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shout out to all the imbeciles complaining about bots in the reviews.Now I have to spend my time reading shi to give a good review.
the only problem for me right now is, i hardly can imagine and remember how mc looks, it was rarely stated
Twisted logics which benefits mc but normal logic when done same by others ................................................................................................................................................................
This is definitely the best Bleach fanfic that I've ever read! Although there are some grammar mistakes here and there, they are few and don't affect the feel and flow of the story at all. The only regret I have is: Why did I have to find this fanfic now that it only have 221 chapters and not in a few months when it is completed??
The story is good but the ending is horrible. I started not liking the mc not much towards the end cause he started to just sit back and watch stuff happen. Like he let’s ichigo still use final getshuga even though he reforged zangestu early. The only thing that really changed is that gin didn’t die. He goes to fate/zero and becomes berserker. That side thing was the only interesting thing in 100 or so chapters to the end (518). I won’t spoil bigger stuff like what specifically happened but after Ywach is defeated, he just leaves the world and it ends there.
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There are quite a few people giving this book a low rating because they think bots are rating this book too high. I don't know if there actually are bots in the reviews but I personally enjoyed this book. There is an interesting plot, the MC is likable and quite OP, the writing quality is good, the romance is nice and wholesome and there are no obvious flaws or plot holes. So overall this book is one of the better fanfic i have read on this platform and I would recommend this to any bleach fan searching for a good story.
I always like it when authors insert characters with the power to guide the story. In this case, the mc became Byakuya's uncle by marrying his aunt. The writing is not bad, by Webnovel standards. I like the way some characters change too. The following is my major point against it. He is strong and has a lot of influence. I liked it up to the point where he let Hisana die, even though he could've healed her, because he 'shipped,' author's words, Byakuya and Rukia better. It was forced, and I felt like Byakuya deserved better. Byakuya treats you as an uncle and respects you, yet you let the love of his life die because you preferred ByakuyaxRukia fanfics. What is the point of such a character if you will leave important things like that unchanged, especially if you've warmed up to Byakuya as his uncle. The author doing this for such a stupid reason cheapens the mc choices for me. If you don't care who Byakuya ends up with or want him with Rukia, this may be an OK fanfic for you.
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Alright! Boom! Review! Writing as of 177. Not gonna sugar coat it, it was pretty bad in the beginning, like MTL bad ngl, until for some reason(or I'm just buggin and trippin out) the quality the quality just seemingly got a shot tin better at like round 100~120 cuz that's about where I left of for a while cuz ya boi had exams (around May-June). The book shifted from 'What is MC gonna do' to 'What are people the MC are doing', very refreshing. If you just reading the book uhhhhh... Good luck, it's gonna be a long ride, and for those just reading reviews, y'all are weird. GG
I liked it a lot good read. Good story and character development I just want to Thank you for creating this piece of art. Not a Bot Ch161
Will the main character be with Yoruichi? Will there be a harem?????????????????????harem?????????????????????????????????????????????........
decent story. translation decent. only thing, power level inconsistent. would set Mc to a certain level then later on lower his to level create more plot. it's a constant theme in this fanfic
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I like this fanfic. though in this and the original I wonder if soul society and the gotei patrol the entire planet or if other spiritual factions exist as if they only cover Japan then that leaves the question of who covers the rest of the world and the size of soul society as I assume it should be as large as earth or a little smaller
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I Love the story but when it came to the "trapped aizen" portion of the story i didnt like the idea, good thing you released him. Not really a fan of super master minds doing everything in the story. thats all i have to say, overall great novel
Spoiler enthüllen shout out to all the imbeciles complaining about bots in the reviews.Now I have to spend my time reading shi to give a good review.
the only problem for me right now is, i hardly can imagine and remember how mc looks, it was rarely stated
Twisted logics which benefits mc but normal logic when done same by others ................................................................................................................................................................
This is definitely the best Bleach fanfic that I've ever read! Although there are some grammar mistakes here and there, they are few and don't affect the feel and flow of the story at all. The only regret I have is: Why did I have to find this fanfic now that it only have 221 chapters and not in a few months when it is completed??
The story is good but the ending is horrible. I started not liking the mc not much towards the end cause he started to just sit back and watch stuff happen. Like he let’s ichigo still use final getshuga even though he reforged zangestu early. The only thing that really changed is that gin didn’t die. He goes to fate/zero and becomes berserker. That side thing was the only interesting thing in 100 or so chapters to the end (518). I won’t spoil bigger stuff like what specifically happened but after Ywach is defeated, he just leaves the world and it ends there.
Spoiler enthüllen There are quite a few people giving this book a low rating because they think bots are rating this book too high. I don't know if there actually are bots in the reviews but I personally enjoyed this book. There is an interesting plot, the MC is likable and quite OP, the writing quality is good, the romance is nice and wholesome and there are no obvious flaws or plot holes. So overall this book is one of the better fanfic i have read on this platform and I would recommend this to any bleach fan searching for a good story.
I always like it when authors insert characters with the power to guide the story. In this case, the mc became Byakuya's uncle by marrying his aunt. The writing is not bad, by Webnovel standards. I like the way some characters change too. The following is my major point against it. He is strong and has a lot of influence. I liked it up to the point where he let Hisana die, even though he could've healed her, because he 'shipped,' author's words, Byakuya and Rukia better. It was forced, and I felt like Byakuya deserved better. Byakuya treats you as an uncle and respects you, yet you let the love of his life die because you preferred ByakuyaxRukia fanfics. What is the point of such a character if you will leave important things like that unchanged, especially if you've warmed up to Byakuya as his uncle. The author doing this for such a stupid reason cheapens the mc choices for me. If you don't care who Byakuya ends up with or want him with Rukia, this may be an OK fanfic for you.
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Alright! Boom! Review! Writing as of 177. Not gonna sugar coat it, it was pretty bad in the beginning, like MTL bad ngl, until for some reason(or I'm just buggin and trippin out) the quality the quality just seemingly got a shot tin better at like round 100~120 cuz that's about where I left of for a while cuz ya boi had exams (around May-June). The book shifted from 'What is MC gonna do' to 'What are people the MC are doing', very refreshing. If you just reading the book uhhhhh... Good luck, it's gonna be a long ride, and for those just reading reviews, y'all are weird. GG
I liked it a lot good read. Good story and character development I just want to Thank you for creating this piece of art. Not a Bot Ch161
Will the main character be with Yoruichi? Will there be a harem?????????????????????harem?????????????????????????????????????????????........
decent story. translation decent. only thing, power level inconsistent. would set Mc to a certain level then later on lower his to level create more plot. it's a constant theme in this fanfic
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I like this fanfic. though in this and the original I wonder if soul society and the gotei patrol the entire planet or if other spiritual factions exist as if they only cover Japan then that leaves the question of who covers the rest of the world and the size of soul society as I assume it should be as large as earth or a little smaller
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I Love the story but when it came to the "trapped aizen" portion of the story i didnt like the idea, good thing you released him. Not really a fan of super master minds doing everything in the story. thats all i have to say, overall great novel
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