This Wizard is So Unscientific!

hey mate, this is my review there are three points that I find problematic the first things the energy system is not explained at all We all know about the tree, the saplings and the tight but what does that mean give us guidelines or a basic building block for the energy system so we can build from there. My second issue is the flow of the story, the story doesn't hook you in the way it's supposed to, there's something missing when the story starts usually there's a mystery or a shocking event, it makes you want to know more but this story is flat and there's no application and flow to it. There's very weak, almost no world building and if there is world building it's completely confusing, I'm telling you the story has a lot of information missing. We don’t know what happened to the protagonist before he came to this world and we missed the protagonist after hit my transmigrated for awhile. I feel like the author wanted the story to be mysterious but it went down the wrong path and became very confusing for no good reason. The mystery is supposed to be knowledge or something that we or the protagonist themselves weren't supposed to know until later in the story there was a little bit of a hint here and there to guide you in the right direction but in this story even basic information is missing and that doesn't make a mystery, that makes confusion. this writing style will be good if this story is an offshoot of another story or even a fanfiction because he has the reader already know the fact the base the building block of the world itself but this is a new story, a new building and your giving us very small amount of basic knowledge and expect us to follow your ideas and don’t get confused or at least this is the conclusion I came up with after 25 chapters I don’t know if it will become better and more elaborate or I’m missing the explanation that’s supposed to come in the next five or maybe 10 chapters but I’m not going to pay for a story thet didn’t attract me and make me hooked in the first couple of chapters. One of my favourites author says if you want to write a story you have to focus on the three-point the beginning supposed to be shocking or mysterious to attract the reader the middle supposed to have a peak and a trough so the story don’t become flat or boring and the end, supposed to end with boom. the idea behind the story is good however the execution may need a little bit of tweaking and that’s all for me good luck in your endeavours