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The world building, game, characters are all amazing but the MC alone makes me want to quit reading this. The MC is incredibly dumb and never even tries to improve. While he seems like a "genius" in combat skills, he is an idiot in pretty much everything else and there are many chapters in which I wish he actually suffered consequences (like death) for his actions but the plot armor always works his way.
Alright I’m a chapter 150 something and this novel has been really good so far except for the mc Leo. I mean wtf why is the mc a literal man child. Like he’s mentally challenged . Some one please tell me he gets smarter later on Spoilers: And for the people wondering what I mean by man child and retarted. One he tells them his main weapon clueing them into who he is. If he can’t reveal what his character is why not lie or misdirect them by saying he an archer or uses a sword or something. Another example is when he decided to go on a date while being hunted down by assassin when he could have come up with an excuses to not meet his gf and brother. Another example is when the second ranked suspected he was a fraud for not being lvl 100. If he knew or at least suspected that every milestone makes an announcement why didn’t he lvl up faster. He can kill enemies way higher leveled than he is he could have power leveled himself to 100. Instead he let someone else get it almost compromising his class and dying💀. Overall the mc makes Terrible decision and I’m not even gonna go into his anger issues 💀
Pretty fucking mid. Weak to strong with overpowered tag plus misunderstanding erm dude that's not how tags work... It's either he is not overpowered therefore get rid of the tag. And he works his way up so it's a weaktostrong not overpowered from start with misunderstanding for this reason I'm lowering it by 1 star overall since u fucked up the tags
Good book, fun read. Some arcs are a little slow or out of place, but has some serious potential.
Honest Review: This some good soup. I'm not too much of a fan of the multiple MC's, though we can clearly tell Leo is the main one. That being said, the story is top tier and worth the time.
First novel from this author I could stomach to read. Though there were a few problems in the first few chapters…
This author is great, both with his previous mmorpg stories as well as this one. Deserves all the glaze.
It’s a pretty good novel. I’ve been following your stories for a while now and you have yet to disappoint. Now this is not some Pultizer Prize level novel, but I would don’t think anybody expects it to be. I can tell that you have been inspired by RSSG and the like and have put a very interesting twist on an otherwise over saturated and cliche genre. Keep up the good work!
My opinion is based on about 350 chapters read. In many places, there is a lack of logical sequence, tense and rushed situations, lack of realism. It seems that the relatively original basis of the story is full of clichés that we have seen in other novels. I don't know why the authors think that when the story is not written in the best light for the main character, it will not be liked by the audience, I would say the opposite is people like different. Reverend Insanity is the model to follow, of flawed but realistic characters who screw up, their loved ones die, and their reasoning can be quite illogical. I skipped almost all the chapters where there were secondary and tertiary characters. I am not saying that it is the author's fault that he widens the horizons he describes in order to enrich the color of the novel. But the inability to create living images in our consciousness is noticeable, since in their very genesis they resemble each other and their characters are very superficially described. I will recommend the author to read, the most colorful and diverse fantasy series that even lacks the concept of a main character, Steven Erickson's Malazan Book of the Dead.
I saw an idea. I saw a seed bloom and grow rapidly from a stumbling sapling to the absolute world tree that it is. The growth of characters, the continuous progression, the consistency to the world building and absolutely everything else and finally the character development. It’s magnificent. I do admit there are flaws in character, they most times seem like regression or a stagnation, but what makes a human? The multiple POV’s, the thoughts of others towards him, their own growth. The slow and methodical introduction of side characters, I absolutely cannot forget them all. When this is all said and done, this book gave me hope that Webnovel isn’t dying. Arigatto Author-san
Power dynamic in this novel is utterly messed up. I understand that Leo is the MC but how is it that Ben being an assassin can literally 1v1 other fighters head on. I feel like Luke barely got any character development or the progress that he could have gotten. We can clearly see that he is good at martial arts and close combat but there is no improvemt on it. How did this man place top 2 in the tournament early on yet not have a single good teacher or master. This kinda makes Leo out of place in the entire novel. I’m at ch 600, and going back to what Luke saw from this knight advancement package, it is super flawed. It gave Luke no help on his advancement to being a master much less grandmaster. From every single player only Leo was taught by a master, Ben, regardless of talent.
