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its good, but at some point you are gonna get sick of seeing kira always win and being always one step ahead, im currently at chp 73 and i think i got how the rest of the story will go "kira upgrades, X person starts talkimg shit, kira destroys them with out breaking a sweat, and x says "oh no omg he is a monster!!" fin, but the writing is very good. i really like the fact that kira has a life outside blue lock, its a really good detail.
Es buena, demasiado buena diría yo... pero no hay actualizaciones... todo termina desde el arco de U-20 ... y ugh... quiero actualizaciones. 1. Calidad de la escritura: Lo leo doblado, así que no puedo decir mucho, pero al menos no parece una mala traducción que cambian nombres, cosas, etc.. 2.Estabilidad de las actualizaciones: Al menos no ha actualizado hace 5 meses... terrible... 3. Desarrollo de la historia: Aunque sigue la trama, da giros y tiende a ser más original que otros fanfics que son una copia. Además tiene algunos cruces con otras series de Spokon, así que genial. 4. Diseño de los personajes: Aunque me gustaría que tuvieran más trasfondo los personajes secundarios y no estuviesen limitados a lo que se dice del anime, es decir actualmente ya se conoce el trasfondo de algunos personajes, sus motivaciones y su forma de actuar, así que faltaría un poco más allí. Conclusión: Deficiente en los secundarios, pero debido a que se conoce por el canon, se complementa y al cumplir siendo un fanfic, no duele leerlo. Si no has visto el manga o anime, quizás no entiendas o te parezcan irrazonables algunos personajes, pero es parte de su esencia y también por su trasfondo. 5. Antecedentes del mundo: Es un fanfic, he decidido ponerle cinco estrellas para no afecte tanto, además es difícil encontrar un buen fanfic de Blue Lock. Peca en la falta de actualizaciones
The story is good, the characters are also successfully captured and not even mad about the 'handsome' cliche because Kira was already famous, the powers of thunder breathing are also amazing and nicely integrated but the only problem is the OPness. So I'm in chapter 80 and here's the breakdown of MC's cheats: 1. Total Concentration breathing: World-class body, stamina, reflexes (he even won against physical confrontation against the world 5) 2. 1st Form: Gives Explosiveness to dash, kick, jump, etc. (Faster than or equal to Loki, jump higher than tallest players, kick balls that can dent metal) 3. Training room: A virtual training room where the user can train for 1 hour/10 points, where time in real-world stops and user does not experience any fatigue (this increases his training time 2 to 3 times) {Bullshit but I tolerated it} 4. 2nd Form: Allows the user to move the ball around faster + gives extensive knowledge about dribble (Megura Ultra Pro Max and his best counter) {This is where my problem starts it should not give knowledge about anything other than the breathing techniques} 5. 3rd Form: Allows the user to have the ability to do curve shots + knowledge of curve shots (Better than Rin, Yukihima plus he can add 1st form to it) 6. Transparent world: Spatial awareness + Ability to read all muscle movements and intents in the vision (So like Isagi's, Rin's or Sae's vision)
This fanfic is good! Can you do Ao Ashi fanfic too? where ashito get reincarnated in the past or someone got reincoarnatedin the story? it'll be good
Muito bom mas porque parou de lançar........................................................................................................................................
The tl was amazing.. after reading the original version I realized how much work the author did in translating the words properly and using proper grammer. The original version was unreadable, the plot here on webnovel is so much better due to the tl work. Pity it wasn’t completed.. now I have to read og version.. smh
It's a cringe-fic that children of 10 or 11 will enjoy. I don't know how it has many 5 star reviews, perhaps they're from kids.
AUTHOR ITS BEEN A MONTH AND I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG AT THIS POINT you leave us readers a cliffhanger and on one month hiatus so im giving a 5 stars and leave this magnificent fanfin that i thought was the original for some days so i hope you update it so cya
droped? ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I'm so glad I let this sauce simmer and wait for a 100+ chapters, good job on translating it, kinda bummed that I didn't wait till 110 chapters.
Aye this is great but the Kira glazing in the beginning was starting to worry me
it is good until U-20. I don't even know if kira is still the mc or isagi. Isagi suddenly has unlimited stamina to use metavision for long periods even though he is using it for the first time and his stamina is not that good compared to the Neo Egoist League arc when he unlocked MV for the first time in the manga. It's still a good read to pas time though.
I think the author sabotaged himself by making Kira able to defend and attack at the same time. There is no more suspense in the matches, even against the U20s.
sigh it has become a boring novel, where whenever kira is included he always wins... you can confidently bet all your money on kira being on top... this dude can defend and attack at the same time.... there is no suspense remaining in the matches that author writes cause at the end of the day kira is gonna carry the whole mfing team and win all of the matches regardless of impossible situations finds himself in...
Keep it up, the story is very good, the character development and the plot are very good. There is nothing I complain about, I don't give you five stars because nothing is perfect and there is still a big margin of improvement
Keep up the good work bro! you did a fantastic job at translating [img=recommend] Definitely recommend this blue lock fic, the best in my opinion.
A really good fanfic. It was one of my favorite sport fanfic that I binge read this till my eyes started heating up. Mc was a good but not too good, he act like any normal person would do Infront of arrogant people; Not bow your head or be intimidated. The story progression was quite good, the pacing was slow but not too slow. Good side characters that act as they were in thier original series or anime. Overall, 4.4.
Best blue lock fanfic ever, i have such a great time reading this! ........................................................................................................................................................................
