16Rezensionen
3.49
- Qualität des Schreibens
- Veröffentlichungsstabilität
- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
- Welthintergrund
Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen
Schreiben Sie eine Rezension
In short, a story that could be an NTR but because the MC has the plot with him, it won't be, this type of story with this beginning is pathetic
Mega fajny i przyjemny fanfick. Może fabuła nie jest wybitna i powolna ale są w tym + i czekam na wiencej ..........................................
Reading all the chapters released so far, I can say that this story has potential. The only problem is that the author, in my opinion, added some things that left the story unconscious. I understand why the protagonist is a layman at the beginning of the story, having been thrown into another world out of nowhere without his consent, but man, you could have done it better. In I was wondering, his wish was for a hot woman and he had eyes for only one man, who was supposed to be the protagonist, but from what you've shown us of the background so far, it doesn't look like she has eyes for him. Of course, what I said now could be wrong and she could only start to be interested in her now that she really is the protagonist. But even if she didn't like him before and it really was just a contract marriage, I don't think she would let the disrespect towards Damian reach that level, after all, even though they are Aoenas by contract, he is still her husband and he is being Wouldn't being disrespected like that be disrespectful towards her? Regarding his powers, well, he hasn't progressed much yet for me to give my opinion, although I don't find the vampire inside him or the servant of Jesus interesting. Anyway, even with my outburst, I consider that this story and the author have potential, even with some elements of Chinese history in this fic. And I hope the author continues to write this story, because I was very interested in this premise. Sorry for any grammar errors, I wrote using Google Translate.
Spoiler enthüllen
Finally, a dxd fanfic different from the others, bro, your fanfic is good and interesting, thank you for the chapter and please bring more . . . . . . . . .
Guess I wait for 2-5 more chapter if something interesting gonna happen and decide
Ok, this is bad. The MC is an idiot. Instead of try to get stronger he go to he kuo academy to be part of the cannon. He is an adult so why he would do that. Its a waste of time. This world has a lot of things to do instead of being an student because the MC want have more girls. We know that will happen it's obvious. Have two bodies is a bad idea. I particularly don't see a good reason to do that. If you know that you are the weakest devil. Get stronger because he have peaple planning things to hurt him.
Spoiler enthüllen
Dude needs practice but the potential is there so I'd say if this thick gets to 50 chapters read it as it will be better then.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm not going to lie, but I found these two episodes a bit lacking in morals. ..............................................................................................................................
It's not perfect, the MC could have tried to get stronger, but I like it, the author is creative, If you like writing, don't pay attention to what people say.
In short, a story that could be an NTR but because the MC has the plot with him, it won't be, this type of story with this beginning is pathetic
Mega fajny i przyjemny fanfick. Może fabuła nie jest wybitna i powolna ale są w tym + i czekam na wiencej ..........................................
Reading all the chapters released so far, I can say that this story has potential. The only problem is that the author, in my opinion, added some things that left the story unconscious. I understand why the protagonist is a layman at the beginning of the story, having been thrown into another world out of nowhere without his consent, but man, you could have done it better. In I was wondering, his wish was for a hot woman and he had eyes for only one man, who was supposed to be the protagonist, but from what you've shown us of the background so far, it doesn't look like she has eyes for him. Of course, what I said now could be wrong and she could only start to be interested in her now that she really is the protagonist. But even if she didn't like him before and it really was just a contract marriage, I don't think she would let the disrespect towards Damian reach that level, after all, even though they are Aoenas by contract, he is still her husband and he is being Wouldn't being disrespected like that be disrespectful towards her? Regarding his powers, well, he hasn't progressed much yet for me to give my opinion, although I don't find the vampire inside him or the servant of Jesus interesting. Anyway, even with my outburst, I consider that this story and the author have potential, even with some elements of Chinese history in this fic. And I hope the author continues to write this story, because I was very interested in this premise. Sorry for any grammar errors, I wrote using Google Translate.
Spoiler enthüllen Finally, a dxd fanfic different from the others, bro, your fanfic is good and interesting, thank you for the chapter and please bring more . . . . . . . . .
Guess I wait for 2-5 more chapter if something interesting gonna happen and decide
Ok, this is bad. The MC is an idiot. Instead of try to get stronger he go to he kuo academy to be part of the cannon. He is an adult so why he would do that. Its a waste of time. This world has a lot of things to do instead of being an student because the MC want have more girls. We know that will happen it's obvious. Have two bodies is a bad idea. I particularly don't see a good reason to do that. If you know that you are the weakest devil. Get stronger because he have peaple planning things to hurt him.
Spoiler enthüllen Dude needs practice but the potential is there so I'd say if this thick gets to 50 chapters read it as it will be better then.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm not going to lie, but I found these two episodes a bit lacking in morals. ..............................................................................................................................
It's not perfect, the MC could have tried to get stronger, but I like it, the author is creative, If you like writing, don't pay attention to what people say.