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Hi! The author here! I believe the story is not getting enough attention. So, I will tell you a bit about the story. As you can see from the novel synopsis, there are four main characters: Tom, Cacey, the homeless man, and the Syndicate. First, we see two teenagers, Tom and Cacey. Tom is being bullied every day. He does not fight back because he does not want to create problems for his dad, who is proud of his family name and status. So, it's not that he cannot fight back; he chooses not to fight back. He wants to be loved and noticed by his father. But that never happens. Cacey, on the other hand, is a very timid and unbelievably beautiful girl. She is a very talented student, too. However, she is being wrongfully misunderstood by people in each of her past schools. She always has to transfer from one school to another, as living peacefully becomes really hard for her. Everyone notices her beauty with either love or hate and jealousy. She never does anything to anyone. The homeless man Edward is a very mysterious man with strange powers. He talks about a strange world, Aboron, in another dimension. Everyone has a chance to change themselves, but they must fulfill some conditions, which he never reveals. The Syndicate is an underground society of students from very powerful families who play gods on earth and have the power to control the lives of people. This heinous group controls the high school where Tom and Cacey go. This group is disgustingly resourceful and can render your effort to establish justice ineffective. At first, we see Tom and Cacey's troubled lives. We then explore their inner thoughts and their teenage efforts to run away from their problems. In the meantime, mysterious things keep happening to them. Their way of life suddenly changes after Tom and Cacey go on a trip, taking a voluntary leave of absence from their school. It was their way of avoiding the truth and the troubles of their lives. We will explore their inner fears and thoughts. Things start to happen quickly when Tom and Cacey come back from their trip. The events that followed quickly prepared them for their transmigration to the mysterious world of Aboron. I won't say anymore here. Otherwise, it will be no fun!!! If you have any questions, you can ask me here. I will really be happy to see some interactions. Every writer adores it when readers read and appreciate their work. I, too, would be happy to talk to you about my story. But I won't give you any spoilers. You are always welcome to ask questions. Happy reading!!
Not my type of story. But it surely was a fun read. The author is a good writer. He made it really easy to read. I really felt a rollercoaster of emotions while reading this story.
The description of characters is good and the story has a good background ,I am looking forward to further developments to this story.
The emotions rollercoaster of love, loss and self-discovery really do a good job of gripping one's attention to this work. From what I've seen the world of Aboron is thoughtfully crafted leaving me at the edge of my seat. When you pick this up expect some unexpected twists and turns.
I think it's a good story, a lot of things I have learned from it. The plot is good and I like how the author used references. Keep writing, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
It is true that I have only three chapters, but the writing style, and the way of presenting the novel captivates from the first line, the prologue is appreciated where they introduce us to the world in which we are going to spend our time between increasingly better story lines. on every step. I liked it a lot, greetings
The characters are well thought out, each with their own goals and flaws, making them relatable. Their interactions feel genuine and add an emotional layer to the narrative.
This novel is well written, though I don't typically read genres like this yet, I binge read, and this novel has potential, keep up the good work author! Added this to my library!
A well written book that can really catch the interest of its readers with very intriguing characters and story development... Can't wait for more updates and for it to catch up to where I have last read it.
i did not expect this story to be this interesting. I won't give any spoilers, but if you think this story is boring just because of a few initial chapters, then you are simply missing something really worth reading. The first volume is getting really tense. What will happen to the duo? Writer, please, keep up the good work.
Hi! The author here! I believe the story is not getting enough attention. So, I will tell you a bit about the story. As you can see from the novel synopsis, there are four main characters: Tom, Cacey, the homeless man, and the Syndicate. First, we see two teenagers, Tom and Cacey. Tom is being bullied every day. He does not fight back because he does not want to create problems for his dad, who is proud of his family name and status. So, it's not that he cannot fight back; he chooses not to fight back. He wants to be loved and noticed by his father. But that never happens. Cacey, on the other hand, is a very timid and unbelievably beautiful girl. She is a very talented student, too. However, she is being wrongfully misunderstood by people in each of her past schools. She always has to transfer from one school to another, as living peacefully becomes really hard for her. Everyone notices her beauty with either love or hate and jealousy. She never does anything to anyone. The homeless man Edward is a very mysterious man with strange powers. He talks about a strange world, Aboron, in another dimension. Everyone has a chance to change themselves, but they must fulfill some conditions, which he never reveals. The Syndicate is an underground society of students from very powerful families who play gods on earth and have the power to control the lives of people. This heinous group controls the high school where Tom and Cacey go. This group is disgustingly resourceful and can render your effort to establish justice ineffective. At first, we see Tom and Cacey's troubled lives. We then explore their inner thoughts and their teenage efforts to run away from their problems. In the meantime, mysterious things keep happening to them. Their way of life suddenly changes after Tom and Cacey go on a trip, taking a voluntary leave of absence from their school. It was their way of avoiding the truth and the troubles of their lives. We will explore their inner fears and thoughts. Things start to happen quickly when Tom and Cacey come back from their trip. The events that followed quickly prepared them for their transmigration to the mysterious world of Aboron. I won't say anymore here. Otherwise, it will be no fun!!! If you have any questions, you can ask me here. I will really be happy to see some interactions. Every writer adores it when readers read and appreciate their work. I, too, would be happy to talk to you about my story. But I won't give you any spoilers. You are always welcome to ask questions. Happy reading!!
Not my type of story. But it surely was a fun read. The author is a good writer. He made it really easy to read. I really felt a rollercoaster of emotions while reading this story.
The description of characters is good and the story has a good background ,I am looking forward to further developments to this story.
The emotions rollercoaster of love, loss and self-discovery really do a good job of gripping one's attention to this work. From what I've seen the world of Aboron is thoughtfully crafted leaving me at the edge of my seat. When you pick this up expect some unexpected twists and turns.
I think it's a good story, a lot of things I have learned from it. The plot is good and I like how the author used references. Keep writing, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
It is true that I have only three chapters, but the writing style, and the way of presenting the novel captivates from the first line, the prologue is appreciated where they introduce us to the world in which we are going to spend our time between increasingly better story lines. on every step. I liked it a lot, greetings
The characters are well thought out, each with their own goals and flaws, making them relatable. Their interactions feel genuine and add an emotional layer to the narrative.
This novel is well written, though I don't typically read genres like this yet, I binge read, and this novel has potential, keep up the good work author! Added this to my library!
A well written book that can really catch the interest of its readers with very intriguing characters and story development... Can't wait for more updates and for it to catch up to where I have last read it.
i did not expect this story to be this interesting. I won't give any spoilers, but if you think this story is boring just because of a few initial chapters, then you are simply missing something really worth reading. The first volume is getting really tense. What will happen to the duo? Writer, please, keep up the good work.