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I have been reading this from the start gotta say what an amazing story. Give it a shot has a little something in it for everyone trust me.
this book is like magic for mind, the more you read and more you want. you are never full by reading this book yet your mind gets unsaid peace by reading it. for me it's like i am a part of this book and it's not fantasy it's real.
great one I guess ... superb build up . It's the kind you can follow and immerse yourself in
As the story goes on the chapters become shorter and shorter at least that's my impression and kinda feeling it by looking at the scrollbar length. The story itself is at the point where it's being filled with something to pass the time gap between some important events so lately i wasn't enjoying it as much as at the beginning. Of course overall the book is still good.
Great novel, the only reason it's not 5⭐ for me is the MC. Kinda hate how he can't seem to make decisions without the guidance of others. And also knowing that his survival is at stake, his acting skills seems a bit too low for my taste, he gets rattled easily. I do hope that in the following chapters some character development will happen because from what I've seen he's too dependent on others like being lorded by his brother. Tho I'm still in the 200+ chaps, I'm kinda excited if he indeed had a character development.. If he did, imma change my rating to 5⭐
@Raj_Shah_7152 I have read the novel and the story development is quite good. But it's lacking the character development of the MC he is being said as top of the game and gaining the knowledge about what will happen when he will reach terra nova but the thinking is still childish that even after becoming the master rank he didn't ask the Captian of the ship to give him exposure about the outside world. Knowledge about the culture situation background of the rainbow stream origin and all the history. Even with time skip he didn't seek out to know the knowledge outside the world.
Well to be honest, this book really does well blending all those POVs to make a good novel. All in all this book is great, a must read. Ahem...my problem author is that Leo is an adult who can make his own choices and I don't get why his brother lords it over him when he can make his own decisions. He ain't no child so could you just reduce the part where he must listen to everything his brother says, kind of destroying the story very much for me
Really good 👍 😊, this is a masterpiece of literature. I wish for numerous chapters. Thanks to the author for his taff.😆😆😆. (｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)
I just want to know till what chapter are they gonna be in the ship and from which chapter onwards are they actually on the alien planet ? @author
In the field of MMORPG, Raj is unmatched. I have no words left for this supremacy.
love reading this one, as someone who has read the other novels by this author this one is the best. You can really see the improvement in the writing as time goes on
Mr. round-up figure is here to say that this story is a blast and keeps you waiting for more. Thank u author for writing such an amazing novel.
one of my favorite novels of all time, the thing that diffdifferentiate it from other novels is how it can still make me excited just from it updating
The world building, game, characters are all amazing but the MC alone makes me want to quit reading this. The MC is incredibly dumb and never even tries to improve. While he seems like a "genius" in combat skills, he is an idiot in pretty much everything else and there are many chapters in which I wish he actually suffered consequences (like death) for his actions but the plot armor always works his way.
Alright I’m a chapter 150 something and this novel has been really good so far except for the mc Leo. I mean wtf why is the mc a literal man child. Like he’s mentally challenged . Some one please tell me he gets smarter later on Spoilers: And for the people wondering what I mean by man child and retarted. One he tells them his main weapon clueing them into who he is. If he can’t reveal what his character is why not lie or misdirect them by saying he an archer or uses a sword or something. Another example is when he decided to go on a date while being hunted down by assassin when he could have come up with an excuses to not meet his gf and brother. Another example is when the second ranked suspected he was a fraud for not being lvl 100. If he knew or at least suspected that every milestone makes an announcement why didn’t he lvl up faster. He can kill enemies way higher leveled than he is he could have power leveled himself to 100. Instead he let someone else get it almost compromising his class and dying💀. Overall the mc makes Terrible decision and I’m not even gonna go into his anger issues 💀
Pretty fucking mid. Weak to strong with overpowered tag plus misunderstanding erm dude that's not how tags work... It's either he is not overpowered therefore get rid of the tag. And he works his way up so it's a weaktostrong not overpowered from start with misunderstanding for this reason I'm lowering it by 1 star overall since u fucked up the tags
Good book, fun read. Some arcs are a little slow or out of place, but has some serious potential.
Honest Review: This some good soup. I'm not too much of a fan of the multiple MC's, though we can clearly tell Leo is the main one. That being said, the story is top tier and worth the time.
First novel from this author I could stomach to read. Though there were a few problems in the first few chapters…
This author is great, both with his previous mmorpg stories as well as this one. Deserves all the glaze.
It’s a pretty good novel. I’ve been following your stories for a while now and you have yet to disappoint. Now this is not some Pultizer Prize level novel, but I would don’t think anybody expects it to be. I can tell that you have been inspired by RSSG and the like and have put a very interesting twist on an otherwise over saturated and cliche genre. Keep up the good work!
My opinion is based on about 350 chapters read. In many places, there is a lack of logical sequence, tense and rushed situations, lack of realism. It seems that the relatively original basis of the story is full of clichés that we have seen in other novels. I don't know why the authors think that when the story is not written in the best light for the main character, it will not be liked by the audience, I would say the opposite is people like different. Reverend Insanity is the model to follow, of flawed but realistic characters who screw up, their loved ones die, and their reasoning can be quite illogical. I skipped almost all the chapters where there were secondary and tertiary characters. I am not saying that it is the author's fault that he widens the horizons he describes in order to enrich the color of the novel. But the inability to create living images in our consciousness is noticeable, since in their very genesis they resemble each other and their characters are very superficially described. I will recommend the author to read, the most colorful and diverse fantasy series that even lacks the concept of a main character, Steven Erickson's Malazan Book of the Dead.
I saw an idea. I saw a seed bloom and grow rapidly from a stumbling sapling to the absolute world tree that it is. The growth of characters, the continuous progression, the consistency to the world building and absolutely everything else and finally the character development. It’s magnificent. I do admit there are flaws in character, they most times seem like regression or a stagnation, but what makes a human? The multiple POV’s, the thoughts of others towards him, their own growth. The slow and methodical introduction of side characters, I absolutely cannot forget them all. When this is all said and done, this book gave me hope that Webnovel isn’t dying. Arigatto Author-san
Power dynamic in this novel is utterly messed up. I understand that Leo is the MC but how is it that Ben being an assassin can literally 1v1 other fighters head on. I feel like Luke barely got any character development or the progress that he could have gotten. We can clearly see that he is good at martial arts and close combat but there is no improvemt on it. How did this man place top 2 in the tournament early on yet not have a single good teacher or master. This kinda makes Leo out of place in the entire novel. I’m at ch 600, and going back to what Luke saw from this knight advancement package, it is super flawed. It gave Luke no help on his advancement to being a master much less grandmaster. From every single player only Leo was taught by a master, Ben, regardless of talent.
Spoiler enthüllen I have been reading this from the start gotta say what an amazing story. Give it a shot has a little something in it for everyone trust me.
this book is like magic for mind, the more you read and more you want. you are never full by reading this book yet your mind gets unsaid peace by reading it. for me it's like i am a part of this book and it's not fantasy it's real.
great one I guess ... superb build up . It's the kind you can follow and immerse yourself in
As the story goes on the chapters become shorter and shorter at least that's my impression and kinda feeling it by looking at the scrollbar length. The story itself is at the point where it's being filled with something to pass the time gap between some important events so lately i wasn't enjoying it as much as at the beginning. Of course overall the book is still good.
Great novel, the only reason it's not 5⭐ for me is the MC. Kinda hate how he can't seem to make decisions without the guidance of others. And also knowing that his survival is at stake, his acting skills seems a bit too low for my taste, he gets rattled easily. I do hope that in the following chapters some character development will happen because from what I've seen he's too dependent on others like being lorded by his brother. Tho I'm still in the 200+ chaps, I'm kinda excited if he indeed had a character development.. If he did, imma change my rating to 5⭐
@Raj_Shah_7152 I have read the novel and the story development is quite good. But it's lacking the character development of the MC he is being said as top of the game and gaining the knowledge about what will happen when he will reach terra nova but the thinking is still childish that even after becoming the master rank he didn't ask the Captian of the ship to give him exposure about the outside world. Knowledge about the culture situation background of the rainbow stream origin and all the history. Even with time skip he didn't seek out to know the knowledge outside the world.
Well to be honest, this book really does well blending all those POVs to make a good novel. All in all this book is great, a must read. Ahem...my problem author is that Leo is an adult who can make his own choices and I don't get why his brother lords it over him when he can make his own decisions. He ain't no child so could you just reduce the part where he must listen to everything his brother says, kind of destroying the story very much for me
Really good 👍 😊, this is a masterpiece of literature. I wish for numerous chapters. Thanks to the author for his taff.😆😆😆. (｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)(｡☬０☬｡)
I just want to know till what chapter are they gonna be in the ship and from which chapter onwards are they actually on the alien planet ? @author
In the field of MMORPG, Raj is unmatched. I have no words left for this supremacy.
love reading this one, as someone who has read the other novels by this author this one is the best. You can really see the improvement in the writing as time goes on
Mr. round-up figure is here to say that this story is a blast and keeps you waiting for more. Thank u author for writing such an amazing novel.
one of my favorite novels of all time, the thing that diffdifferentiate it from other novels is how it can still make me excited just from it updating