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its good, but at some point you are gonna get sick of seeing kira always win and being always one step ahead, im currently at chp 73 and i think i got how the rest of the story will go "kira upgrades, X person starts talkimg shit, kira destroys them with out breaking a sweat, and x says "oh no omg he is a monster!!" fin, but the writing is very good. i really like the fact that kira has a life outside blue lock, its a really good detail.
Es buena, demasiado buena diría yo... pero no hay actualizaciones... todo termina desde el arco de U-20 ... y ugh... quiero actualizaciones. 1. Calidad de la escritura: Lo leo doblado, así que no puedo decir mucho, pero al menos no parece una mala traducción que cambian nombres, cosas, etc.. 2.Estabilidad de las actualizaciones: Al menos no ha actualizado hace 5 meses... terrible... 3. Desarrollo de la historia: Aunque sigue la trama, da giros y tiende a ser más original que otros fanfics que son una copia. Además tiene algunos cruces con otras series de Spokon, así que genial. 4. Diseño de los personajes: Aunque me gustaría que tuvieran más trasfondo los personajes secundarios y no estuviesen limitados a lo que se dice del anime, es decir actualmente ya se conoce el trasfondo de algunos personajes, sus motivaciones y su forma de actuar, así que faltaría un poco más allí. Conclusión: Deficiente en los secundarios, pero debido a que se conoce por el canon, se complementa y al cumplir siendo un fanfic, no duele leerlo. Si no has visto el manga o anime, quizás no entiendas o te parezcan irrazonables algunos personajes, pero es parte de su esencia y también por su trasfondo. 5. Antecedentes del mundo: Es un fanfic, he decidido ponerle cinco estrellas para no afecte tanto, además es difícil encontrar un buen fanfic de Blue Lock. Peca en la falta de actualizaciones
The story is good, the characters are also successfully captured and not even mad about the 'handsome' cliche because Kira was already famous, the powers of thunder breathing are also amazing and nicely integrated but the only problem is the OPness. So I'm in chapter 80 and here's the breakdown of MC's cheats: 1. Total Concentration breathing: World-class body, stamina, reflexes (he even won against physical confrontation against the world 5) 2. 1st Form: Gives Explosiveness to dash, kick, jump, etc. (Faster than or equal to Loki, jump higher than tallest players, kick balls that can dent metal) 3. Training room: A virtual training room where the user can train for 1 hour/10 points, where time in real-world stops and user does not experience any fatigue (this increases his training time 2 to 3 times) {Bullshit but I tolerated it} 4. 2nd Form: Allows the user to move the ball around faster + gives extensive knowledge about dribble (Megura Ultra Pro Max and his best counter) {This is where my problem starts it should not give knowledge about anything other than the breathing techniques} 5. 3rd Form: Allows the user to have the ability to do curve shots + knowledge of curve shots (Better than Rin, Yukihima plus he can add 1st form to it) 6. Transparent world: Spatial awareness + Ability to read all muscle movements and intents in the vision (So like Isagi's, Rin's or Sae's vision)
This fanfic is good! Can you do Ao Ashi fanfic too? where ashito get reincarnated in the past or someone got reincoarnatedin the story? it'll be good
Muito bom mas porque parou de lançar........................................................................................................................................
The tl was amazing.. after reading the original version I realized how much work the author did in translating the words properly and using proper grammer. The original version was unreadable, the plot here on webnovel is so much better due to the tl work. Pity it wasn’t completed.. now I have to read og version.. smh
It's a cringe-fic that children of 10 or 11 will enjoy. I don't know how it has many 5 star reviews, perhaps they're from kids.
AUTHOR ITS BEEN A MONTH AND I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG AT THIS POINT you leave us readers a cliffhanger and on one month hiatus so im giving a 5 stars and leave this magnificent fanfin that i thought was the original for some days so i hope you update it so cya
droped? ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I'm so glad I let this sauce simmer and wait for a 100+ chapters, good job on translating it, kinda bummed that I didn't wait till 110 chapters.
Aye this is great but the Kira glazing in the beginning was starting to worry me
it is good until U-20. I don't even know if kira is still the mc or isagi. Isagi suddenly has unlimited stamina to use metavision for long periods even though he is using it for the first time and his stamina is not that good compared to the Neo Egoist League arc when he unlocked MV for the first time in the manga. It's still a good read to pas time though.
I think the author sabotaged himself by making Kira able to defend and attack at the same time. There is no more suspense in the matches, even against the U20s.
sigh it has become a boring novel, where whenever kira is included he always wins... you can confidently bet all your money on kira being on top... this dude can defend and attack at the same time.... there is no suspense remaining in the matches that author writes cause at the end of the day kira is gonna carry the whole mfing team and win all of the matches regardless of impossible situations finds himself in...
Keep it up, the story is very good, the character development and the plot are very good. There is nothing I complain about, I don't give you five stars because nothing is perfect and there is still a big margin of improvement
Keep up the good work bro! you did a fantastic job at translating [img=recommend] Definitely recommend this blue lock fic, the best in my opinion.
A really good fanfic. It was one of my favorite sport fanfic that I binge read this till my eyes started heating up. Mc was a good but not too good, he act like any normal person would do Infront of arrogant people; Not bow your head or be intimidated. The story progression was quite good, the pacing was slow but not too slow. Good side characters that act as they were in thier original series or anime. Overall, 4.4.
Best blue lock fanfic ever, i have such a great time reading this! ........................................................................................................................................................................
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it is good a bit cringy but I enjoy it wish there was more