and as a fellow writer I must say I really love your writing style. I recently started my own sci-fi novel, The Strongest Interstellar Soldier System, and it’s been an exciting journey so far. It’s about a young man, Caden Arden, who inherits a mysterious system from his father, a former traitor to humanity, and embarks on a mission to prove himself while navigating a high-tech, interstellar world. I’d love for you (and any fellow readers here!) to check it out and share your thoughts. Your support would mean the world to me as I grow as a writer. Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope we can support each other in this incredible journey!
Great story with interesting characters that make the story feel like the author thakes his time with their personality. Although it is a harem novel it is the best I have read so far
Although I find the use of the word "love" or "dear" excessive, I will not deny that the story is original and interesting. On the other hand, I think a decrease in focus on the protagonist and focus more on the development of the universe.
From what I’ve seen so far (albeit not a lot), it’s a great story. The characters feel alive and seem well though out so far, and the power system seems to be a bit like 40k with a few others possibly mixed in there. The world has been very fleshed out with reasonable explanations for things that happen, and overall it’s been pretty good. The only bad thing I’ve noticed is the writing/punctuation. I haven’t gotten very far yet, so I’m not sure if it has been fixed later on, but there is not really a proper use of punctuation. There are a lot of run on sentences where there aren’t any commas, and in some cases when there are commas, they should be periods. The story would probably be 10x better than what it has been so far if the punctuation was fixed, especially because the texts/convos make sense and would actually flow very well if the punctuation was better. If it hasn’t been fixed yet I’d recommend using something like Grammarly or some other tool online along those lines to just fix any grammar issues, especially if you don’t have time to edit them yourself or don’t want to pay someone else to do it. Other than that it’s a great story, I like the little details that make the story better and the whole thing feels alive and real, along with the world being fleshed out and the story itself being pretty interesting. (Btw if the grammar does end up being fixed later I’ll change the review since it’s the only critique I have) Keep it up author!
I really like it , .. .. .. .. ,. .. .. .. .. . it's a sad thing that was only able to read 30 chapter 🫠 .. .. .. .. .. . have a Good day or night 🤗
great story bud really enjoying it. tho you should really make a patreon cuz I really want to read a head but I hate giving all the extra money to webnovel instead of direct to you
It's really a great book, but there are some things I didn't like, although I'm not in the current chapters yet, but I don't see the protagonist using everything he can to get stronger, the queen has hundreds of races and races in her database. the protagonist decides to make basic improvements to it, the other bad thing is the grammar
Great book. Everyone should give it a shot. interesting abilities, and the main character earns his growth instead of just clicking a button. Also, the world is well designed and interesting.
im realyyy enjoying the book ! great harem btw prob one of the best i ever read the only sad thing about this book is that it doesnt have enough chapters (yet) pls keep it up author your doing great!!
Best 18+ novel I’ve ever read on this app. Story and characters are great, looking forward to more updates and chapters!
Absolutely loving the story find myself waiting for every new chapter after binging the already released ones keep up the amazing work always going to get my golden tickets
Is the story abandonded? I'd love to know if Author have dropped it or not, and why it has been dropped. Its such a pity when a high quality story gets dropped like that.
I love it, I started to read and I was instantly hooked, the story is unique and fun even the power system is unique I never read a novel with psionic powers where it was this, for a lack of better words, 'whole'. all the other psionic power based novels are like telekinesis and done, but here are many different kinds of psionic powers and it is always interesting to read more about them. the world building is really good there is a thorough background story. it is my favorite book till now and really worth it to read.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This was one of the few novels I picked to find something new to read and turned out better than expected. The free chapters give a good grasp on the story to decide if it’s up your alley I believe. The mc is a free spirit which works well with how its set in the universe so plenty to explore. He also enjoys researching in his lab on occasion or watching battles. Background or side characters come across well with some fun personalities. Story goes at a steady pace that lets information come across more organically and setting up future events or characters we will see in a natural way. The hive and the mc’s growth that has happened but even more so that has yet to happen will definitely be fun to read. It does have spelling mistakes here and there but at least for me it didn’t mess with the flow while reading. Anyway I found it an enjoyable read and will continue to as hopefully it goes on for a long time. It’s definitely worth a shot to see if you’ll like it.
Very well written book good characters, good main character main character in a DOM. He’s not super naïve. Just an all-around good story good progression good building a good power ARC just a really gifted story.
Good strong main character Austin supporting side characters just overall good it had some snow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody good strong main character. Awesome supporting side characters just overall good. It has some slow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody.
at ch13 and i love it so far almost dropped it cus of the harem tag . thank god i didnt. its not the harem that you might think of. just give it a shot you wont regret it (probably).
After reading shadow slave for quite a while and stumbled upon this gold I was quite disappointed. First, the writing is so bad I couldn't understand who's talking. Second, there's no proper spacing as well as proper uppercasing. Overall, everything is great! The only problem is the writing.
This is really good. Over 120ch and I've enjoyed pretty much every single one. The characters are well written, and the setting is also very well done. As far as harems go, it honestly ranks up pretty high on the list. It's a premise I haven't seen before, and it's been done very well too. Thanks for writing this and sticking with it! I have a couple questions for author though. Will there be ntr/sharing/yaoi? I doubt there will, but it's always good to ask. Also will there be yuri in the harem/group activities? A lot of the non hive love interests are giving me vibes that it might happen later. It isn't a deal breaker but I'd like to know if it will happen and what "level" it would be at. If you have questions, I can help clarify 😄
The writing style was god awful to read. Grammatical errors every other word. The only good thing it had going for it was the somewhat unique storyline. There was simply too many errors for it to be a good read.
on chapter 110 the author is starting to open up the world and it feels like the story is about to take off. all previous chapters were good introduction, character development and teeing up what promises to be a spectacular space drama. This story is not overly focused on the underlying system as most stories in this space are but the power scaling is trickle fed in a way to move the plot forward bit by bit. Not a typical harem system but strangely romantic when you least expect it. Looking forward to the rest!
-read to chapter 30. Spelling and grammatical errors all over. (Not hard to understand the meaning though since it’s often just words that sound the same but are spelled differently are used like plain and plane, but there are still other errors.) Missing punctuation in some places. (Not a big deal but there’s gonna be some run-on sentences and kinda odd sentence structure) Still a very fun read. Highly recommended, just wish someone could proofread it
vambora autor, cade os capitolos mestre vamoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo PORTUGUES pt br.,.,.,.,.,,...,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,.,.,,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,.,,,.,.,,,,,,,,.,,,.,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,
It’s good. Ive Been looking for hive mind stories for a while now alltho i have to admit it isnt exaclty what i was looking for but i like it
I’ve been absolutely hooked on this novel! Your world-building and character development are phenomenal, and as a fellow writer I must say I really love your writing style. I recently started my own sci-fi novel, The Strongest Interstellar Soldier System, and it’s been an exciting journey so far. It’s about a young man, Caden Arden, who inherits a mysterious system from his father, a former traitor to humanity, and embarks on a mission to prove himself while navigating a high-tech, interstellar world. I’d love for you (and any fellow readers here!) to check it out and share your thoughts. Your support would mean the world to me as I grow as a writer. Keep up the fantastic work, and I hope we can support each other in this incredible journey!