Not a Spider, But a Dragon

LV 1

DarthFalcon

I think the only problem is that MC has dragon genes but is still the same Peter.There is little to no character development. MC accepts everything and looks like a system slave.It's still the same nonsense that with great power comes great responsibility, spiders in all multiverses have already lost their loved ones because of this saying.

LV 2

TrueFool

Childish.............................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

DRAGONS_EYE

Shameless Author's review. This is my first story I am writing seriously. As such, I ask all of my readers to give it a try. This story will show you Peter Parker in a completely different form which you have never seen before. Hope you like it!

LV 4

Troy145

i am sorry but most of the time while reading the story it feels like he is only thinking like an idiot, getting pushed around while having those powers and have no change of mind after being a dragon, it feels like mc is just a pet for everyone to talk about his looks only, no real contribution to the story

LV 4

adil_Ell

This story has a lot of potential but its the way the story goed feels dead.

LV 3

Jetmach

It's a good story but he like many others, he joins some organization (shield, x-men, whatever). Does no one say no anymore? I will probably come back to the story eventually, but just once I would like someone to say no and then go on a rampage when they push it. Anyway, enjoy.

LV 4

multiverses_sage

it's good but I need more chapters to know what is going on . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 2

Victor_Adiogo

It has a lot of potential, but it is very painful to read, the dialogues don't seem natural and expository, not to mention that it seems to treat the reader like an idiot for always repeating information.

LV 14

TBJ5K

Has so much potential, but the way that you write makes me feel braindead, you explain what obviously just happened. Only reason I'm not dissing it too bad is because it's a good plot, which is the sad reality of most fics. Good plot, bad writing.

LV 6

MagikarpBombado

poderia ter sido uma boa novel. Mas, como muitas boas ideias por aí, sofreu de uma péssima execução. possuindo um protagonista completamente juvenil, que sai falando dos segredos e sociedades secretas aos sete ventos, claro, além das decisões tomadas sem noção nenhuma... Bem, desejo boa sorte para o autor e que contanto que tenha leitores, continue com seu trabalho e seu público alvo.

LV 4

No_Mans_english

when does the training ark end my guy I'm to pull a curt Cobain its been 20 chapter

LV 3

Runawayy_

The best thing I've read about the Marvel universe. I hope you won't give up this job. The plot is enticing, the story is perfectly worked out, the characters seem alive, and the expectation of new chapters is painful. From what confused me, it's what you plan to do with the work, adding elements from different franchises besides the Marvel universe.

LV 3

kosyrex

The story is very good, the only bad thing is that the chapters are very short in my opinion.

LV 14

Michael_Haggard_1112

I enjoy your book very much I love how you went outside box in your writing so please keep writing

LV 14

Thomsonandrew5235

You went from between arcs too quickly it was like you just start enjoying an arc and you are are in another one

LV 1

Henzy_5477

It's quite a solid story. The flow of the story is pretty stable and it seldom feels like it'd going too fast or too slow. The only complaints I have is that the chapters are rather small, and that the dialogue needs more work since it feels pretty stiff a lot of the time.

LV 4

_Igor

Great fanfic even if the chaps are a lil short but its pretty intresting from when ive been at chap 23......................................