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- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
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One thing to take note of is that too much writing can be a detriment to immersion, not every block of text has to be 2-4 sentences of over-specified lengthy information. Keep things concise and clear to read, extra fluff will just hold back on the readability of your work when the plot is something akin to a progression fantasy. Touhou is my favorite franchise so I’m looking forward to see if you’re any good in giving the characters the breath of life they deserve.
it's well done, and a green miko instead of the red one as the first encounter is pretty unique... please i beg you don't drop this like every other touhou one😭😭😭😭
One thing to take note of is that too much writing can be a detriment to immersion, not every block of text has to be 2-4 sentences of over-specified lengthy information. Keep things concise and clear to read, extra fluff will just hold back on the readability of your work when the plot is something akin to a progression fantasy. Touhou is my favorite franchise so I’m looking forward to see if you’re any good in giving the characters the breath of life they deserve.
it's well done, and a green miko instead of the red one as the first encounter is pretty unique... please i beg you don't drop this like every other touhou one😭😭😭😭