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the main character stay a "baby" for most of the story. I sont know whats the appealed to that but hey I am not judging anyway the story is okay with some questioning plot hole like how everyone seem to be okay with him being a baby anyway its up to you guys if you want to read it and experience it for yourself.
Awesome story bro! It's nice to see a few things in this world like people from Star Wars and DC as summons and stuff.
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Nice novel, I always expect something new that will surprise me............................................................................................
I like how you have the story planned out, I'm interested to see if you give him time to grow and improve the kingdom or have him fight the antagonist at 10 years old. Cause the latter is not something I'm very fond of, I'm mainly here to read a good kingdom building novel. Everything else is just a bonus in my personal opinion.
The only problem i have with this work is....not enough chapters!!!...... otherwise it's awesome.....such a good story👍👍
i only read the first chapter and i recommend this to you fellow readers and hope you enjoy this novel as much as i loved it.
everything else is awesome just need regular updates. I'm still waiting for the next chapter.ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
the main character stay a "baby" for most of the story. I sont know whats the appealed to that but hey I am not judging anyway the story is okay with some questioning plot hole like how everyone seem to be okay with him being a baby anyway its up to you guys if you want to read it and experience it for yourself.
Awesome story bro! It's nice to see a few things in this world like people from Star Wars and DC as summons and stuff.
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Nice novel, I always expect something new that will surprise me............................................................................................
I like how you have the story planned out, I'm interested to see if you give him time to grow and improve the kingdom or have him fight the antagonist at 10 years old. Cause the latter is not something I'm very fond of, I'm mainly here to read a good kingdom building novel. Everything else is just a bonus in my personal opinion.
The only problem i have with this work is....not enough chapters!!!...... otherwise it's awesome.....such a good story👍👍
i only read the first chapter and i recommend this to you fellow readers and hope you enjoy this novel as much as i loved it.
everything else is awesome just need regular updates. I'm still waiting for the next chapter.ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss