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Loved the book so far, writing and grammar are good so looking forward for more chapters. Keep it up.
Really good story with a system trait which is very rare and not generic which I like and hop to see how far this story goes. Update stability can be worked on though.
I like the world setting and the amount of detail put into the story so far. The writing is also great! Too bad its only four chapters but I feel this story has potential! Keep it up!
With great hope and "focus" I can somewhat see this becoming a really great story in the future, so I hope that the update stability will not be a great issue.
Loved the book so far, writing and grammar are good so looking forward for more chapters. Keep it up.
Really good story with a system trait which is very rare and not generic which I like and hop to see how far this story goes. Update stability can be worked on though.
I like the world setting and the amount of detail put into the story so far. The writing is also great! Too bad its only four chapters but I feel this story has potential! Keep it up!
With great hope and "focus" I can somewhat see this becoming a really great story in the future, so I hope that the update stability will not be a great issue.
a good read with a fresh take on the system trait, can't wait to see more!